*Chechak Sareekhe Gaal-Si*

by Roja on May 18, 2008, 05:50:06 AM
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सिर में सफेद बाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी
चेचक सरीखे गाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी

आए तो कैसे रास, मुझको आए  ज़िन्दगी
मकड़ी के बुने जाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी

जनम से जो प्यार की है प्यासी आज तक
सूखे की एक मिसाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी

लपेटने से लाभ नही, जिसको ज़रा भी
तार-तार शाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी

त्राहि के अलावा, ना लिखा कुछ बी भाग्य में
बाद और अकाल  सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी

प्रश्‍न मै कोई भी कभी कर सका ना हल
"रोज़ा" जटिल सवाल-सी, लगती है  ज़िन्दगी
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Sir mein safed baal-si, lagti hai zindagi
Chechak sareekhe gaal-si, lagti hai zindagi

Aaye toh kaise raas, mujhko aaye zindagi
Makdi ke bune jaal-si, lagti hai zindagi

Janam se joh pyar ki hai pyasi aaj tak
Sookhe ki ek misaal-si, lagti hai zindagi

Lapetne se laabh nahi, jisko zara bhi
Tar-tar shaal-si, lagti hai zindagi

Trahi ke alawa, na likha kuch bi bhagy mein
Baad aur akaal si, lagthi hai zindagi

Prashn mai koyi bhi kabhi kar saka na hul
"Roja" jatil sawal-si, lagti hai zindagi
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2008, 08:12:31 AM »
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Wah Roja ji Ise kehte hen dard, kamal kardiya aap ne bemisaal ash'aar he ye, behad jazbaati or dil ko chhoolene wale, bohot bohot badhai ho.

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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2008, 08:45:59 AM »
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Nice One... Roja Applause
Pehle kahan chhupa rakha tha aapne apni is nazm ko... icon_smile

Really very very beautiful creation...


Very Nice Reply Sayyid Randeri ji.. Applause

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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2008, 08:52:20 AM »
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Bohot khoob Roja and Sayyid Applause Applause very nice work.
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Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2008, 09:17:46 AM »
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Roja

Kya baat hai boss ! Behtareen jazbaat zindagi ke baare mein Applause

Yoon he likhti raho aur doston ka pyar pati raho !

Sayyid bro

Very nice reply Applause
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2008, 10:28:21 AM »
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Himmat afzai ka shukriya Mahiya ji or celmira ji.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2008, 10:30:23 AM »
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Roja

Kya baat hai boss ! Behtareen jazbaat zindagi ke baare mein Applause

Yoon he likhti raho aur doston ka pyar pati raho !

Sayyid bro

Very nice reply Applause

Meherbaan aap ki nawazish he.
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2008, 03:20:10 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukhriya Sayyid Randeri ji... aapne jo likha wo b lajawab hai. Applause..

Thanks Mahi, Talat siso,and Raj ji.Aap sab ko bahut bahut shukhriya.
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