~~"DARR KE SAAYE ME"~~

by k.shael on November 14, 2008, 10:39:47 AM
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DARR KE SAAYE ME REHTE HAI HAM KI KAHIIN
AANE WALA NAYA PAL, PHIR SE KUCH CHEEN
KAR NA LE JAAYE HAMSE,

JO BACHI KHUCHI HAI KHUSHIYAAN BAKI
ZINDAGI KI KAHIIN WO BHI NA ROOTH JAAYE
HAMSE,

APNE-APNE NA RAHE DOST-DOST NA RAHE KAHIIN
HAMARA KHUD KA ZAMIIR BHI NA KHO JAAYE
HAMSE,

YAADEIN HAI, BEETE DINO KI, AANSOO HAI BEETE
PALO KE, YE NA HO NAYE AANSOO ISS TARAH BAHE
KI YE BHI CHOOT JAAYE HAMSE,

U TO AISA PASS KUCH NAHI JISSE BACHANE KA DARR
HAI, PAR HAAN MUJHE KHUD KE AANSOO OR YAADON
KE KHO JAANE KA DARR HAI…

BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2008, 11:20:40 AM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Shael ....... Bohot Khoob
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2008, 11:23:41 AM »
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...it's amazing Shael...good job...
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2008, 11:24:38 AM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Shael ....... Bohot Khoob

SHUKRIYA CELMIRA JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2008, 11:25:46 AM »
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...it's amazing Shael...good job...

SHUKRIYA J.H.L.
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2008, 11:30:41 AM »
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DARR KE SAAYE ME REHTE HAI HAM KI KAHIIN
AANE WALA NAYA PAL, PHIR SE KUCH CHEEN
KAR NA LE JAAYE HAMSE,

JO BACHI KHUCHI HAI KHUSHIYAAN BAKI
ZINDAGI KI KAHIIN WO BHI NA ROOTH JAAYE
HAMSE,

APNE-APNE NA RAHE DOST-DOST NA RAHE KAHIIN
HAMARA KHUD KA ZAMIIR BHI NA KHO JAAYE
HAMSE,

YAADEIN HAI, BEETE DINO KI, AANSOO HAI BEETE
PALO KE, YE NA HO NAYE AANSOO ISS TARAH BAHE
KI YE BHI CHOOT JAAYE HAMSE,

U TO AISA PASS KUCH NAHI JISSE BACHANE KA DARR
HAI, PAR HAAN MUJHE KHUD KE AANSOO OR YAADON
KE KHO JAANE KA DARR HAI…

BY. K.SHAEL
bahut acha likha ha is padkar apna dard ka ehasas ho gaya
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2008, 11:32:35 AM »
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nice poem
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 12:18:49 PM »
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Applause nice work

marne ke dar se aye dil
jeena na tu chod dena
rone ke dar se aye dil
hasna na tu chod dena

                     -nm-
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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2008, 01:20:03 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne shael sis
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2008, 01:33:40 PM »
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KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI SHALLY DEAR
BAHUT EMOTIONAL HAI SWEETHEART...
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2008, 02:51:18 PM »
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nice shally! bahot pasand aaya!

yaadon ko koh jaanay ka darr muhje bhi hai, unnhee ke saharay ub tuk jeetay aaen hain...
wo pal, wo din jo shaamon mein dhul k bitaaen hain.
koi cheehn na sakayga wo waqt humse, phir kyon darr rehta hai kuch koh jaanay ka?
buss ye hai, k tumhara bann k rehna hai humesha, darr hai tho sirf kisee aur ka ho jaanay ka...
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«Reply #11 on: November 14, 2008, 03:17:14 PM »
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U TO AISA PASS KUCH NAHI JISSE BACHANE KA DARR
HAI, PAR HAAN MUJHE KHUD KE AANSOO OR YAADON
KE KHO JAANE KA DARR HAI…
BY. K.SHAEL

Kyaa hi umdah 'khouf' hain SHAEL ji!! Gadya kaavya padhhney jaisaa aanand milaa!
                                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: November 14, 2008, 06:36:12 PM »
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Bahut  Khoob likha hai aap ne Shael Ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 15, 2008, 04:47:07 AM »
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bahut acha likha ha is padkar apna dard ka ehasas ho gaya


SHUKRIYA SALONI...
NICE TO SEE U IN MY THREAD,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #14 on: November 15, 2008, 04:48:32 AM »
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Applause nice work

marne ke dar se aye dil
jeena na tu chod dena
rone ke dar se aye dil
hasna na tu chod dena

                     -nm-


SHUKRIYA SAJID JI,
& NICE LINES FROM UR SIDE,
BY. K.SHAEL
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