Dard k galicho se...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 28, 2011, 08:53:23 AM
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Adaab dosto maafi chahungi aaj kavita kuch lambi ho gyi per umeed karti hu aap sabko pasand aayegi...shukriya..



Dard k galicho se guzarna hamesha se merra shauk raha hai,
maine tou kanto se bhi kabhi apna daaman bachaya na tha,

merri zindgi aksar logo kayi sawal de jati hai,
pehle kabhi maine apna haal kisise chhupaya na tha,

tamanaao k ubharte jwalamukhi ko samete baithi hu sine mein,
dunia se darkar pehle kabhi apni hasrato ko dabaya na tha,

zamane mein merra bhi ek makaam hota bhatakne k liye
sab chhodte rahe sahi rasta kisi ne dikhaya na tha,

nasamjh nakara keh k har koi thukrata gya,
kisine hath thaam k mujhe apnaya na tha,

jinse sachi mhbt ki unke bache ehsaso se ghar sanwarti rahi,
unko thes na lage ye sochakr maine apna aashiya sajaya na tha,

ab ye alam hai ki merri ruh tadap k pukarti hai merre ajnabi ko,
laakh rishto k bawjud maine kabhi kisi ko awaz dekar bulaya na tha,

tanha hamesha se rahi hu main per ab jo tanhai mehsus karti hu,
itna tanha maine khud ko kabhi paya na tha,

hosh sambhala jabse sirrf dard ne hi merre darwaze pe dastak di hai,
jitna kuch aaj har pal kho rahi hu saari umar utna gawaya na tha,

yado k nishan dhundhle pad rahe hai kayi naamo se ajnan ho gyi hu,
aaj sab begane lagte hai kahan ek waqt the koi merre liye paraya na tha.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2011, 09:10:31 AM »
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hmmmmmmmm.........

geet ji bahot alag ehsaas mile he apki is poetry me........wese bht dino baad apki potery read kar raha hu...bich me kafi potery mis kar gaya hu me muje pata he.........but this post is just wonderful........sady theme wali post he but usme bhi jane kyu kuch alag hi sukun he jesa mil raha he .apne jo shabd use kiye he wo bahot hi pyare he........as always it is also one of ur best poetry.........wese muje ek aur baat ki khushi he ki ye sabse pahle mene read ki aur kam se kam ye padne ko to mili .....free hokar apki sari post padne he .bht mis ho chuki he........keep it up ji....
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2011, 09:17:27 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 28, 2011, 09:10:31 AM
hmmmmmmmm.........

geet ji bahot alag ehsaas mile he apki is poetry me........wese bht dino baad apki potery rad kar raha hu...bich me kafi potery mis kar gaya hu me muje pata he.........but this post is just wonderful........sady theme wali post he but usme bhi jane kyu kuch alag hi sukun he jesa mil raha he .apne jo shabd use kiye he wo bahot hi pyare he........as always it is also one of ur best poetry.........wese muje ek aur baat ki khushi he ki ye sabse pahle mene read ki aur kam se kam ye padne ko to mili .....free hokar apki sari post padne he .bht mis ho chuki he........keep it up ji....

Bahut bahut shukriya utkarsh ji..mujhe behad khushi hai ki apko merri rachnaye pasand ati hai..mujhe bhi bahut acha laga ki apne kaafi waqt baad merri kavita pe comment kiya aage bhi apke comments ki umeed karti hu..shukriya ji...take care...
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«Reply #3 on: March 28, 2011, 09:18:45 AM »
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bahut khub geetji.....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 28, 2011, 09:20:22 AM »
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Bahut shukriya manju mann ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2011, 09:38:54 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 28, 2011, 08:53:23 AM




mujhe jo cheez trigger karti he wo hw ye ...
apki poem me used cute type ki pics..

geet di bahut abdhiya rahi apki poem..
achhe ehsaas baante he apne in panktiyon ke jariye..

