CHIN GAYA WAQT

by Jasleen13kaur on April 04, 2012, 05:24:35 PM
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Chin gaya waqt,
Pta hi nahi chala kab zindgi ka itna lamba safar tae kar,
Yhaan tak phunch aae hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi bachpan main khela karte the
Baraf paani, chor sipahi, chupan chupai,
Ab duniya ki bheed main gum hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Jb khaate the kulfi gali k thele par,
Ab Mc D, Subway main ja burger, tikki khaate hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi khilone ka hota tha mobile fone,
Dekh kar khush ho jaate the,
Papa se zid karte the khridne ki,
Ab touch fone k bina zindgi adhoori lagti hai..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi papa mummy k saath mele main jaya karte the,
Marie go round pe baithne se bhi darr lagta tha,
Papa ki ungli thaam apne ko mehfooz samajte the,
Ab vo zindgi ka dor gaya,
Apne ko independent samajte hain,
Rehte hain akele aur apni marzi krte hain,
Bhul gae hain marzi krne ki independence bhi papa se mili hai..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Wo bachpan ki yaadein,
Vo doston ka roothna aur mannana,
Vo sath sath khelna,
Vo jhoole se girna aur sath sath chotein khaana,
Ab is duniya main akele hain,
Samaj gae selfish aur selfishness kise kehte hain,
Dost bhi ab naap tol kar banate hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Vo bachpan yaad aata hai,
Sb badal gaya,
Par vo bachpan ki yaadein aaj bhi zehan main taaza hain,
Is mod pe aakar lagta hai
Chin gaya vo waqt,
Chin gaya vo bachpan...
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«Reply #1 on: April 04, 2012, 05:27:57 PM »
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boht khub jasleen ji and welcome
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«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2012, 05:30:49 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Jasleen ji aapne bade hi khoobsurat shabdon ke saath apne ehsaason ko persh kiya hai... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne... padhta gaya aur khota chala gaya.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... yunhi likhte rahiye... bahut achcha likhte hain aap... straight from the heart....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2012, 01:55:53 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2012, 06:03:58 AM »
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good one jaslin....saara bachpan yaad aa gaya....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 08:42:06 AM »
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thanks sahill ji Usual Smile
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thanks a lot Hriday g, Saini g aur Dolly g Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2012, 10:57:21 AM »
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Chin gaya waqt,
Pta hi nahi chala kab zindgi ka itna lamba safar tae kar,
Yhaan tak phunch aae hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi bachpan main khela karte the
Baraf paani, chor sipahi, chupan chupai,
Ab duniya ki bheed main gum hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Jb khaate the kulfi gali k thele par,
Ab Mc D, Subway main ja burger, tikki khaate hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi khilone ka hota tha mobile fone,
Dekh kar khush ho jaate the,
Papa se zid karte the khridne ki,
Ab touch fone k bina zindgi adhoori lagti hai..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Kbhi papa mummy k saath mele main jaya karte the,
Marie go round pe baithne se bhi darr lagta tha,
Papa ki ungli thaam apne ko mehfooz samajte the,
Ab vo zindgi ka dor gaya,
Apne ko independent samajte hain,
Rehte hain akele aur apni marzi krte hain,
Bhul gae hain marzi krne ki independence bhi papa se mili hai..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Wo bachpan ki yaadein,
Vo doston ka roothna aur mannana,
Vo sath sath khelna,
Vo jhoole se girna aur sath sath chotein khaana,
Ab is duniya main akele hain,
Samaj gae selfish aur selfishness kise kehte hain,
Dost bhi ab naap tol kar banate hain..
Vo waqt yaad aata hai,
Vo bachpan yaad aata hai,
Sb badal gaya,
Par vo bachpan ki yaadein aaj bhi zehan main taaza hain,
Is mod pe aakar lagta hai
Chin gaya vo waqt,
Chin gaya vo bachpan...


Jasleen Ji...Bahuttttttttt Hi Pyaari Aur gehri Soch!!!

Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wale Ehsaas Hai..

Mujhe Aapki Yeh Nazm Bahut pasand Aayi

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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2012, 11:32:33 AM »
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jaslen Ji Nice expression God bless you
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