Dharaatal sa lage

by Pooja on August 07, 2009, 10:30:48 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2009, 05:05:33 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 28, 2009, 01:43:36 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,wonderful creation.beautiful lines by Cara ji and Kaash ji.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukaria Madhu ji!!
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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2009, 05:35:52 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 28, 2009, 02:06:10 PM
Poojaji ek aur achhi rachna aap ki....Achha saath de rahe hai Caraji,Kaashji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe ab sab kuchh hra hra(green) sa lage
Ghar sansaar bhara bhara sa lage
Piya saath tere ab jeevan pura pura lage
Tera sath zindagi main, dharaatal sa lage



wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mera dunia mai, jaise ek naya janam hua hai
mila hai jab se tera sath, jeevan jeena sargam hua hai
her baat main sur, jeena jaise ek taal hua hai
Tera sath, zindagi main, mera dharatal hua hai!!
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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2009, 05:36:16 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 28, 2009, 02:16:32 PM
bahut khoob Pooja di, Cara ji, @Kaash ji  and Smardia ji  Clapping Smiley

Thanks Dear!!
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2009, 05:52:26 PM »
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bahut pyaare alfaaz likhe hai aapne Pooja ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khub Cara ji,kaash ji,mardia ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2009, 07:30:03 PM »
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Wah wah wah kaya baat hai..POOJAJI itna positive attitute...naya janm mubarak ho.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye kaisi khushi payi hai ki janm naya lage
Kisne chhede dil k taar ki jivan sargam lage
Haav-bhaav,chaal-dhaal,sur-taal madhur geet lage
Paya piya ka saath.Jeevan ab sangeet ki mehfil lage




Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 05:35:52 PM

wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mera dunia mai, jaise ek naya janam hua hai
mila hai jab se tera sath, jeevan jeena sargam hua hai
her baat main sur, jeena jaise ek taal hua hai
Tera sath, zindagi main, mera dharatal hua hai!!
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«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2009, 08:04:39 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on August 28, 2009, 07:30:03 PM
Wah wah wah kaya baat hai..POOJAJI itna positive attitute...naya janm mubarak ho.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ye kaisi khushi payi hai ki janm naya lage
Kisne chhede dil k taar ki jivan sargam lage
Haav-bhaav,chaal-dhaal,sur-taal madhur geet lage
Paya piya ka saath.Jeevan ab sangeet ki mehfil lage


wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob...smardia ji

Mere jawab per sawal ki mohar na laga
mere khwab per haqiqat ki chadar na bicha
hu khush to jhoom lene de mujhe pal do pal
sawalo se phir mujhe, meri haqiqat na dikha
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«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2009, 08:08:28 PM »
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Jo abhi likha wo ek dum se smardia ji apki lines parr kar reaction mai likha gaya... ab laga ki wo to thread se hat kar ho gaya.. magar hai zindagi ka hissa he... so delete nahi kar rahi hu.. magar phir se jawab dene ki koshish karne lagi hu..

hu khush ki koi zindagi main ayya hai
pakad mera hath, mujhe mere hone ka ahsaas dilaya hai
dar rahi thi jahan main khud he khud ke saye se
per ab uske saaye main bhi khud ko surkshit paaya hai

yeh sahi jawab hua ab.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2009, 09:49:22 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 08:04:39 PM
wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob...smardia ji

Mere jawab per sawal ki mohar na laga
mere khwab per haqiqat ki chadar na bicha
hu khush to jhoom lene de mujhe pal do pal
sawalo se phir mujhe, meri haqiqat na dikha
Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 08:08:28 PM
Jo abhi likha wo ek dum se smardia ji apki lines parr kar reaction mai likha gaya... ab laga ki wo to thread se hat kar ho gaya.. magar hai zindagi ka hissa he... so delete nahi kar rahi hu.. magar phir se jawab dene ki koshish karne lagi hu..

hu khush ki koi zindagi main ayya hai
pakad mera hath, mujhe mere hone ka ahsaas dilaya hai
dar rahi thi jahan main khud he khud ke saye se
per ab uske saaye main bhi khud ko surkshit paaya hai

yeh sahi jawab hua ab.. Usual Smile
Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 05:35:52 PM

wah wah wah kaya baat hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mera dunia mai, jaise ek naya janam hua hai
mila hai jab se tera sath, jeevan jeena sargam hua hai
her baat main sur, jeena jaise ek taal hua hai
Tera sath, zindagi main, mera dharatal hua hai!!

aaap to is mein chaar chand lagaati ja rahi hain
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«Reply #23 on: August 28, 2009, 09:50:13 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 08, 2009, 06:46:37 AM
KYA BAAT HAI    POOJA JI......

KABHI GUM,KABHI KHUSHI SA LAGEY,
TERA SAATH ZINDAGI MAIN AJEEB SA LAGEY.

KABHI LAGTA HAIN SAB KUCH PAA LIYA HAI MAINE,
KABHI LAGTA ,KUCH BHI TOH NAHIN HAI, ZINDAGI MAIN MERE.

NA JAANE KAISA EHSAAS RAHETA HAI,HAR WAQAT ZINDAGI MAIN,
KI TERA SAATH MUJHKO AJEEB SA LAGTA HAIN.



bahut acchi peshkash cara ji
padkar accha laga
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«Reply #24 on: August 28, 2009, 10:54:04 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 28, 2009, 09:49:22 PM
aaap to is mein chaar chand lagaati ja rahi hain

App bhi kuch sitare bikhar de... asmaan poora ho jayega Usual Smile

bahoot bahoot shukaria TGR ji.. app jaise dost himmat dete rahte hai!! kalam likhti rahti hai!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 29, 2009, 07:03:50 AM »
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Jaise aap kahein

Unki Justjoo mein apne aap ko maine khoj liya
Unki Aabru mein apne aap ko samet liya
Kahaan mein ek kaynath ka ek ansh tha
Unke saaye ne mujhe kaynaath se milwa diya

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«Reply #26 on: August 31, 2009, 12:41:20 AM »
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bahoot khoob TGR JI
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