Dhoop Seh Kar Jo Zamaane Ko De Chaau......

by khwaish on May 28, 2009, 07:10:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 01, 2009, 07:00:04 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 29, 2009, 05:20:30 PM
Sach mein bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne Hamesha ki tarah KhwaishJi...

Sach hi hia, insaan agar rishton ki ehmiyat ko samajh jaaye to duniya ke kitne dukh sulajh jaaye...

Lovely to read this work Usual Smile

Thankyou Soooooo Much Angel!! Aapne iss Nam Ke Dard Ko Samjha Aur Saraha..Teh Dil se Shukriya Dost!!
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«Reply #16 on: June 01, 2009, 07:37:03 PM »
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Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

bahut yakeen dila gaye aapke shabd
dost aor dosti par
fantastic composition
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«Reply #17 on: June 05, 2009, 04:47:37 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 29, 2009, 06:50:09 PM
Waah KYa Khobn Kaha Hai, Khwaish Bhai, Sachchi, Ek Bohat Bohat Achchi Nazm Pardhne Ko Mili,.


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem..
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«Reply #18 on: June 06, 2009, 11:32:18 AM »
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Mindblowing.. Khwaish Ji.. I really liked the Title.. and the Poetry inside is Fantastic... ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: June 06, 2009, 12:35:01 PM »
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OH DEAR KYA LIKHA HAI YAAR TUMNE
DIL GAADAN GAADAN HO GAYA
WAKAI BAHUT KHUB
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«Reply #20 on: June 07, 2009, 02:31:49 PM »
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Quote from: Nira on June 01, 2009, 07:37:03 PM
Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

bahut yakeen dila gaye aapke shabd
dost aor dosti par
fantastic composition

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Niraji..Aapne Itna Kuch keh diya,Ke Kya Kahoon Aap..Thanks A Lot For Giving your Time To This poetry..
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«Reply #21 on: June 08, 2009, 06:47:32 AM »
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atiuttam Khwaish ji........Mandir Masjid Charch Gurudware........jis tarah se inhe aapne ek sath prastut kiya h.....kaabile tarif h

           rishte naate sab dhagoon ki tarah hote h........bahoot bahoot khub

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«Reply #22 on: June 09, 2009, 03:19:43 PM »
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Mindblowing.. Khwaish Ji.. I really liked the Title.. and the Poetry inside is Fantastic... ! Usual Smile

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Sophi..Ek Ke Comment Ka Intezaar Sa Rehta Hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2009, 06:58:29 AM »
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OH DEAR KYA LIKHA HAI YAAR TUMNE
DIL GAADAN GAADAN HO GAYA
WAKAI BAHUT KHUB

Thankyou Sooo Much Bro..
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«Reply #24 on: June 28, 2009, 05:17:19 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 08, 2009, 06:47:32 AM
atiuttam Khwaish ji........Mandir Masjid Charch Gurudware........jis tarah se inhe aapne ek sath prastut kiya h.....kaabile tarif h

           rishte naate sab dhagoon ki tarah hote h........bahoot bahoot khub

                      Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Pooja!!!!

Aapne iss nazm ko Padha Aur Saraha,Yeh jaankar,bahut khushi Hui hai..

Thanks A Million Dost!! icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: June 29, 2009, 12:57:58 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 28, 2009, 07:10:39 PM
Band Palkon Mein Ujaalo Ki Tarah Hote Hai,
Rishte To Zindagi Ki raahon Mein, Chiraago Ki Tarah hote Hai!!!


Rishto Ko Nibhaana Aa Jaaye To Mann Khusbooyon Se Bhar Jaata Hai,
Kaanto Ke beech yeh Rishte Phoolon Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke,Dhoop Sehkar Bhi Jo Zamaane Ko Deta Hai Chaau,
Woh Mandir ,Masjid, Church Aur Gurduwaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Apno Mein Aur Gairon Mein Jo Kabhi Fark Naa Kare,
Woh Insaan Bi Farishto Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


Woh Shaks Ka Jeena Bhi Kya Hai Jeena, Jo Jiye Sirf khud Ke Liye,
Doobte Hue Ko Jo Naa Sambhaal Sake Woh To Sirf Kinaaro Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!


"Khwaish" Yeh Zindagi Aakhir Kya Hai??
Ek Rang-Birangi Chaadar!!!

Rishte-Naate Sab Dhaago Ki Tarah Hote Hai!!!

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

a very good creation khwaish ji
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«Reply #26 on: July 05, 2009, 01:00:39 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 29, 2009, 12:57:58 AM
a very good creation khwaish ji

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Pooja..
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«Reply #27 on: July 05, 2009, 01:06:51 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,mindblowing,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: July 11, 2009, 06:58:33 AM »
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Wow Khwaish ji,mindblowing,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhuji..

Thanks A Lot For Always Appreciaiting My work!!! icon_flower
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OH DEAR KYA LIKHA HAI YAAR TUMNE
DIL GAADAN GAADAN HO GAYA
WAKAI BAHUT KHUB

Bahut bahut Shukriya Aapka
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