dil ke tukdon ko

by saahill on November 11, 2011, 05:16:07 AM
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shor hota hai jo pehlu mein to dar lagta hai .
Dil ke tukdon ke koi tukde jaise karta hai .

Mar mite they kabhi humpar woh humnasheen ,
jeete jee maar gaye humko yeh gham khalta hai .

Apne hathon se jo boyee thi humne dard ki fasal .
Pak gaye hain zakham woh hi dard karta hai
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«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2011, 08:25:11 AM »
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bahut umda sahill ji
Quote from: saahill on November 11, 2011, 05:16:07 AM
shor hota hai jo pehlu mein to dar lagta hai .
Dil ke tukdon ke koi tukde jaise karta hai .

Mar mite they kabhi humpar woh humnasheen ,
jeete jee maar gaye humko yeh gham khalta hai .

Apne hathon se jo boyee thi humne dard ki fasal .
Pak gaye hain zakham woh hi dard karta hai
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«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2011, 08:32:24 AM »
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shukrya sunil ji apka sath dene ke liye
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«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2011, 02:10:17 PM »
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dil ki gehrayon ko hum jaan gaye jab pyar ka sila mila .

Tukdon mein dekha to dard mein doob gaye
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2011, 02:52:50 PM »
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shor hota hai jo pehlu mein to dar lagta hai .
Dil ke tukdon ke koi tukde jaise karta hai .

Mar mite they kabhi humpar woh humnasheen ,
jeete jee maar gaye humko yeh gham khalta hai .

Apne hathon se jo boyee thi humne dard ki fasal .
Pak gaye hain zakham woh hi dard karta hai
wah wah janaab
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2011, 04:02:18 PM »
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thx sarfira ji
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saahil ji bahu khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2011, 04:13:48 PM »
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shukrya surEsh ji bas sath dete rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2011, 06:36:26 PM »
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nice creation saahil ji....
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«Reply #9 on: November 11, 2011, 06:47:43 PM »
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Waah janab Waah

Kia kahne bahut achchi shayari kar raheN hai janab
achche khayaaloN ko behad khoob lafz diye hai janab..

par yeH ishq ki haryaali se gham o dard ki mayusi
hum samjh nahi paaye.. waise bahut khoob likha hai aapne

humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye janab ..

Likhate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   
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thx sameer ji
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