har ashar apne hisse ki kahani keh raha hai...
bahut badhiya ..dher saari daad~

waise to aap sab ke samne aajkal khud ko tinka bhi nahi samajh pata fir bhi kuchh ashar padhkar likhne pe majboor ho jata hun ...galti maaf kijiyega..

pesh hai:

ab talak kisi or ne mujhe awaaz dekar pukara na tha
itna apna sa lag raha he wo jaise kabhi paraya na tha
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«Reply #6 on: March 28, 2011, 09:48:28 AM »
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geet ji… wese aapki kafi saari post mene b miss kiya h sad5
jesa ki mene pehle kabhi kaha tha k aapki kavitaye padhkar aisa lagta hai jese koi apna hi pass  me bethkar apna dard bayan kar rha ho.
aaj bhi aisa hi hua.
aapki kavitaye sunai deti hai mujhe. aur kya bolu.
wese aaj aapka alg alg andaaz dekhne ko mila.
khus rahiye ji
sukriya
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2011, 01:04:31 PM »
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bht khoob geet ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 28, 2011, 01:37:40 PM »
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Mast poem Geet-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dariya-e-dard me rehnaa ab mera naseeb ho gayaa hai
Par kar ke shikaayat meine kisi ko bataaya nahi hai

Sakhee Har ek rishte ko dil se meine neebhaayaa hai
Par aaj jivan k mod par koi bhi kaam aayaa nahi hai
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«Reply #9 on: March 28, 2011, 03:40:11 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2011, 02:12:56 AM »
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Very Impressive Creation ..... Geet Ji !

Very Touching    ... Good Expression ... !

Dil se daad ..........  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2011, 07:42:48 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on March 28, 2011, 09:38:54 AM
mujhe jo cheez trigger karti he wo hw ye ...
apki poem me used cute type ki pics..

geet di bahut abdhiya rahi apki poem..
achhe ehsaas baante he apne in panktiyon ke jariye..

har ashar apne hisse ki kahani keh raha hai...
bahut badhiya ..dher saari daad~

waise to aap sab ke samne aajkal khud ko tinka bhi nahi samajh pata fir bhi kuchh ashar padhkar likhne pe majboor ho jata hun ...galti maaf kijiyega..

pesh hai:

ab talak kisi or ne mujhe awaaz dekar pukara na tha
itna apna sa lag raha he wo jaise kabhi paraya na tha

Thnx alot abhi main believe karti hu ki lafzo k sath sath merri har kavita ki presentation bhi mehsus karne layak ho..tumne bahut acha ashar likha hai aur kisne kaha ki tum acha nhi likhte tum bhi ek ache shayar ho..anywayz thnx alot...Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2011, 07:43:49 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on March 28, 2011, 09:48:28 AM
geet ji… wese aapki kafi saari post mene b miss kiya h sad5
jesa ki mene pehle kabhi kaha tha k aapki kavitaye padhkar aisa lagta hai jese koi apna hi pass  me bethkar apna dard bayan kar rha ho.
aaj bhi aisa hi hua.
aapki kavitaye sunai deti hai mujhe. aur kya bolu.
wese aaj aapka alg alg andaaz dekhne ko mila.
khus rahiye ji
sukriya

Merre alfzo k dard ko gehrayi se mehsus karne k liye bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji..
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2011, 07:45:08 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 28, 2011, 01:37:40 PM
Mast poem Geet-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dariya-e-dard me rehnaa ab mera naseeb ho gayaa hai
Par kar ke shikaayat meine kisi ko bataaya nahi hai

Sakhee Har ek rishte ko dil se meine neebhaayaa hai
Par aaj jivan k mod par koi bhi kaam aayaa nahi hai

Shukriya sweetu aur bahut khoob kahi tune...
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2011, 07:46:25 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2011, 03:40:11 PM
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 29, 2011, 02:12:56 AM
Very Impressive Creation ..... Geet Ji !

Very Touching    ... Good Expression ... !

Dil se daad ..........  Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: Shihab on March 29, 2011, 05:14:09 AM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Bahut bahut shukriya suresh ji naresh ji aur shihab ji..
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