Chhod du apne lafzo ka sath...Geet...

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«Reply #15 on: January 18, 2011, 12:32:24 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 16, 2011, 06:50:21 PM
BBL jee Aadaab!

Waah jee kia baat hai..
Kia matured ahsaas o khayaal kahe hai aapne..
Behad khoob aur umdaa likha hai..

Daad kabool kijiye..

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

Bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji.
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«Reply #16 on: January 18, 2011, 12:38:25 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 17, 2011, 04:17:33 AM
geet bht mast likhti ho tum...lekin fir bhi tumhari post opn karne me kai bar dar lagta hai...kuch dabe hue jakhm kahin se fir jagne lagte hain..isily bht late late replies deti hun ..ek bar padhkar to turant reply de hi nahin pati.pata nahin kya ho jata hai.......
sorry re...
mast mast likha hai tumne sab kuc jaise mera apna sa......

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji mujhe behad khushi hui apka comment padhkar mujhe yakinan apse shikayat zarur thi ki aap sabhi tamam members ki thread per comment karti hai per merri thread per kaafi arse se apka koi comment nhi aaya apne merri uljhan door kar di,maafi chahungi kasak ji merre irada apke zakhmo ko taza karne ka nhi hota bus khuda ka likha hai ye ki apke aur merre zakhmo ka chehra milta sa hai..shukriya ek baar phir apka..Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: January 18, 2011, 01:05:28 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on January 17, 2011, 04:17:33 AM
geet bht mast likhti ho tum...lekin fir bhi tumhari post opn karne me kai bar dar lagta hai...kuch dabe hue jakhm kahin se fir jagne lagte hain..isily bht late late replies deti hun ..ek bar padhkar to turant reply de hi nahin pati.pata nahin kya ho jata hai.......
sorry re...
mast mast likha hai tumne sab kuc jaise mera apna sa......

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji mujhe behad khushi hui apka comment padhkar mujhe yakinan apse shikayat zarur thi ki aap sabhi tamam members ki thread per comment karti hai per merre thread per kaafi arse se apka koi comment nhi aaya apne merri uljhan door kar di,maafi chahungi kasak ji merre irada apke zakhmo ko taza karne ka nhi hota bus khuda ka likha hai ye ki apke aur merre zakhmo ka chehra milta sa hai..shukriya ek baar phir apka..Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: January 19, 2011, 12:03:52 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 03, 2011, 02:39:12 PM


Agar main chhod du apne lafzo ka sath,
tab bhi tou merre dil ka dard kam nhi ho payega,

sisakti rahegi merri har arzu merre sine mein,
kaun mujhe haseen nazaro se milwayega,

main gum rehti hu apni duniya mein,
kyunki hosh mein yakinan koi merri ankho ko rulayega,

kya lena hai mujhe logo se kya denge sab mujhe,
khuda tha sath merre aur akhir tak wahi merra sath nibhayega,

apne har ehsan ko mujhse door hi rakhna zamane walo,
merri zindgi mein khushiya sirrf merra naseeb hi lekar aayega.........



bahut achche broken ji
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«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2011, 09:36:53 AM »
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Mast Poem Geet-di.....pata nahi kaise mujh se pehle chhut gayee....
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause.....

Naa chhodna sakhee tu kabhi apne lafzo ka saath
Yahi bante dil ka dard bahaane-bataane ka saath

Hai agar tujhe vishwash apne Khuda aur naseeb par
Teri khushiyon ko ab koi bhee rok nahi sakta phir
Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 03, 2011, 02:39:12 PM


Agar main chhod du apne lafzo ka sath,
tab bhi tou merre dil ka dard kam nhi ho payega,

sisakti rahegi merri har arzu merre sine mein,
kaun mujhe haseen nazaro se milwayega,

main gum rehti hu apni duniya mein,
kyunki hosh mein yakinan koi merri ankho ko rulayega,

kya lena hai mujhe logo se kya denge sab mujhe,
khuda tha sath merre aur akhir tak wahi merra sath nibhayega,

apne har ehsan ko mujhse door hi rakhna zamane walo,
merri zindgi mein khushiya sirrf merra naseeb hi lekar aayega.........
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«Reply #20 on: January 20, 2011, 10:38:37 AM »
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lafzon ka saath chhod du mai bhi
    zazbaaton ki baat chhod du mai bhi
jeene ka fir bahana kya hoga
    khamoshi me doob kar fir marr jaana kya hoga
hasti khilkhilati duniya me
   chuppchapp fir guum ho jaana kya hoga
kuch faasle kuch dard kuch shikayete hain hazaar
   alfazon ke bin ankahi baaton ka fasana kya hoga
bharaosa nahi ab khuda ka bhi lekin
   bin alfaaz khud se bhi saath nibhana kya hoga
rokti hai duniya bahano se mujhe bahut magar
   duniya se bahar bhi mera thikana kya hoga
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thanx
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«Reply #21 on: January 20, 2011, 10:48:41 AM »
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nice
Quote from: nirala on January 20, 2011, 10:38:37 AM
lafzon ka saath chhod du mai bhi
    zazbaaton ki baat chhod du mai bhi
jeene ka fir bahana kya hoga
    khamoshi me doob kar fir marr jaana kya hoga
hasti khilkhilati duniya me
   chuppchapp fir guum ho jaana kya hoga
kuch faasle kuch dard kuch shikayete hain hazaar
   alfazon ke bin ankahi baaton ka fasana kya hoga
bharaosa nahi ab khuda ka bhi lekin
   bin alfaaz khud se bhi saath nibhana kya hoga
rokti hai duniya bahano se mujhe bahut magar
   duniya se bahar bhi mera thikana kya hoga
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thanx
"
nice
kuch nahin bachta dil toot jaane ke baad
dard  hi reh jatey hain zakham khane ke baad
afsaan toote dil ka hothon se bayan nahin hota
kaam atey hain alfaaz hi sab kuch lut jaane ke baad
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«Reply #22 on: January 20, 2011, 01:17:59 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya kaash ji,sheba ji,koyal,killbill ji n saahil ji...

Saahil ji,koyal n killbill ji bahut khubsurat likha hai..shukriya...
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«Reply #23 on: April 25, 2012, 06:07:37 PM »
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hmmmmmmmm..... itna dard.... bahut bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai aapne geet ji... too good....!!!
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