Dhum machate ho......

by manjum on April 05, 2011, 03:51:07 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1720 times)
manjum
Guest
Reply with quote
Rat gaye sapnon main mere,
Tum chupke se aa jate ho.

Meri naindon ki tanhai main,
Kitni dhum machate ho.

Kyo mere sannate main tum,
Chupke se Ghuspaithh kiye ho.

Jane kya kya kah dete ho,
kitni baat chhupate ho.

manju "mann"



Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
*~*Dhum Hilana Seekh Le*~* by Roja in Miscellaneous Shayri
*~*Dhum Hilana Seekh Le*~* by Roja in Miscellaneous Shayri
nirala
Guest
«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 04:26:49 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah ye to mast likha hai apne.
ekdum alag aur masti bhara Usual SmileUsual Smile
ye khuskhusi andaaz acha hai bht.
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 04:36:31 AM »
Reply with quote
bahutbahut shukiriya niralaji...

hausla hai aapka dia....

sath rahie...
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2011, 04:39:24 AM »
Reply with quote
aap aisa likho hum aur husla denge Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2011, 04:39:51 AM »
Reply with quote
aap aisa likho hum aur husla denge Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2011, 04:43:08 AM »
Reply with quote
ji....koshish karte rahenge....

thanks aapko....
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2011, 04:50:48 AM »
Reply with quote
humara farz hai hausala dena isme thanx ki jarurat nahi
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2011, 06:51:40 PM »
Reply with quote
Bahut Khub Manjum Ji
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2011, 03:15:10 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya rishiji.....
Logged
Yaash
Guest
«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2011, 06:42:06 PM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2011, 03:12:00 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya yaash....
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2011, 08:07:22 AM »
Reply with quote
Rat gaye sapnon main mere,
Tum chupke se aa jate ho.

Meri naindon ki tanhai main,
Kitni dhum machate ho.

Kyo mere sannate main tum,
Chupke se Ghuspaithh kiye ho.

Jane kya kya kah dete ho,
kitni baat chhupate ho.

manju "mann"





NICE
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2011, 08:52:44 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya shebaji...
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #13 on: April 17, 2011, 12:43:00 PM »
Reply with quote
Rat gaye sapnon main mere,
Tum chupke se aa jate ho.

Meri naindon ki tanhai main,
Kitni dhum machate ho.

Kyo mere sannate main tum,
Chupke se Ghuspaithh kiye ho.

Jane kya kya kah dete ho,
kitni baat chhupate ho.

manju "mann"






veri naaaaaaice
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #14 on: April 18, 2011, 03:41:17 AM »
Reply with quote
bahutbahut shukriya khamoshji...

sah rahie..
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 03:02:40 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.099 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer