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हर रोज़ ढूंढ़ता है यहाँ आफ़ताब क्या
हर शक़्स ओढ़ बैठा है कोई नक़ाब क्या

पूछा जब फलक ने क्या हाल-चाल है
मुश्किल में पढ़ गई ज़मीं दे जवाब क्या

उलझी हुई है दुनिया किसी जद्दो-जेहद में
ऐसे में काम आएगी दिल की किताब क्या

खुशियां तो उँगलियों पे कई बार गिन चुके
पर ग़म हैं बेइंतेहा, ग़मों का हिसाब क्या

गुज़री है आज रात भी कल की तरह 'मीना'
नींदें ही उड़ चुकी हैं तो देखेंगे ख्वाब क्या

har roz dhundta hai yahan aftaab kya
har shaqs odh baitha hai koi naqaab kya

poochha jab falak ne kya haal-chaal hai
mushkil mein padh gayii zameen de jawaab kya

uljhi hui hai duniya kisi jaddo-jehad mein
aise mein kaam aayegi dil kii kitaab kya

khushiyaan to ungliyon pe kai baar gin chuke
par gam hai beinteha, gamon ka hisaab kya

guzri hai aaj raat bhi kal kii tarah 'meena'
neendein hi ud chuki hain to dekhenge khwaab kya
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2014, 02:17:15 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2014, 02:21:41 PM »
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Quote from: mixie on April 01, 2014, 01:33:28 PM
हर रोज़ ढूंढ़ता है यहाँ आफ़ताब क्या
हर शक़्स ओढ़ बैठा है कोई नक़ाब क्या

पूछा जब फलक ने क्या हाल-चाल है
मुश्किल में पढ़ गई ज़मीं दे जवाब क्या

उलझी हुई है दुनिया किसी जद्दो-जेहद में
ऐसे में काम आएगी दिल की किताब क्या

खुशियां तो उँगलियों पे कई बार गिन चुके
पर ग़म हैं बेइंतेहा, ग़मों का हिसाब क्या

गुज़री है आज रात भी कल की तरह 'मीना'
नींदें ही उड़ चुकी हैं तो देखेंगे ख्वाब क्या

har roz dhundta hai yahan aftaab kya
har shaqs odh baitha hai koi naqaab kya

poochha jab falak ne kya haal-chaal hai
mushkil mein padh gayii zameen de jawaab kya

uljhi hui hai duniya kisi jaddo-jehad mein
aise mein kaam aayegi dil kii kitaab kya

khushiyaan to ungliyon pe kai baar gin chuke
par gam hai beinteha, gamon ka hisaab kya

guzri hai aaj raat bhi kal kii tarah 'meena'
neendein hi ud chuki hain to dekhenge khwaab kya
waah waah meene jee lajawaab kalaam likha hai apne

har ashhar khoob rahe ,,,behad daad aur ek Rau ke haqdaar.

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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2014, 02:38:04 PM »
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Quote from: mixie on April 01, 2014, 01:33:28 PM
हर रोज़ ढूंढ़ता है यहाँ आफ़ताब क्या
हर शक़्स ओढ़ बैठा है कोई नक़ाब क्या

पूछा जब फलक ने क्या हाल-चाल है
मुश्किल में पढ़ गई ज़मीं दे जवाब क्या

उलझी हुई है दुनिया किसी जद्दो-जेहद में
ऐसे में काम आएगी दिल की किताब क्या

खुशियां तो उँगलियों पे कई बार गिन चुके
पर ग़म हैं बेइंतेहा, ग़मों का हिसाब क्या

गुज़री है आज रात भी कल की तरह 'मीना'
नींदें ही उड़ चुकी हैं तो देखेंगे ख्वाब क्या

har roz dhundta hai yahan aftaab kya
har shaqs odh baitha hai koi naqaab kya

poochha jab falak ne kya haal-chaal hai
mushkil mein padh gayii zameen de jawaab kya

uljhi hui hai duniya kisi jaddo-jehad mein
aise mein kaam aayegi dil kii kitaab kya

khushiyaan to ungliyon pe kai baar gin chuke
par gam hai beinteha, gamon ka hisaab kya

guzri hai aaj raat bhi kal kii tarah 'meena'
neendein hi ud chuki hain to dekhenge khwaab kya


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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2014, 04:08:19 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2014, 05:15:25 PM »
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Quote from: mixie on April 01, 2014, 01:33:28 PM
हर रोज़ ढूंढ़ता है यहाँ आफ़ताब क्या
हर शक़्स ओढ़ बैठा है कोई नक़ाब क्या

पूछा जब फलक ने क्या हाल-चाल है
मुश्किल में पढ़ गई ज़मीं दे जवाब क्या

उलझी हुई है दुनिया किसी जद्दो-जेहद में
ऐसे में काम आएगी दिल की किताब क्या

खुशियां तो उँगलियों पे कई बार गिन चुके
पर ग़म हैं बेइंतेहा, ग़मों का हिसाब क्या

गुज़री है आज रात भी कल की तरह 'मीना'
नींदें ही उड़ चुकी हैं तो देखेंगे ख्वाब क्या

har roz dhundta hai yahan aftaab kya
har shaqs odh baitha hai koi naqaab kya

poochha jab falak ne kya haal-chaal hai
mushkil mein padh gayii zameen de jawaab kya

uljhi hui hai duniya kisi jaddo-jehad mein
aise mein kaam aayegi dil kii kitaab kya

khushiyaan to ungliyon pe kai baar gin chuke
par gam hai beinteha, gamon ka hisaab kya

guzri hai aaj raat bhi kal kii tarah 'meena'
neendein hi ud chuki hain to dekhenge khwaab kya


Mohtarma mixie sahiba! salam masnoon


hamari taraf say bharpoor daad qabool kijay... maaloom nahi aap ka is men koi interest hay ya nahi, lekin hum is ki ravaani (beher) say mutaliq kuch baten kehna chahtay hen... is ghazal kay kuch misray ravaani men pooray nahi utar rahay aur parhnay men maza kam detay hen... hum apni taraf say is men kuch halki phulki tabdeeli kay sath ghazal ko dobara likh rahay hen. hamen ilm hay k insaan ko sirf apnay alfaz he pasand aatay hen, so hum ye sirf is liyay kar rahay hen k shayad ravaani ko jaan kar ya mehsood kar k aap khud is ko behter kar saken. aap k alfaz men tabdeeli par maazrat kay saath...

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har roz dhundta hai yahan aftaab kya
har shaqs odh baitha hai koi naqaab kya

poochha tha jab falak ne k hai haal-chaal kya
mushkil mein padh gayii zameen de jawaab kya

kaisi jado-jehed mein ye duniya ulajh gai
aise mein kaam aayegi dil kii kitaab kya

khushiyaan to ungliyon pe kai baar gin chuke
beinteha hain gham, so ghamon ka hisaab kya

'meena' guzar gai ye raat bhi ba-tor-e-kal
neendein hi ud chuki hain to dekhenge khwaab kya


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isay kuch baar ravaani men parh kar dekhiyay, shayad kuch farq nazar aayay...umeed hay agar hamari koshish say kuch faida na hua ho ga to nuqsaan bhi na hua ho ga.


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ahqar-vb jee, tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka aur aapke sujhaav ka. Main ispe zaroor  gaur karungi...aap hamesha mujhe isi tarha se hausla afzahi dete rahein, mujhe bilkul kharaab nahin lagega...maine filhaal hi likhna shuru kiya hai, aur seekh hi rahi hun.

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Baki sabon ka bhi bahut bahut shukriya is hausla afzahi ke liye...

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