Dil Se Shukaria Tumahara

by Pooja on February 10, 2009, 05:36:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 11, 2009, 04:58:47 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 11, 2009, 02:49:03 PM
Bahut hi khoob, Pooja ji!   Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Mein bhi to maan kaa hi bachchaa hoon Pooja ji!
Maan keen duaayen hain: achchhaa hoon Pooja Ji!
Kaash aaj meyree maam zindah hotee: mein bhi,
Kahtaa,"Sachchee maan, sachchaa hoon mein!" Pooja ji!
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bahoot bahoot acha aor gahra likha hai Abd ji!!
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«Reply #16 on: February 11, 2009, 06:15:59 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 11, 2009, 12:27:38 PM
Bahoth qoob Pooja bahen !! subhan allah kya ahesas se bayan hai la fani mahobbath ka !!

Kissi ke hisse ghar aya !
kissi ke hisse dukan aa-e- !!
mai ghar me subse chuta tha !!
mere hisse maa aa-e- !!

.........Munawar Rana ............

Qadeer Toopchi

Nice sharing Qadeer bhai ji!!
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«Reply #17 on: February 11, 2009, 10:16:28 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 10, 2009, 05:36:36 PM

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, tum per yah Ma dil se nissar hai

Mili her kadam per wo shakati tumse mujhe
Ajj is Ma ke samne, her dushman ki haar hai

Roti Ma ko sambhala tumne, dil mai liye hazaro sawal
Bin puche kuch, her halaat tumne, kiya mere sath sawikaar hai

Tham hath mera ghanto baithe rahe tum dono khamoshi se mere sath
Wo pal tumahri Ma ki zindagi main, sab se bada uphaar hai

Mujhe dekh thaka-preshan, sab kaam khud kar jaate ho
Bana nanhe hatho se khana, phir kahte Muskuara ke, Ma khana tyaar hai

Chulbuli hansi yah tumhari, jeene ki shakti deti hai
Dil se Pa sath tumhara, zindagi ka diya her dukh bhi mujhe sawikaar hai

Jab bhi dil ho ayya bechain, apni pyari baato se ubhara tumne
Tumahra jeevan ban jaaye uttam, bas yahi is Ma ke jeene ka ab saar hai

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, Dil Se Shukaria Tumahara, tumse yah mera jeevan-sanaar hai!!


Nice One Poojaji
Pyaar ke mayane sirf ek jaise hi nahi hote
ye aapne sikha diya sabko


Muhabbat har insan ki jarurat hai...

Lakh rang hai muhabbaton ke,
Pyaar har rang me khubsurat hai

Badal jata hai zamana lakh rango me,
Pyaar badalta nahi, kyunki pyaar toh khuda ki surat hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #18 on: February 11, 2009, 11:39:01 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 10, 2009, 05:36:36 PM

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, tum per yah Ma dil se nissar hai

Mili her kadam per wo shakati tumse mujhe
Ajj is Ma ke samne, her dushman ki haar hai

Roti Ma ko sambhala tumne, dil mai liye hazaro sawal
Bin puche kuch, her halaat tumne, kiya mere sath sawikaar hai

Tham hath mera ghanto baithe rahe tum dono khamoshi se mere sath
Wo pal tumahri Ma ki zindagi main, sab se bada uphaar hai

Mujhe dekh thaka-preshan, sab kaam khud kar jaate ho
Bana nanhe hatho se khana, phir kahte Muskuara ke, Ma khana tyaar hai

Chulbuli hansi yah tumhari, jeene ki shakti deti hai
Dil se Pa sath tumhara, zindagi ka diya her dukh bhi mujhe sawikaar hai

Jab bhi dil ho ayya bechain, apni pyari baato se ubhara tumne
Tumahra jeevan ban jaaye uttam, bas yahi is Ma ke jeene ka ab saar hai

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, Dil Se Shukaria Tumahara, tumse yah mera jeevan-sanaar hai!!


Pooja ji
U wrote a beautiful poem for your lovely sons. I agree with u that mother is first girlfriend and everything for son.
God bless all of you.
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«Reply #19 on: February 12, 2009, 04:31:29 AM »
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bahoot bahoot acha aor gahra likha hai Abd ji!!
Thanks Pooja ji!
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«Reply #20 on: February 12, 2009, 10:34:24 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 11, 2009, 02:49:03 PM
Bahut hi khoob, Pooja ji!   Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Mein bhi to maan kaa hi bachchaa hoon Pooja ji!
Maan keen duaayen hain: achchhaa hoon Pooja Ji!
Kaash aaj meyree maam zindah hotee: mein bhi,
Kahtaa,"Sachchee maan, sachchaa hoon mein!" Pooja ji!
                                 - abd bundeli

Bohot Khoob Abd Ji...Insaan kitna bhi bada ho jaaye, Maa to Maa hi rehti hai...aur uski yaadain humesha zinda rehti hain...
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«Reply #21 on: February 12, 2009, 11:32:51 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 12, 2009, 10:34:24 AM
Bohot Khoob Abd Ji...Insaan kitna bhi bada ho jaaye, Maa to Maa hi rehti hai...aur uski yaadain humesha zinda rehti hain...
Shukriyah! Aap ney bilkul thheek kahaa hai, Celmira Ji!
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«Reply #22 on: February 12, 2009, 04:11:37 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 10, 2009, 05:36:36 PM
Dedicated to my Both sons:


Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, tum per yah Ma dil se nissar hai

