Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum:Shairi - E

manjum

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Ye duniyan bemani hai,
Dil kyo iska diwana re...
Kya isse ummid lagayen,
kya khona kya pana re...

Kyo uljhe chahon aahon main,
Tadap tadap ke kyon jina.
Ghut Ghut ke hi jina hai aur,
Yun hi hai mar jana re...

Bandh rahe hain khud ko kyon,
Jhuthe rishton naton main.
Kon yahan sang main aayega,
Kisko sath nibhana re....

Jitna mann ko jodna chaha,
Sab kuchh bemani hi hi nikla.
Chhod ke esi duniya ko,
Door kahin hai jana re.......

manju "mann"


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2011, 05:36:43 AM »

ufffffffff.........kaha jane ka progrm ban raha madam........

well nice written......simple shabdo me sidhe baat........

bahot aacha aur khubsurat likha he ......ese hi likhte rahiye ji


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manjum

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2011, 05:43:04 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya matrixji........

samjh nahi pa rahe ki jaye kahan.... bas boriya bistar bandh ke taiyar hain.. jane ko...

sath rahiega.......

shukriya....


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2011, 06:12:38 AM »

Kya baat hai Manjum ji,itna dard bhari peshkash.bahut khoobi se apne dard ko bayan kiya,great work,hats off icon_thumleft


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manjum

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2011, 06:18:14 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya madhuji.....

sath dete rahie......


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2011, 06:31:39 AM »

boht acha likha manjum ji apne realy hats of u


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2011, 06:32:56 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya saahilji....

yun hi sath rahiega.......


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2011, 07:12:09 AM »

Quote from: manjum on March 14, 2011, 04:59:57 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Manju Ji..

"Band Rahe Hai Khud Ko Kyon
Jhoote Rishte Naaton Mein
Kaun Yahan Sang Mein Aayega
Kisko Saath Nibhaana Re"

Jhoote Rishte Naate Hi Sahi
Par Kuch Pal Ke Liye Sukoon Tum paaoge..

Mehiflon mein To Sab Saath hai!!!
Tanhaiyon Mein Bhi Tum Muskuraaoge..

Kisi Ki Soch, Kisi Ki Yaad Huemsha Saath Rahegi!!!
Uss Shaks Se Kabhi Naa Door Jaa Paaoge..

Umar Bhar Ka Saath Woh Shaks Naa De Payega
Par Uske Saath Beete Palon Mein!!!!
Tum Zindagi jeena Seekh Jaaoge...


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manjum

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2011, 07:18:44 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya....... bhut acha alikha hai aapne..... par.......

chalie koshish karte hain ki mushkura ke jiya jae....


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nirala

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2011, 07:36:07 AM »

wah wah manju---
ye to mere dil ki baat likh di tumne.
i love dis poetry re.
kya baat kya baat.
bahut achha laga yar ye poetry aur ye theame.
ye reality aur ye shabd.
hazaro kilo ka daad re.

""
bahut muskil hai in baaton ko nibhana re
girti hai bijliya jab chhute kisi ka saath
wese humrahiyon se zara khud ko tu bachana re
uzad jayegi duniya khud ki
na beja aas lagana re !!!!
kahte hain ye duniya nirali hai
duniya ki baato me na aana re
dekh samajh qatl kar arzuon ki ab
jhooe waade sachhi murat pe na jaana re !!
aani jaani hai kartaal dhwaniyon ki
bas khud ko hi behlaana re !!
""
be happy dear
god bless u


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madhuwesh

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2011, 07:44:34 AM »

Wah wah Khwaish ji aur Nirala ji aap dono ne bahut acha saath diya,great lines icon_thumleft

Nirala ji welcome back. icon_salut


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nirala

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #11 on: March 14, 2011, 07:49:35 AM »

thanx Madhu ji---
bt mai back nhi hua ab tak sad5

wo to aaj kaam tha isslie Cafe me aya aur reply kar paya.
back to april me hounga shayd.
bahut kuch achhi poetry miss kar dia mene sad5


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manjum

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #12 on: March 14, 2011, 07:55:38 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya niralaji.......

aapne bhi bahut hi badiya baat likhi hai.... Applause

aur aap kahan the itne dinon se ye ache comments miss kar rahe the ham.......

thanks.....


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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #13 on: March 14, 2011, 10:22:28 AM »

Bahut khoob manju mann ji n nice reply nirala ji n khwaish ji..


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manjum

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Re: Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

«Reply #14 on: March 14, 2011, 10:31:29 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya BBLji... yun hi sath rahie....... thanks...


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