Dard Men Jeena Chhod Do

by syednaami on April 22, 2008, 04:48:47 PM
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«Reply #30 on: April 24, 2008, 06:40:18 PM »
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Quote from: punam on April 24, 2008, 06:38:11 PM
Bahot khoob syed ji..main toh tareef karne layak nahi hun..
mujhe jo kuch bhi nahi aata... ek se badh k ek ..wah..

pooja di aap bhi bahot ache likhe..bahot khoob...

Aap kyun nahin hai layak, aap ka andaaz bhi nirala hai bhai, genuine hai.
Thanks a lot Punam jee for coming and reading.
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«Reply #31 on: April 24, 2008, 07:12:21 PM »
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syednaami ji aap ko jaadugar kehna padega, jesa aap ne chaha tha aap ki kavita ne jaadu kiya, or asar ho raha he, magar pooja ji ka kalam mere dil ki aawaz bankar ubhra or kya chhahiye.  NaNaNa

Han ji Aap ke jwaabaat to lajwaab he magar dil he ke maanta nahi, hosaka to kabhi is mozu par zarur kuchh likhunga.  Feared.
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«Reply #32 on: April 24, 2008, 07:17:21 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 22, 2008, 05:17:16 PM
Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le

Zakham nasoor ban kar bhi ussi ki yaad dilate hai
Kis tarah phir koi dard main jeena chord de

Na jaane kyun in andhero main bhi ek kiran ki aass rahti hai
Aass ki us bechaini ka kaise phir koi sath chord de

Rote nahi yaadon per, yaadein aa aa kar rulati hai
Behati hai jo yaadein bhawnai main, kaise unse munh mord le

Wadon, wafa, jaffa main koi farak ab nahi reh jaata
Jab apna he swarth main akar her rishta torr de

Dard ko choda jaaye to her koi chord de
Per jis se ek baar hua pyar usse kaise moh mord le


Wah pooja ji kamal kar diya yane chadar phaad ke rumal kardiya.  Applause
or jwaabaat bhi behtareen he, jaari rakhiye.
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«Reply #33 on: April 24, 2008, 07:22:35 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 24, 2008, 07:12:21 PM
syednaami ji aap ko jaadugar kehna padega, jesa aap ne chaha tha aap ki kavita ne jaadu kiya, or asar ho raha he, magar pooja ji ka kalam mere dil ki aawaz bankar ubhra or kya chhahiye.  NaNaNa

Han ji Aap ke jwaabaat to lajwaab he magar dil he ke maanta nahi, hosaka to kabhi is mozu par zarur kuchh likhunga.  Feared.

Muhtaram Mian Randeri Saheb,
Aap ne hamare hosle ko aasmaan talak punhcha diya, ab kaise shukriya ada karun, bas dua karen ki mazeed dard dur karsakun, Aslaaf ke qadmon ka peechha kar raha hun, iss liye aisa likhta hun.
Aap ne waqt nikaal kar jo tehseen ki uska mamnoon hun.

Faqat

S Naami
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«Reply #34 on: April 24, 2008, 07:31:28 PM »
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Syed ji apki sari kavita ka jawab maine is apni kavita mai sajone ki poori koshish ki hai..

Khushfehami hai na yah nadani hai
Umarbhar jise chaha, bas uski nishani hai
Dil mai bas jaata hai khud hi akar koi
Is dil ne kab kaha kisi ki maani hai

Darte bhi nahi, badlate bhi nahi
Yah to waqat-e-zindagi ki rawani hai
Ishaq marta nahi kabhi yah dil janta hai
Siskate gum ajj bhi zinda-e-Ishaq ki nishani hai

Irada-e-honsla bhi humne khoya nahi
Dhadkate dil ki dhadkan iski nishani hai
Bard to raha hai ek ek kadam agge
Per Dil nahi janta ki manjil kaha banani hai

Ansuon main doob kar bhi doobein nahi
Hasrato ne bhi kahin na kahin likhani kahani hai
Josh main bhi kahin chipi ussi ki hasrat
Janate hai ki yaad uski kahin ander he chipani hai!!!


Syed ji,
maine kabhi muqabile mai vishwaas nahi kiya!! magar mujhe is tarah se sawalo-jawabo mai kavita karna bahoot acha lagta hai!! sath mile to likhne ka apna he ek anand hai!!
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«Reply #35 on: April 24, 2008, 09:31:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 24, 2008, 07:17:21 PM
Wah pooja ji kamal kar diya yane chadar phaad ke rumal kardiya.  Applause
or jwaabaat bhi behtareen he, jaari rakhiye.

