Dhongi hai

by jannatjahan on March 14, 2009, 10:06:28 AM
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Zindagi ki raah bahut kathin hai
har insaan dorangi hai
kyun karein bharosa kisi par
jab bhagwaan hi dhongi hai.
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2009, 10:15:04 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on March 14, 2009, 10:06:28 AM
Zindagi ki raah bahut kathin hai
har insaan dorangi hai
kyun karein bharosa kisi par
jab bhagwaan hi dhongi hai.

Jannat Ji,

Aapki pehli do lines bohot achchi hain......!!

Lekin dear Uparwala 'dhongi' nahin hai...Aisa kehna theek nahin....USKA khel WO jaane, par Uske har kaam main koi na koi baat chhupi hui hai, jise hume pehchanna hai !!
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2009, 05:13:24 PM »
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Aaoozbillah, Ye Kya Yaar Aisa Nahi Kehte, Pehle Do Lines Se Main Sehmat Hoon, Aakhri Ashaars Pe Aitraaz Hai,.
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2009, 05:25:26 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 14, 2009, 10:15:04 AM
Jannat Ji,

Aapki pehli do lines bohot achchi hain......!!

Lekin dear Uparwala 'dhongi' nahin hai...Aisa kehna theek nahin....USKA khel WO jaane, par Uske har kaam main koi na koi baat chhupi hui hai, jise hume pehchanna hai !!


celmira ji kisi ke dil ko thes panhuchana nahi chahti thi,par usne mere sath aisa kuch nahi kiya ki mai uspe yakeen kar sakun,
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2009, 05:32:27 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 14, 2009, 05:13:24 PM
Aaoozbillah, Ye Kya Yaar Aisa Nahi Kehte, Pehle Do Lines Se Main Sehmat Hoon, Aakhri Ashaars Pe Aitraaz Hai,.
Sorry kisi ko hurt nahi karna chahti main, par mujhe us par nahi insaniyat par yakeen hai aur mai insaan ki puja karti hun,mere bure waqt me usne mera sath nahi diya, diya to chand insano ne,main us par kabhi yakeen nahi kar sakti,plz mujhe galat na samajhein.
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2009, 05:36:19 PM »
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Sorry kisi ko hurt nahi karna chahti main, par mujhe us par nahi insaniyat par yakeen hai aur mai insaan ki puja karti hun,mere bure waqt me usne mera sath nahi diya, diya to chand insano ne,main us par kabhi yakeen nahi kar sakti,plz mujhe galat na samajhein.

Jin Insaanon Ne Aapki Madad Ki Thi, Unke Dil Mein Wo Ehsaas Kisne Daala,.
Wohi Khudaa Hai,.

Khuda Bandon Ki Madad Kisi Bhi Cheez Se Kar Deta Hai,.
Bas Hume Usko Pehnchaan Na Hai,.

Khair Rab Tumhaara Bhala Kare,.
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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2009, 05:44:20 PM »
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Jannat Ji may bhi pahele do punktiyon se sahmat hoon
par antin do se nahi.
Mera to hamesha se yeh maan.na hai ki bhagwan jo karta hai achchha
karta hai
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Sabne sahi kaha...pehli do lines kamal ki hai par akhri do!!!hmm waise apne jo dil main tha woh likha aur iske liye Rahim apko salute karta hai...Ek kehna man na mera...andhere main bet kar apni zindagi pe roshni dalna...chand pal zindagi ki bhag dod ko bhul kar khud ke bare main sochna...apni zindagi ke bare main sochna...aise kayi pal miljaenga jahan Khuda nazar ayega...koshish kariyega Jannat jee...
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Quote from: dead heart on March 14, 2009, 09:52:32 PM
Sabne sahi kaha...pehli do lines kamal ki hai par akhri do!!!hmm waise apne jo dil main tha woh likha aur iske liye Rahim apko salute karta hai...Ek kehna man na mera...andhere main bet kar apni zindagi pe roshni dalna...chand pal zindagi ki bhag dod ko bhul kar khud ke bare main sochna...apni zindagi ke bare main sochna...aise kayi pal miljaenga jahan Khuda nazar ayega...koshish kariyega Jannat jee...
Thanks rahimji mujhe ab aisa lagne laga hai ki mai galat hun apni soch badalne  ki kosis karungi rosni ki kiran dikhane ke liye aap sabhi doston ka shukriya.
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2009, 05:07:53 AM »
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 Allah / khuda/ bhagwan aap jis naam sey pukarin , uskey barey main aisa kahna

  bahot ghalat hai ...astaghferuullah .

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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2009, 07:41:44 AM »
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Thanks rahimji mujhe ab aisa lagne laga hai ki mai galat hun apni soch badalne  ki kosis karungi rosni ki kiran dikhane ke liye aap sabhi doston ka shukriya.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Jannat jee jo apne meri baat pe gaur farmaya...zarur koshish kariyega..bahaut faeda milega...
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2009, 06:30:53 AM »
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very nice bhaout achy tum ny the kha hai m sahmat hoo tumharey baat sy
 upar waly kay bas kee baat nahi bas dukh daita hai
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