Dard Men Jeena Chhod Do

by syednaami on April 22, 2008, 04:48:47 PM
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«Reply #60 on: April 29, 2008, 08:28:18 PM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #61 on: April 29, 2008, 08:30:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 29, 2008, 08:23:03 PM
Ye hui na baat...  Applause

Ab aap ki kavita hardil aziz hosakti he, allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zyada.

Shah Sahib,

Zara si khanak paimane ki aur hum hoshiyar,
Teer chala to sidha sukhanvar ke andar,
Bas nishaana-e-ahdaaf par aisi nazar,
Ishara milte hi dushman-e-bazm dharti par.

(syed Naami)
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«Reply #62 on: April 29, 2008, 08:33:23 PM »
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ahdaaf?Huh?
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«Reply #63 on: April 29, 2008, 08:41:47 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 29, 2008, 08:16:38 PM

Lekhak aor shayar mai jara anter batlaaye
shabdo ke hair-phair main humko na uljhaye
dil jaise chahe waise he app likhte jaaye
magar gahari urdu ke meaning bhi sath main batlaaye

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«Reply #64 on: April 29, 2008, 08:43:15 PM »
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Humko ahdaaf ka matlab samjhaye
itani gahari urdu likhe to meaning bhi likhte jaaye
apki lekhani ko hua hai kaya
sayyid ji app bhi humko yah samjhaye
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«Reply #65 on: April 29, 2008, 08:51:35 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 08:30:29 PM
Shah Sahib,

Zara si khanak paimane ki aur hum hoshiyar,
Teer chala to sidha sukhanvar ke andar,
Bas nishaana-e-ahdaaf par aisi nazar,
Ishara milte hi dushman-e-bazm dharti par.

(syed Naami)

UPAR SE GAYA UPAR SE GAYA
HAR SHER HAMARE SAR SE GAYA  Laughing hard  Laughing hard  Laughing hard
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«Reply #66 on: April 29, 2008, 09:03:21 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 29, 2008, 08:43:15 PM
Humko ahdaaf ka matlab samjhaye
itani gahari urdu likhe to meaning bhi likhte jaaye
apki lekhani ko hua hai kaya
sayyid ji app bhi humko yah samjhaye

Jis ke liye likha usne sawal hi na kia
Taareekh ko banaya jisne, usne hi mitta dia

Jinko khabar milli hamare zoq ke intaha ki
usne aakar kaha, uthhye janab ye jagah hai shahukaron ki
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Ahdaaf Plural of "Hadaf" Arabic
Meaning :: Targets, Mark, Lakshya
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«Reply #67 on: April 29, 2008, 09:06:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 29, 2008, 08:51:35 PM
UPAR SE GAYA UPAR SE GAYA
HAR SHER HAMARE SAR SE GAYA  Laughing hard  Laughing hard  Laughing hard

Woh jaana tha mian, kyunki jiske liye tha usne padha usne samjha nahin, jis ke liye kuchh aur tha usne sawaal hi kuchh aur kardiya.  NaNaNa NaNaNa Giggle

Ab aap saahib-e-qalam ke liye hum pehli ka qaida to nahin likhenge na.  Laughing hard tongue3
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«Reply #68 on: April 29, 2008, 09:29:40 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 09:06:34 PM

Woh jaana tha mian, kyunki jiske liye tha usne padha usne samjha nahin, jis ke liye kuchh aur tha usne sawaal hi kuchh aur kardiya.  NaNaNa NaNaNa Giggle

Ab aap saahib-e-qalam ke liye hum pehli ka qaida to nahin likhenge na.  Laughing hard tongue3

ha ha ha

janab me chahta hun aap ke kalam ko har koi samjhe, ye kisi ek tak mahdud rahe ye aadab-e-mehfil ke bhi khilaaf he or is moqe or halaat ke bhi munasib nahi, ek or baat ye ke urdu alfaaz jab english me likhe jaate hen to padhne me nisbatan mushkil hojate hen, do baar seh baar padhne par samajh me aate hen, shayad is liye ke ek lafz ko me alag tariqe se likhta hun aap alag koi or alag hi tariqa apnaata he.  DOH
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«Reply #69 on: April 29, 2008, 09:46:18 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 29, 2008, 09:29:40 PM
ha ha ha

janab me chahta hun aap ke kalam ko har koi samjhe, ye kisi ek tak mahdud rahe ye aadab-e-mehfil ke bhi khilaaf he or is moqe or halaat ke bhi munasib nahi, ek or baat ye ke urdu alfaaz jab english me likhe jaate hen to padhne me nisbatan mushkil hojate hen, do baar seh baar padhne par samajh me aate hen, shayad is liye ke ek lafz ko me alag tariqe se likhta hun aap alag koi or alag hi tariqa apnaata he.  DOH

Jaanib-e-nazar kahun ya jaazib-e-nazar,
Mera Tareeq sada hai teri afkaar se.

Mian Randeri,
Hum donon ke Roman Urdu kam-o-besh milti julti hai, aur farq hai to bas aap thoda Hindi Romanization karte hain aur Hum Urdu.
Baaqi yeh baat to baherhaal hai ki ek ki tarz-e-kitaabat ka hona lazimi hai.
Kair, iss bahis se humne buhat sikha, inshaAllah aapke diye naqsh par amli muzaahira karne ki koshish karenge.

S Naami[/b]
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«Reply #70 on: April 29, 2008, 10:05:25 PM »
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app dono ka likha samjhane ke liye pahle urdu sikhani padegi... humm....
Quote from: syednaami on April 29, 2008, 09:03:21 PM
Jis ke liye likha usne sawal hi na kia
Taareekh ko banaya jisne, usne hi mitta dia


kis ke liye likha tha Huh?
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«Reply #71 on: April 29, 2008, 10:16:53 PM »
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Yeh thoda mazaaq chal raha tha, Sayyid bhai se.

Kyunki unko Urdu ki buhat jaankari hai, aur woh kabhi kabhi funny men nazar aate hain. Bas uss par yeh saara qissa baaten ho rahin hai.

Kuchh aisa likha ki shayad samajh se baahir chala gaya na. Par aage se Urdu ko aasan shabdon men likhun ga.
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«Reply #72 on: April 29, 2008, 10:19:51 PM »
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To likho bhi... kab se intzaar ho raha hai
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«Reply #73 on: May 01, 2008, 04:19:48 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 29, 2008, 08:51:35 PM
UPAR SE GAYA UPAR SE GAYA
HAR SHER HAMARE SAR SE GAYA  Laughing hard  Laughing hard  Laughing hard

hahaha...  Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #74 on: May 01, 2008, 11:39:59 AM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on May 01, 2008, 04:19:48 AM
hahaha...  Laughing hard Laughing hard


Haan haan, ab tum bhi mazaaq karo.. chalo is bahaane tum khush to hoye.  NaNaNa
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