Chhod du apne lafzo ka sath...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 03, 2011, 02:39:12 PM
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Agar main chhod du apne lafzo ka sath,
tab bhi tou merre dil ka dard kam nhi ho payega,

sisakti rahegi merri har arzu merre sine mein,
kaun mujhe haseen nazaro se milwayega,

main gum rehti hu apni duniya mein,
kyunki hosh mein yakinan koi merri ankho ko rulayega,

kya lena hai mujhe logo se kya denge sab mujhe,
khuda tha sath merre aur akhir tak wahi merra sath nibhayega,

apne har ehsan ko mujhse door hi rakhna zamane walo,
merri zindgi mein khushiya sirrf merra naseeb hi lekar aayega.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 03:03:56 PM »
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nice lines dear keep it up icon_flower

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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 03:07:48 PM »
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Quote from: ruk on January 03, 2011, 03:03:56 PM
nice lines dear keep it up icon_flower

 Applause Applause

Thnx priya...Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 03:14:40 PM »
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bahut khubb Geeta ji.
lajawaab ehsaas.
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ek baat notice kari hai maine aapki har peshkash me--
aapki kavitayen bilkul ek sach ka ehsaas dilaati hain. aisa feel hota hai jaise koi apna hi dost apna haal e dil paas baith kr batla rha ho.
koi kavita na hokar ek sachhi vyatha ka ehsaas hota hai.
may be ye mera vaham ho par anyway--khubsurat lekhni by u again.
god bless u dear--
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2011, 03:30:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji aur bahut pyara comment dene k liye tahe dil se shukriya...
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2011, 03:45:13 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 03, 2011, 02:39:12 PM


Agar main chhod du apne lafzo ka sath,
tab bhi tou merre dil ka dard kam nhi ho payega,

sisakti rahegi merri har arzu merre sine mein,
kaun mujhe haseen nazaro se milwayega,

main gum rehti hu apni duniya mein,
kyunki hosh mein yakinan koi merri ankho ko rulayega,

kya lena hai mujhe logo se kya denge sab mujhe,
khuda tha sath merre aur akhir tak wahi merra sath nibhayega,

apne har ehsan ko mujhse door hi rakhna zamane walo,
merri zindgi mein khushiya sirrf merra naseeb hi lekar aayega.........
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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2011, 03:48:55 PM »
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shukriya manoj ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 05:25:38 PM »
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bahut khubb
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 05:24:21 AM »
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ye shayri nahi ye tou jazbaat hai......... wo muhobaat phir yaad aa jati hai........... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 07:00:32 AM »
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geet ji bht khub ji bht khub.....

speciall second last para....superb......

its feel very vry sady.....kya baat he aajkal sab itna sad sad kyu ho rahe he .....pahle anamika ji ne sad likha...ab apne likha .....

hey hua kya he sabko......
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«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 07:13:15 AM »
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sabko ek Jadoo ki Jhappi ki kami hai bas.
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dukh kya hai isko hum samjh nhi paate
jo kabhi tha hi nhi apna
bas uske khone ka gam hai jiske bagair hum jee hi nahi paate
hain sabhi nirale iss jag me
milte aur bichadte mag me
paane ki chahat me bas sabkuch khoye chale jaate
""thanx""
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«Reply #11 on: January 04, 2011, 07:16:59 AM »
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hmm geet di wonderful wordds ...


nice coupling this time..

specially 3rd and 4thwala abahut achha hai..

sath hi one more cute girl on pic....haay mera dilll ...
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 06:30:37 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya matrix ji,abhi n wasil ji..nice lines nirala ji..hua kuch nhi hai bus itna kahungi kabhi halaat badal jate hai tou kabhi insan..take care..Usual Smile
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BBL jee Aadaab!

Waah jee kia baat hai..
Kia matured ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai aapne..
Behad khoob aur umdaa likha hai..

Daad kabool kijiye..

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 04:17:33 AM »
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geet bht mast likhti ho tum...lekin fir bhi tumhari post opn karne me kai bar dar lagta hai...kuch dabe hue jakhm kahin se fir jagne lagte hain..isily bht late late replies deti hun ..ek bar padhkar to turant reply de hi nahin pati.pata nahin kya ho jata hai.......
sorry re...
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