Chand lamhon mein...

by daljeet_faqeer on March 24, 2010, 08:49:49 AM

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Chand lamhon mein ye mausam badal jaata hai,
chahe kaisa bhi ho zakhm aakhir bhar jaata hai.

Koi saath do kadam chalta hai lekin,
kuchh door chalkar raah badal jaata hai.

In haathon ki lakeeron ka kya aitbaar karun,
waqt be waqt khuda bhi mukar jaata hai.

Jaane kaisi ranjish hai teri mujhse ae habib,
dekhta hoon tera chehra to dil behak jaata hai.

Woh laakh bachaye daaman bacha na paaya hai,
parwana ishq mein jalkar hadh se guzar jaata hai.

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Re: Chand lamhon mein...

«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2010, 10:49:51 AM »

Daljeet ji, bahut khoobsoorti se aapne dard bhare ehsaas ko pesh kiya hai. wah wah...


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Re: Chand lamhon mein...

«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2010, 04:27:12 PM »

Daljeet ji achha likha hai aapne. Lekin In haathon ki lakeeron...wala sher theek nahi hai kyonki Khuda ke baare mein aisa kahna ek gustakhi hai aur uski shaan ke khilaaf hai. Aapse guzarish hai ke ise modify kar lijiye.