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bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
jinhe tum chahte ho wahi aag denge
yaar dost tujhe sabhi daag denge
lakdiyo ke dher par hoga to bhasm
bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
do din ke zindgi hai do din ka mela
aaya tha akela aur jaiega bhi akela
sath chalenge tere kiye jo karam
bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
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bahut sunder
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2012, 05:16:20 AM » |
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thanx sainiji bahut sunder
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2012, 05:58:53 AM » |
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good lines
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2012, 06:53:34 AM » |
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bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
jinhe tum chahte ho wahi aag denge
yaar dost tujhe sabhi daag denge
lakdiyo ke dher par hoga to bhasm
bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
do din ke zindgi hai do din ka mela
aaya tha akela aur jaiega bhi akela
sath chalenge tere kiye jo karam
bahot pyar karte ho duniya se tum
magar yaad rakhna yeh jeevan hai kam
Very good poonam ji  bilkul sach..keep writing. |
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2012, 07:01:28 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2012, 07:02:19 AM » |
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thanku so much Very good poonam ji bilkul sach..keep writing. |
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2012, 12:18:22 PM » |
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aisi baaten na likho hume darr lagta hai
riston me zinda hain hum yahi ehsaas amar lagta hai
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very good Poonam ji
sachai likhi hai aapne
daad daad daad
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2012, 05:29:32 PM » |
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Bahot hi khoob likha hai Poonam ji. Daad
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on eTI community..
