Dard Men Jeena Chhod Do

by syednaami on April 22, 2008, 04:48:47 PM
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Jis dard se mayoosi hi mile
uss dard men jeena chhod do

jab zakhm tera naasoor banenga
phir kissi dava ka asar na padega
jis pyar se dil ko raahat mili thi
uss pyar ka naam-o-nishaan na milega

jis rah men phaila andhera mile
uss rah se guzarna chhod do

phir rona mat un yaadon par
jin yaadon ko man men samaoge
na darna phir un wa'adon se
jo wa'ade karke nibha na paaoge

jis wafa se tumko jafa mile
uss wafa se rishta tod do

Jis dard se mayoosi hi mile
uss dard men jeena chhod do
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2008, 04:59:56 PM »
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nice one...
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2008, 05:02:47 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!! bahoot he touching kavita likhi hai apne!!!!! Good Creation!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2008, 05:05:05 PM »
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Bas bethhe betthe likhli, aaj man kar raha tha likhne ka.
Thanks so much for your appreciation Pooja bibi.

Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2008, 05:02:47 PM
wah wah wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!! bahoot he touching kavita likhi hai apne!!!!! Good Creation!!!


Quote from: jianrangrej on April 22, 2008, 04:59:56 PM
nice one...
Thanks jianrangrej for reading.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2008, 05:17:16 PM »
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Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le

Zakham nasoor ban kar bhi ussi ki yaad dilate hai
Kis tarah phir koi dard main jeena chord de

Na jaane kyun in andhero main bhi ek kiran ki aass rahti hai
Aass ki us bechaini ka kaise phir koi sath chord de

Rote nahi yaadon per, yaadein aa aa kar rulati hai
Behati hai jo yaadein bhawnai main, kaise unse munh mord le

Wadon, wafa, jaffa main koi farak ab nahi reh jaata
Jab apna he swarth main akar her rishta torr de

Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2008, 05:43:22 PM »
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Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le

Zakham nasoor ban kar bhi ussi ki yaad dilate hai
Kis tarah phir koi dard main jeena chord de


bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne pooja didi
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2008, 05:48:21 PM »
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Thanks Sonia!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2008, 06:46:18 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on April 22, 2008, 05:43:22 PM
Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le

Zakham nasoor ban kar bhi ussi ki yaad dilate hai
Kis tarah phir koi dard main jeena chord de


bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne pooja didi

Hello pyari chhutki
Thanks for coming and reading aur isko samjho bhi okay.
Ab kahan gum ho.
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2008, 06:50:01 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2008, 05:17:16 PM
Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le

Zakham nasoor ban kar bhi ussi ki yaad dilate hai
Kis tarah phir koi dard main jeena chord de

Na jaane kyun in andhero main bhi ek kiran ki aass rahti hai
Aass ki us bechaini ka kaise phir koi sath chord de

Rote nahi yaadon per, yaadein aa aa kar rulati hai
Behati hai jo yaadein bhawnai main, kaise unse munh mord le

Wadon, wafa, jaffa main koi farak ab nahi reh jaata
Jab apna he swarth main akar her rishta torr de

Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le


Wah bhai wah, ghazab ka jawab, par woh dar mayoosi ka ha bibi Pooja. Jawab dene men to tum maahir ho great
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2008, 07:22:21 PM »
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shukaria syednaami ji!! app bhi kuch jawab mai likh dete !!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2008, 07:27:45 PM »
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Jawab men to likh dalun magar abhi sone ka program hai, kal email check karen mil jayega.
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pandit
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2008, 08:21:53 PM »
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nice pooja ji.......

Dard me jeena chodu kaise,
Ki ye dard bhi aap ki dee hui cheez hai,
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2008, 10:11:28 PM »
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waiting for reply syednaami ji!!

Thanks Pandit ji!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2008, 04:36:39 AM »
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syeednaami ji,

Aapko mein is aapki hindi ki doosri kavita(mujh tuk do hi pahuchi hein,agar galti ho to kshma),pur dil se badhai deta hu.
kavitaye kalpnao pur aashrit rehti he-aur kabhi bhee,kahin bhee upaj sakti he,mera man-na he.aapne vakai..bohut umda aur safal prayas kiya he.mein aapka abhari hu.

Prateek
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2008, 04:44:34 AM »
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pooja ji,

aapki haazirjawabi ka mein kayal ho chuka hu.hur baat ko kur pehlu se dekhne ki ada-yeh ehsaas kararti he ki aapka hriday atyant komal he.aapse seekhne ki lalak to bohut he pur jaanta hu--bina kabiliyat sambhav nahi aur jitna likh paata hu--santushti usi mein dhoondani hogi.Aapne hur kisi ke dard mein,khushi mein shaamil ho apne vyaktitva ko chaar chand lagaye he-isme do raay hona asambhav he.
aapka dil se abhinandan.

Prateek
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