dil ki baat........sheba

by Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:33:04 AM
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                          guzarti havaa se meri khabar na puchiye.!
                          hai kitna bahaar mein apna asar na puchiye.!


                          kiya qabul hamein uss hijr ki raat ko..,
                          rahi kaisi phir wo sehar na puchiye..,


                         rahi betaab nigaah har lamhe uske liye..,
                          ab ek naabine se kaifiyat-e-manzar na puchiye..,
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                         mila ek rahbar mujhe jaanib-e-raah-e-manzil..,
                          banaa phir kaise meraa hum-safar na puchiye..,


                          rahi anjaan sheba apne husn ki nadaani se.!
                          barse aashiqo.N pe kaise-kaise qahar na puchiye.!
                          
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 10:42:16 AM »
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                          guzarti havaa se meri khabar na puchiye.!
                          hai kitna bahaar mein apna asar na puchiye.!

bahut khoob matlaa hua hai ......... bahut khoob


                          kiya qabul hamein uss hijr ki raat ko..,
                          rahaa kaisa phir wo sehar na puchiye..,

ahha very nice


                          rahi betaab nigaah har lamhe uske liye..,
                          ab ek naabine se kaifiyat-e-manzar na puchiye..,
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                          mila ek rahbar mujhe jaanib-e-raah-e-manzil..,
                          banaa phir kaise meraa hum-safar na puchiye..,

bahut achy


                          rahi anjaan sheba apne husn ki nadaani se.!
                          barse aashiqo.N pe kaise-kaise qahar na puchiye.!
hahahahaha............... ye to khud hi ki traeef huee Usual Smile

nice to read u ...........
bahut achi adaygi hai aapki................                         
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 10:47:28 AM »
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waah boht khua sheba ji realy heart touching lines
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 11:22:42 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 11:23:18 AM »
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hum to poochhenge bhi aur aapko jawaab bhi dena padega.... bataao bataao bataao.. maamla aakhir hai kya Huh??? jaldi se raaz par se pardaa uthaao....!!!

bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. mazaa aa gaya padh ke...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 11:31:14 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Sheba Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 11:42:27 AM »
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 Applause :clap:beautiful! Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 12:56:36 PM »
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waah bohat khoob...
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superb mam
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 01:21:21 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:33:04 AM
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                          guzarti havaa se meri khabar na puchiye.!
                          hai kitna bahaar mein apna asar na puchiye.!


                          kiya qabul hamein uss hijr ki raat ko..,
                          rahi kaisi phir wo sehar na puchiye..,


                          rahi betaab nigaah har lamhe uske liye..,
                          ab ek naabine se kaifiyat-e-manzar na puchiye..,
[/color]


                          mila ek rahbar mujhe jaanib-e-raah-e-manzil..,
                          banaa phir kaise meraa hum-safar na puchiye..,


                          rahi anjaan sheba apne husn ki nadaani se.!
                          barse aashiqo.N pe kaise-kaise qahar na puchiye.!
                         


Waah Waah waah Sheba Ji....

Khud Mu Miyan Mithu Ji bahut bahut Khoooob tongue3

Awesome Creation  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 03:14:51 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2012, 04:55:21 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!

Uff kia baat hai aik ke baad aik dhamakedar kalaamoN se
aapne bazm meiN ronak laa lii... Usual Smile

Behad khoob jee behad khoob badi hi asardaar kalaam rahi
sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe.. Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Quote from: Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:33:04 AM
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                          guzarti havaa se meri khabar na puchiye.!
                          hai kitna bahaar mein apna asar na puchiye.!

WaaH kia khoob kaha hai jee "Guzarti hawaa se meri khabar na puchiye"
Masha Allaah behad umdaa khayaal kaha hai... Is sher ke liye aik sher aapke liye..


Magreebi hawaaoN meiN nami bahut hai
Is bazm meiN tumhaari kami bahut hai                   
                   

                          kiya qabul hamein uss hijr ki raat ko..,
                          rahi kaisi phir wo sehar na puchiye..,

WaaH jee bahut khoob daad..
HaaN " kiya kabul humeN us hijr ki raat meiN"
Yaa " Kiya kabul hum ne us hijr ki raat ko" kouNsi line
sahiN hai dekh lijiye... shayad aapse kuch typo mistake ho
gayi hai.. Usual Smile                   


                          rahi betaab nigaah har lamha uske liye..,
                          ab ek naabine se kaifiyat-e-manzar na puchiye..,[/color][/b]
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WaaH waaH waaH kia baat hai jee kia baat hai
bahut umdaa daad daad daad... Usual Smile                   


                          mila ek rahbar mujhe jaanib-e-raah-e-manzil..,
                          banaa phir kaise meraa hum-safar na puchiye..,

Jee yeH toH puchna padeNga koi andar ki baat
lagti hai.... tongue3
Bahut khoob...                   

                          rahi anjaan sheba apne husn ki nadaani se.!
                          barse aashiqo.N pe kaise-kaise qahar na puchiye.!

Ufff kia kahne jee waqai behad umdaa maqta kah diyaa..
gazab ka taqayyul hai behad umdaa daad daad daad... Usual Smile                   

                         
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2012, 05:02:04 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 22, 2012, 10:33:04 AM
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                          guzarti havaa se meri khabar na puchiye.!
                          hai kitna bahaar mein apna asar na puchiye.!


                          kiya qabul hamein uss hijr ki raat ko..,
                          rahi kaisi phir wo sehar na puchiye..,


                         rahi betaab nigaah har lamhe uske liye..,
                          ab ek naabine se kaifiyat-e-manzar na puchiye..,
[/color]


                         mila ek rahbar mujhe jaanib-e-raah-e-manzil..,
                          banaa phir kaise meraa hum-safar na puchiye..,


                          rahi anjaan sheba apne husn ki nadaani se.!
                          barse aashiqo.N pe kaise-kaise qahar na puchiye.!
                          

Bahut khoob excellant  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2012, 05:42:40 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sheba Jee
Applause Applause Applause
bahut hi dilkash peshkash..
dhero daad kubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2012, 06:51:18 AM »
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