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 24, 2008, 07:12:21 PM
magar pooja ji ka kalam mere dil ki aawaz bankar ubhra or kya chhahiye. 

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Sayyid ji!!

Dil mai aye zajbaato ko likhati hu or kuch bhi nahi
Man mai aye sawalo ko likhati hu or kuch bhi nahi
Jawab kuch aise hai jin ka NAhi koi ashian or kuch bhi nahi
Faqat apna dil behlaane ko likhati hu or kuch bhi nahi………
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«Reply #36 on: April 25, 2008, 07:25:36 PM »
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Pooja Saahiba,
       Aaj kuchh aur masrufiyaat men gum hun, issliye kal aapke liye kuchh likh paunga, inshaAllah.

Iss martaba bhi aap ka dard se rishta nahin toota, khair woh ek alag baat hai ke hum kahan tak ilaaj kar paate hain.

Thanks for being with me.

S Naami
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«Reply #37 on: April 25, 2008, 09:52:12 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 25, 2008, 07:25:36 PM
Pooja Saahiba,
       Aaj kuchh aur masrufiyaat men gum hun, issliye kal aapke liye kuchh likh paunga, inshaAllah.

Iss martaba bhi aap ka dard se rishta nahin toota, khair woh ek alag baat hai ke hum kahan tak ilaaj kar paate hain.

Thanks for being with me.

S Naami

S.naami ji Aadab...
Khushiyon ka rista bada hi khokhla he naami ji.. han magar dard ke riste par sari dawae'n beasar hojati he, ye muhabbat ki kheti he babu... srif ashkon ki barsat hi ise hara bhara rakh sakti he, wo bhi aese wese nahi jise kehte hen khoon ke aansoo, khushk zameen me bhla koi beej palta he, {han phalta he agar wo  21 vee'n sadi ki muhabbat ho} aaj kal to bas khushk zameen me tukhm-e-ulfat bo kar log aasooda hojate hen, or daava Qays-o-layla ka?

Aziz dost mene kahin padha tha ke ek ladka muhabbat me nakami ke baad diwana sa hogaya, aab-o-hawa ki tabdili ke liye use gaaun me apni dadi ke paas bhej diya gaya, mahinon baad bhi jab junun-e-ishq me koi kami nahi aai to usne apni dadi se puchha [jo khamosh sar jhukae bethi thi]
Dadi ma muhabbat ka dard bhulane me kitna waqt lagta he?
Dadi ne larazti aawaz me jawab diya: bete.. mujhe kaya pata mujhe to abhi sirf 80 saal hi huwe hen.
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«Reply #38 on: April 27, 2008, 12:25:26 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 22, 2008, 04:48:47 PM
Jis dard se mayoosi hi mile
uss dard men jeena chhod do

jab zakhm tera naasoor banenga
phir kissi dava ka asar na padega
jis pyar se dil ko raahat mili thi
uss pyar ka naam-o-nishaan na milega

jis rah men phaila andhera mile
uss rah se guzarna chhod do

phir rona mat un yaadon par
jin yaadon ko man men samaoge
na darna phir un wa'adon se
jo wa'ade karke nibha na paaoge

jis wafa se tumko jafa mile
uss wafa se rishta tod do

Jis dard se mayoosi hi mile
uss dard men jeena chhod do

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne syednaami ji.

jis wafa se tumko jafa mile
uss wafa se rishta tod do

very well said.
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«Reply #39 on: April 27, 2008, 12:37:08 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 25, 2008, 09:52:12 PM
S.naami ji Aadab...
Khushiyon ka rista bada hi khokhla he naami ji.. han magar dard ke riste par sari dawae'n beasar hojati he, ye muhabbat ki kheti he babu... srif ashkon ki barsat hi ise hara bhara rakh sakti he, wo bhi aese wese nahi jise kehte hen khoon ke aansoo, khushk zameen me bhla koi beej palta he, {han phalta he agar wo  21 vee'n sadi ki muhabbat ho} aaj kal to bas khushk zameen me tukhm-e-ulfat bo kar log aasooda hojate hen, or da'awa Qays-o-layla ka?

Aziz dost mene kahin padha tha ke ek ladka muhabbat me nakami ke baad diwana sa hogaya, aab-o-hawa ki tabdili ke liye use gaaun me apni dadi ke paas bhej diya gaya, mahinon baad bhi jab junun-e-ishq me koi kami nahi aai to usne apni dadi se puchha [jo khamosh sar jhukae bethi thi]
Dadi ma muhabbat ka dard bhulane me kitna waqt lagta he?
Dadi ne larazti aawaz me jawab diya: bete.. mujhe kaya pata mujhe to abhi sirf 80 saal hi huwe hen.

