Chalo mil aaye zindagi se

by ahilya on October 15, 2013, 02:41:29 AM
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Udati hui titali se...khilti hui kali se
Ek naya din hai aaya...chalo mil aaye zindagi se

Kiranon ki hatheliyon pe sapne naye sajenge
Jaate hue raahi..ab phir sham ko milenge
Hoga saamna din bhar..
Palkon ki nami se..kabhi hotho ki hasi se
Ek naya din hai aaya..Chalo mil aaye zindagi se

Barso se sambhaali hui yaadon ko..kuch pal ke toofan mai kaise kho dun
Meri zameen andheron ko girwi padi hai..wahan umeedon ki fasal kasie bo dun
Par sochti hun aaj daman bhar lun
Ek diye ki roshni se..thodi si chaandani se
Ek naya din hai aaya..Chalo mil aaye zindagi se
 
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«Reply #1 on: October 15, 2013, 02:52:40 AM »
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Quote from: ahilya on October 15, 2013, 02:41:29 AM
Udati hui titali se...khilti hui kali se
Ek naya din hai aaya...chalo mil aaye zindagi se
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Kiranon ki hatheliyon pe sapne naye sajenge
Jaate hue raahi..ab phir sham ko milenge
Hoga saamna din bhar..
Palkon ki nami se..kabhi hotho ki hasi se
Ek naya din hai aaya..Chalo mil aaye zindagi se
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Barso se sambhaali hui yaadon ko..kuch pal ke toofan mai kaise kho dun
Meri zameen andheron ko girwi padi hai..wahan umeedon ki fasal kasie bo dun
Par sochti hun aaj daman bhar lun
Ek diye ki roshni se..thodi si chaandani se
Ek naya din hai aaya..Chalo mil aaye zindagi se
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wah wah wah ahiliya, ise hi kahte hain positive attitude to enjoy the life icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #2 on: October 15, 2013, 08:17:28 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: October 15, 2013, 10:07:19 AM »
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Bahut badhiya likha hai aapne.

sirf badhiya kahna theek naheen hoga..usse bhi accha

har line me kashish hai..ek poet ko aise hi likhna chaahiye..

i'm really impressed..

God bless you..
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«Reply #4 on: October 15, 2013, 10:37:04 AM »
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ahilya ji , bahot khoobsurat panktiyaan.... bahot accha likha hai aapne.

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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2013, 11:36:25 AM »
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wha wha wha bhut sundar
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2013, 12:00:09 PM »
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wah ahliya ji bohut khub bohut umda likha hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2013, 12:44:14 PM »
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bahut hi pyaari peshkash.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2013, 01:53:30 PM »
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Bahot hi khubsoorat shabdon ka mail.
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2013, 01:57:40 PM »
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Shabdon ka sundar samaagam...  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2013, 03:37:42 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2013, 12:30:03 AM »
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bahut badhiya poetry hai ahilya jee..
Dhero daad deta hun..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2013, 11:32:00 AM »
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Bahut Umda.!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2013, 06:38:50 PM »
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bahut sundar...!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2013, 12:49:14 AM »
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bahut sara shukriya aap sabhi ka sarahne ke liye.... Usual Smile
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