chehra...........

by akela on June 11, 2008, 07:25:54 PM

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akela

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main ye nahi kahta tumse,ki mera bachpan lauta do
magar mujse meri jawani ki yaade bhula do

apni mahfil mai na bulao mujhe shikwa nahi
par barso pahle bichade uss yaar se mila do

iss khane ki toh sirf dikhwat hi bhali hai yaar
mujhe meri maa ke haath ki woh jali roti hi khila do

tumhari mahfil ke kahkaho mai dum ghuttha hai mera
mujhe mere bhai ke thappad se rula do

tanhai ko kos nahin raha main aaj'akela'par
mujhe ek baar mere parchai ka chehra dikha do.


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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2008, 07:27:20 PM »

wah wah wah!! too good Akela ji!!! Itne dino baad ayye app, atte he dhamal@kamal.com!! bahoot khoob!!


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akela

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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2008, 07:30:28 PM »

mujhe khusi hai ki aapko pasand aayi


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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2008, 07:33:36 PM »

bahut bahut khoob!!! bahut acha likha hai aapne..aapko pehli baar padha,umeed karta hoon aapka likha aur bhi padhne ko mile..bahut khoob


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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2008, 07:54:47 PM »

Very good work bahut acha likha hai apne akela ji.


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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2008, 10:06:33 AM »

choti see kavita...bhawnaon se labrez.....
sunder krti hai aapki


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akela

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Re: chehra...........

«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2008, 07:19:31 PM »

shuktriya aap sabhi ka......aap sab ke liye.........
shahar..............

raaste humse badalne,ki log ab farmaiesh karte hai.
yaha tho andhe bhi chasme ki numaiesh karte hai.

hum tho bhatak gaye hai iss shahar mai.
log hume bheed mai kheechkar jor-aajmaiesh karte hai.

saas lena aasan hai yaha.'akela' kisika jeena nahi...
saharwale tho murdo ko bhi katal ki saajish karte hai