Mili her kadam per wo shakati tumse mujhe
Ajj is Ma ke samne, her dushman ki haar hai

Roti Ma ko sambhala tumne, dil mai liye hazaro sawal
Bin puche kuch, her halaat tumne, kiya mere sath sawikaar hai

Tham hath mera ghanto baithe rahe tum dono khamoshi se mere sath
Wo pal tumahri Ma ki zindagi main, sab se bada uphaar hai

Mujhe dekh thaka-preshan, sab kaam khud kar jaate ho
Bana nanhe hatho se khana, phir kahte Muskuara ke, Ma khana tyaar hai

Chulbuli hansi yah tumhari, jeene ki shakti deti hai
Dil se Pa sath tumhara, zindagi ka diya her dukh bhi mujhe sawikaar hai

Jab bhi dil ho ayya bechain, apni pyari baato se ubhara tumne
Tumahra jeevan ban jaaye uttam, bas yahi is Ma ke jeene ka ab saar hai

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, Dil Se Shukaria Tumahara, tumse yah mera jeevan-sanaar hai!!



Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Pooja,Aapne Jazbaati Aur Dil Ko Choo Lene wali kavita likhi hai... Hats off to you!
har ek akshar,har ek line..bahut hi meaningful aur khoobsurat hai...maafi chahunga ke bahut der baad mera reply aaya hai..
par sach mein bahut hi khoobsurat kavita hai yeh... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2009, 04:18:50 PM »
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Thanks Khwaish ji!!
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«Reply #24 on: February 12, 2009, 04:24:36 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 11, 2009, 12:27:38 PM
Bahoth qoob Pooja bahen !! subhan allah kya ahesas se bayan hai la fani mahobbath ka !!

Kissi ke hisse ghar aya !
kissi ke hisse dukan aa-e- !!
mai ghar me subse chuta tha !!
mere hisse maa aa-e- !!

.........Munawar Rana ............

Qadeer Toopchi

Bahut Khoob!! Applause Applause Applause
thanx for sharing Qadeer saheb..

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 11, 2009, 02:49:03 PM
Bahut hi khoob, Pooja ji!   Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
Mein bhi to maan kaa hi bachchaa hoon Pooja ji!
Maan keen duaayen hain: achchhaa hoon Pooja Ji!
Kaash aaj meyree maam zindah hotee: mein bhi,
Kahtaa,"Sachchee maan, sachchaa hoon mein!" Pooja ji!
                                 - abd bundeli

Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji.. Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: pankshivam on February 11, 2009, 10:16:28 PM
Nice One Poojaji
Pyaar ke mayane sirf ek jaise hi nahi hote
ye aapne sikha diya sabko


Muhabbat har insan ki jarurat hai...

Lakh rang hai muhabbaton ke,
Pyaar har rang me khubsurat hai

Badal jata hai zamana lakh rango me,
Pyaar badalta nahi, kyunki pyaar toh khuda ki surat hai...

~Pank~

Bahut Ache Pankji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: February 12, 2009, 06:08:46 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 12, 2009, 04:24:36 PM
Bahut Khoob!! Applause Applause Applause
thanx for sharing Qadeer saheb..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji.. Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Ache Pankji.. Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #26 on: February 17, 2009, 05:31:01 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on February 11, 2009, 10:16:28 PM
Nice One Poojaji
Pyaar ke mayane sirf ek jaise hi nahi hote
ye aapne sikha diya sabko


Muhabbat har insan ki jarurat hai...

Lakh rang hai muhabbaton ke,
Pyaar har rang me khubsurat hai

Badal jata hai zamana lakh rango me,
Pyaar badalta nahi, kyunki pyaar toh khuda ki surat hai...

~Pank~

Shukaria Pank ji.
wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob pank ji
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«Reply #27 on: October 16, 2010, 12:26:14 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 10, 2009, 05:36:36 PM
Dedicated to my Both sons:


Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, tum per yah Ma dil se nissar hai

Mili her kadam per wo shakati tumse mujhe
Ajj is Ma ke samne, her dushman ki haar hai

Roti Ma ko sambhala tumne, dil mai liye hazaro sawal
Bin puche kuch, her halaat tumne, kiya mere sath sawikaar hai

Tham hath mera ghanto baithe rahe tum dono khamoshi se mere sath
Wo pal tumahri Ma ki zindagi main, sab se bada uphaar hai

Mujhe dekh thaka-preshan, sab kaam khud kar jaate ho
Bana nanhe hatho se khana, phir kahte Muskuara ke, Ma khana tyaar hai

Chulbuli hansi yah tumhari, jeene ki shakti deti hai
Dil se Pa sath tumhara, zindagi ka diya her dukh bhi mujhe sawikaar hai

Jab bhi dil ho ayya bechain, apni pyari baato se ubhara tumne
Tumahra jeevan ban jaaye uttam, bas yahi is Ma ke jeene ka ab saar hai

Dil mai samman bahoot, ankhon main payar hai
E-mere bacho, Dil Se Shukaria Tumahara, tumse yah mera jeevan-sanaar hai!!



Bahut Bahut bahut Khooooob!!!!

Pooja,Aaj Phir yeh Kavita Padhne ka Mann Hua Aur Bin yahan Kuch likhe Jaana Na Hua..Bahut Hi Pyaar bhare Ehsaas,Yeh ehsaas Aise hai jinka Duniya mein koi mol nahi..iss kavita se zyaada unn bacho par pyaar aata ahi jo khud itne suljhe hai,Itne samajdhaar Hai..

Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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