chalna sikhaiigi

by nice_off_me on July 01, 2005, 08:35:05 AM
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #15 on: July 06, 2005, 08:36:37 PM »
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thank u harsh ji and gud one!

dard ke badal bhi tam gaye aab,
jo garajte garajte har gaye woh,
kuch nahin luta bas ek dil hi ujra,
aur hume jeete ji mar gaye woh!!
sheesha-e-dil ko torna unkay liye toh khel hai
achha hua  tanhayion ko khud hi chhupaana seekh liya.
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #16 on: July 07, 2005, 12:35:15 AM »
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Buhat  Khoob......................................... Supreb Gr8
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Meena
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«Reply #17 on: July 07, 2005, 03:11:27 PM »
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thank you harsh ji and gud one!

dard ke badal bhi tam gaye aab,
jo garajte garajte har gaye woh,
kuch nahin luta bas ek dil hi ujra,
aur hume jeete ji mar gaye woh!!
sheesha-e-dil ko torna unkay liye toh khel hai
achha hua  tanhayion ko khud hi chhupaana seekh liya.


wow!!

chupa lete sab hi gum, gar ankhen bewafa nahin hoti,
beheta to pani hi hai, par isi me hi bewafa se wafa nahin hoti!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2005, 04:02:39 PM »
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kya baat hai meena ji..bahoot khoob....aankho pe kyuin ilzaam deti ho..ye toh dil ki rahoon main sirf shirkat kerti hai.....

Ibtada hai pyaar ki, palbhar palat kay dekh,
Aankhein jawan hai aapki apni nazer se dekh
tera bana hoon saya Gair nahi hoon 'harsh'
khwaabgah main mere kadam toh rakh kay dekh.



Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "harashmahajan"
Quote from: "Meena"
thank you harsh ji and gud one!

dard ke badal bhi tam gaye aab,
jo garajte garajte har gaye woh,
kuch nahin luta bas ek dil hi ujra,
aur hume jeete ji mar gaye woh!!
sheesha-e-dil ko torna unkay liye toh khel hai
achha hua  tanhayion ko khud hi chhupaana seekh liya.


wow!!

chupa lete sab hi gum, gar ankhen bewafa nahin hoti,
beheta to pani hi hai, par isi me hi bewafa se wafa nahin hoti!
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HumTum
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«Reply #19 on: July 07, 2005, 04:08:54 PM »
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thank you harsh ji and gud one!

dard ke badal bhi tam gaye aab,
jo garajte garajte har gaye woh,
kuch nahin luta bas ek dil hi ujra,
aur hume jeete ji mar gaye woh!!


nice one ....

hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.
na samjho ke mahobbat mein chot khaya hai 'HumTum'
main kehta hun gazal bas aapki wah-waahi ke liye !!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 07, 2005, 04:13:36 PM »
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kya baat hai meena ji..bahoot khoob....aankho pe kyuin ilzaam deti ho..ye toh dil ki rahoon main sirf shirkat kerti hai.....

Ibtada hai pyaar ki, palbhar palat kay dekh,
Aankhein jawan hai aapki apni nazer se dekh
tera bana hoon saya Gair nahi hoon 'harsh'
khwaabgah main mere kadam toh rakh kay dekh.



Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "harashmahajan"
Quote from: "Meena"
thank you harsh ji and gud one!

dard ke badal bhi tam gaye aab,
jo garajte garajte har gaye woh,
kuch nahin luta bas ek dil hi ujra,
aur hume jeete ji mar gaye woh!!
sheesha-e-dil ko torna unkay liye toh khel hai
achha hua  tanhayion ko khud hi chhupaana seekh liya.


wow!!

chupa lete sab hi gum, gar ankhen bewafa nahin hoti,
beheta to pani hi hai, par isi me hi bewafa se wafa nahin hoti!


Harsh ji ...


hamari chahaton ka sila hume mil gya
jo sukha huya tha woh zakhm bhi khil gya

ek nigaah -e- karam thi aap ki hamare liye
yeh nazara bhi aankhon se kab ka chin gya

mujhe nehi thi khabar Ke ranz kya hain
khoob roye the hum jab bhi dil machal gya

ek boond ki pyaas jaise thi mohaabat apni
pathar se ho gye hum jab se dard mil gya !!  
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2005, 04:39:43 PM »
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Wah hum tum ji..main ye toh nahi mesoos ker paaya..ki aapka Zehen kis our se pukaar raha hai.....khatawaar Aahiqon main shumaar hai ya....mashooka GunahGaar hai....per aapki adaayagi bahoot khiley andaaz main hai....bahoot dard likhtey ho....Aapse is mehfil main shirkat kertey hue khoob anad mehsoos hua.....

Dard ko seene se jara hata kay dekho
hamaari chahtoh ko waadion main baha kay dekho
na tum kero gair hame apni herkaton se yuin
hame apni Zulfon kay saaye main bitha kay dekho.
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Amanat kay taur  pe pada mehfooz dil wahi,
ab talak, jahaan chot tum har pal diya kiye.
*********************


Hum tum Wrote....

