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Deakh kar maut ko zindagi kah gayi
Usko dekha to maiN dekhti rah gayi
Naa gilaa hii kiya naa hi shikwaa kiyaa
Muflisi meri youN sabhi kuch sah gayi
WoH mileNga mujhe tha yakeeN bhi magar
Aik ummid thi bachi woh bhi dah gayi
Thi khawahisheN kayiN ParwaaZ kii
AarzooeN saari ashkoN meiN bah gayi
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Mohammad Touhid
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2012, 09:23:21 AM » |
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 bahut khoob parwaaz sahab...  dhero daad.. |
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2012, 09:23:31 AM » |
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Parwaz saheb , bahut khoob , aap ka mukhtasar
magar khubsurat kalaam parh kar bahut achha
laga . daad ke sath nai nai peshkashon ke sath
aate rahne ki darkhwast hai. HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: September 10, 2012, 09:58:11 AM » |
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waah waah Parwaaz ji laajawaab peshkash bahut bahut mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: September 10, 2012, 10:25:47 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2012, 12:47:21 PM » |
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Waah waah janab kya kehne, kya khoob kalaam se nawaza hai aapne hameiN. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2012, 12:49:28 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2012, 02:41:42 PM » |
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Parwaaz bhaai aadaab
SadiyooN baad aapkee koi peshkash parne ko milee. Bahoot achchaa lagaa. Saare sher bahoot khoobsurat the.
Khudaa haafeej
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«Reply #9 on: September 10, 2012, 03:34:58 PM » |
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Bahut bahut khoob Parwaaz bhai kya baat hai.. aap jitni acchi tareef nahi kar sakta..thode ko bahut samajhiyega. Bahut umda kalaam meri subhkaamnaayen Satish sahab ki ek line yaad aa gayee. daastaane kayee unkahee hain priye |
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«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2012, 03:48:11 PM » |
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Naa gilaa hii kiya naa hi shikwaa kiyaa
Muflisi meri youN sabhi kuch sah gayi
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«Reply #11 on: September 10, 2012, 07:24:44 PM » |
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