Salaam Arz hai, Janab Randeri
Aur kitna dard sahna, jis dard ka koi nateeja akhaz na ho.

Aur Woh Dadi shaadishuda theen unko apne shauhar ke jaldi jaane ka gham hosakta hai.
Magar uss ladke ne gham ka sabaq to liye par shayad Dadi ki Dada se jodi bani usko peeche chhod diya.
Khair, hum to aise hi likhenge Randeri Mian.
Aap ne aazaz bhara khat bheja buhat maza ayaa.

Shukriya dil se.

S Naami
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«Reply #40 on: April 27, 2008, 12:40:05 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 27, 2008, 12:25:26 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne syednaami ji.

jis wafa se tumko jafa mile
uss wafa se rishta tod do

very well said.


Aadab Roja Saahiba,

Aap ne hamare aangan main qadam rakha, jaise ghareebkhana khushboon se muattar ho gaya.
Hosla Afzai ka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun.

S Naami
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«Reply #41 on: April 27, 2008, 12:56:33 PM »
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Salaam Arz hai, Janab Randeri
Aur kitna dard sahna, jis dard ka koi nateeja akhaz na ho.

Aur Woh Dadi shaadishuda theen unko apne shauhar ke jaldi jaane ka gham hosakta hai.
Magar uss ladke ne gham ka sabaq to liye par shayad Dadi ki Dada se jodi bani usko peeche chhod diya.
Khair, hum to aise hi likhenge Randeri Mian.
Aap ne aazaz bhara khat bheja buhat maza ayaa.

Shukriya dil se.

S Naami

S.naami sa. mere sawalon ka jawab to aap ne apni tasweer me apna tarruf kara ke de diya he.
 
   -: NACHHED AE NIGHAT-E-BAD-E-BAHARI RAH LAG APNI :-
 -: TUJHE ATHKHELIYAN SOOJHI HE HAM BEZAAR BETHE HEN :-
 
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«Reply #42 on: April 27, 2008, 01:08:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 27, 2008, 12:56:33 PM
S.naami sa. mere sawalon ka jawab to aap ne apni tasweer me apna tarruf kara ke de diya he.
 
   -: NACHED AE NIGHAT-E-BAD-E-BAHARI RAH LAG APNI :-
 -: TUJHE ATHKHELIYAN SOOJHI HE HAM BEZAAR BETHE HEN :-

Hazrat aap jaisa bhi samjho, yeh bhi unhi ki marhun-e-minnat hai.
Maazrat khwaah agar kuchh ziyada kaha.
Baqi aapko tafseel bhej dunga.

Neeche kuchh likhta hun samajhne wala samjhe:

Tumhaare hi dam se hai yeh mera naam-o-nishaan, -
Gar tera qarz na hota mujh par aye mere maherbaan, -
Hum iss shahar se kooch kar gaye hote jaane kahan. -

(Syed Naami)
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«Reply #43 on: April 27, 2008, 01:22:33 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 27, 2008, 01:08:33 PM

Tumhaare hi dam se hai yeh mera naam-o-nishaan, -
Gar tera qarz na hota mujh par aye mere maherbaan, -
Hum iss shahar se kooch kar gaye hote jaane kahan. -

(Syed Naami)

Wah kya baat he, njaane kyun aap to Sanjeedah shayar hote jarahe hen.  Applause

 MUBARAK YAS-O-HASRAT ME TUJHE MAHBOOS HOJANA
NISHAT-E-GAM SE AB MUSHKIL NAHI MAANOOS HO JAANA

[AAMIR SURTI]
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«Reply #44 on: April 27, 2008, 02:58:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 27, 2008, 01:22:33 PM
Wah kya baat he, njaane kyun aap to Sanjeedah shayar hote jarahe hen.  Applause

 MUBARAK YAS-O-HASRAT ME TUJHE MAHBOOS HOJANA
NISHAT-E-GAM SE AB MUSHKIL NAHI MAANOOS HO JAANA

[AAMIR SURTI]

Randei Mian, Khoob kaha aap ne meri jiddat ke bare men.
Soorti Saahib ka kalaam bilkul hamare pasand ka hai, maza aaya buhat, aur sanjeeda kyunkar bhaya, apne hamari taareef to tasveer men padh chuke hain.

Zara kuchh mazeed dard ka ilaaj karun apne.

Vaasil-e-Zindaan tha taboot men dafan, -
tod diye main ne saare habs ke quful, -

Sang-o-taraash ke taaza hain sab zakham, -
nayi zeest par hu gaamzan Bhula ke ranj-o-gham. -

(Syed Naami)
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