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Harsh ji ...


hamari chahaton ka sila hume mil gya
jo sukha huya tha woh zakhm bhi khil gya

ek nigaah -e- karam thi aap ki hamare liye
yeh nazara bhi aankhon se kab ka chin gya

mujhe nehi thi khabar Ke ranz kya hain
khoob roye the hum jab bhi dil machal gya

ek boond ki pyaas jaise thi mohaabat apni
pathar se ho gye hum jab se dard mil gya !!
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: July 07, 2005, 05:21:26 PM »
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kya baat hai meena ji..bahoot khoob....aankho pe kyuin ilzaam deti ho..ye toh dil ki rahoon main sirf shirkat kerti hai.....

Ibtada hai pyaar ki, palbhar palat kay dekh,
Aankhein jawan hai aapki apni nazer se dekh
tera bana hoon saya Gair nahi hoon 'harsh'
khwaabgah main mere kadam toh rakh kay dekh.



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hmm gud ji!

khwabon me mile te jo, woh khwab ban ke rehe gaye,
haqiqat-e-judai ke toofan me sare sapno me mahal deh gaye!
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Meena
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«Reply #23 on: July 07, 2005, 05:24:25 PM »
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thank you harsh ji and gud one!

nice one ....

hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.
na samjho ke mahobbat mein chot khaya hai 'HumTum'
main kehta hun gazal bas aapki wah-waahi ke liye !!!


wah ji wah janab!!

teri ghazlo se dard ka duha utha,
yuh laga tere haton se bhi pyar ka daman chuta,
tum na kaho, aye dost, tere ´lafz bolte hai,
ke is bedard duniya ne tume bhi lutha!
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«Reply #24 on: July 07, 2005, 05:30:23 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob, app sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai!!!!!!!!
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HumTum
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«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2005, 01:06:45 PM »
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Wah hum tum ji..main ye toh nahi mesoos ker paaya..ki aapka Zehen kis our se pukaar raha hai.....khatawaar Aahiqon main shumaar hai ya....mashooka GunahGaar hai....per aapki adaayagi bahoot khiley andaaz main hai....bahoot dard likhtey ho....Aapse is mehfil main shirkat kertey hue khoob anad mehsoos hua.....

Dard ko seene se jara hata kay dekho
hamaari chahtoh ko waadion main baha kay dekho
na tum kero gair hame apni herkaton se yuin
hame apni Zulfon kay saaye main bitha kay dekho.
***********************
Amanat kay taur  pe pada mehfooz dil wahi,
ab talak, jahaan chot tum har pal diya kiye.
*********************




Adaab arz hai Harsh Sahab !!  Shukriya ... hamarey likhye chend ashrooN ko pasand kerney ka ...  ab aap yha dard ko htaney ki baat ker rhey ho lekin kya khey sahab dard to allah ne  hamari taqdeer mein likh diya hai !!  khair .. kuch pesh e kidmat hai !!


parwaana-e-dil ko jalne deeje
kaarobaar-e-ishq hai chalne deeje

kya khushi hai kya gham hai
sirf mausam hai, badalne deeje

main kahan thokron se darta hoon
ik zara gir ke sambhalne deeje

shaam-e-zindagi jo kate tanha
is se achha hai, dhalne deeje

na kariye zabt-e-ashq "HumTum"
fughaN-e-abr ko pighalne deeje !!
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«Reply #26 on: July 08, 2005, 01:10:13 PM »
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nice one ....

hum diljalon pe ye sharare yun zaaya na kijiye,
ab nahin kuchh baaki yahan par tabaahi ke liye.
na samjho ke mahobbat mein chot khaya hai 'HumTum'
main kehta hun gazal bas aapki wah-waahi ke liye !!!


wah ji wah janab!!

teri ghazlo se dard ka duha utha,
yuh laga tere haton se bhi pyar ka daman chuta,
tum na kaho, aye dost, tere ´lafz bolte hai,
ke is bedard duniya ne tume bhi lutha!


Meena ji .....

aag seene ki thi jo bujhi woh phir se jawaan kyun hai
yeh poochh-ne ki khata karuuN tu mujhpe meharbaan kyun hai !!!  Winking
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«Reply #27 on: July 08, 2005, 01:11:03 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob, app sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai!!!!!!!!


Shukriya Pooja ji  :D
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«Reply #28 on: July 08, 2005, 03:16:07 PM »
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Meena ji .....

aag seene ki thi jo bujhi woh phir se jawaan kyun hai
yeh poochh-ne ki khata karuuN tu mujhpe meharbaan kyun hai !!!  Winking


lollllllllllllllll

tum bhi tanha ho, hum bhi tanha hai,
aa kuch pal saath chalte hai zindagi ke safar me,
takke hai hum, jane kab saansen rukh jaye,
phir se tanha hojayenge hum apni hi kabar me!
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«Reply #29 on: July 08, 2005, 03:23:10 PM »
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kabar mein to sab ne tanha hi jana hai Meena ji !!

mere hallat ki andhi mein tum bhi bikhar jaogi
sath mere chalogi safar mein to kya paogi
bashinda hoon ranj aur dard ki basti ka
pyaar mujh se jo kiya tumney to kya paogi !!
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