Door kahin hai jana re........... manjum

by manjum on March 14, 2011, 04:59:57 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 14, 2011, 11:41:03 AM »
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mai mst ghoom rha tha bahut din se--
abhi b ghoom hi rha hun.
bs ek dost ke lie kabi kabi pese kharch karke aa jata hun ;-/
wo baad me mujhe pese dene ka wada karte hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 14, 2011, 11:48:31 AM »
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bht khoob manjum ji...
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«Reply #17 on: March 14, 2011, 11:56:20 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya.... manzilji........

sath rahana....
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«Reply #18 on: March 14, 2011, 08:16:10 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on March 14, 2011, 04:59:57 AM
Ye duniyan bemani hai,
Dil kyo iska diwana re...
Kya isse ummid lagayen,
kya khona kya pana re...

    Kyo uljhe chahon aahon main,
    Tadap tadap ke kyon jina.
    Ghut Ghut ke hi jina hai aur,
    Yun hi hai mar jana re...

Bandh rahe hain khud ko kyon,
Jhuthe rishton naton main.
Kon yahan sang main aayega,
Kisko sath nibhana re....

    Jitna mann ko jodna chaha,
    Sab kuchh bemani hi hi nikla.
    Chhod ke esi duniya ko,
    Door kahin hai jana re.......


                  manju "mann"

bahut umda manjum ji
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«Reply #19 on: March 15, 2011, 03:44:54 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji..... yun hi sath rahie..
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«Reply #20 on: March 15, 2011, 11:22:16 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: March 15, 2011, 11:29:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji.... yun hi sath rahie... housla badate rahie..
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«Reply #22 on: March 15, 2011, 05:46:35 PM »
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excellent post manju re.....dil ko chhu gya har ek shabd...bht pyara theme and post.....

aur khwaishji and nirala ji bht mast mast likha hi aap dono ne bhi....
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«Reply #23 on: March 15, 2011, 06:21:54 PM »
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Manjum Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne ... waah aise laha jaise humare ahsaas kisi ne kalam band kar diye... bahut achche ahsaas O kahyaal kahe hai aapne daad ..

Is khub kalaan par dheroN daad Hazir hai....
khush rahiye.... Likhate rahiye.....

Aur Khawahish jee aur niraala jee aapki kalaame bhi behad khoob rahi..
Hume waqt ne aur ahsaas ne bandh rakha hai warna hum yahaaN kuch likhana chahte haiN.... Khair aap dono ke khub reply par bhi dil se daad hazir hai..

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Mehfil sajate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          

Tootta hua insaaN huN kidhar jauN
Bujhta hua dhuaaN huN kidhar jauN

Mujhse naa pucho ab aye shaak e guloN tum
Ke MaiN khud bhi hairaaN huN kidhar jauN

Dunya yahaN to jahannum hai wahaN par
MaiN to Abtak pareshaaN huN kidhar jauN

Dil meiN kisi ke thikana na paa sakaa
Itnaa toH maiN naadaaN huN kidhar jauN

Parwaaz meri fitrat rokoNge kab tak
Uuthta huaa tufaaN huN kidhar jauN
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«Reply #24 on: March 15, 2011, 08:14:43 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 15, 2011, 06:21:54 PM
Manjum Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne ... waah aise laha jaise humare ahsaas kisi ne kalam band kar diye... bahut achche ahsaas O kahyaal kahe hai aapne daad ..

Is khub kalaan par dheroN daad Hazir hai....
khush rahiye.... Likhate rahiye.....

Aur Khawahish jee aur niraala jee aapki kalaame bhi behad khoob rahi..
Hume waqt ne aur ahsaas ne bandh rakha hai warna hum yahaaN kuch likhana chahte haiN.... Khair aap dono ke khub reply par bhi dil se daad hazir hai..

Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Mehfil sajate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

Tootta hua insaaN huN kidhar jauN
Bujhta hua dhuaaN huN kidhar jauN

Mujhse naa pucho ab aye shaak e guloN tum
Ke MaiN khud bhi hairaaN huN kidhar jauN

Dunya yahaN to jahannum hai wahaN par
MaiN to Abtak pareshaaN huN kidhar jauN

Dil meiN kisi ke thikana na paa sakaa
Itnaa toH maiN naadaaN huN kidhar jauN

Parwaaz meri fitrat rokoNge kab tak
Uuthta huaa tufaaN huN kidhar jauN




waaaah waaaah waaaah parwaaz sahab kya khoob farmayaa.
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«Reply #25 on: March 16, 2011, 03:57:26 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwazji... bahut bahuty shukriya.....

kya baat hai aapki daad sach main aur bahut kuchh likhwaegi.... wakai is baat par hame daad milne chahie ki ham itna acha likh sake ki aapko apne dil ki baat lagne lagi......     

aur aapne to kamal likha hai... yahi wo sawal jiska jawab mil gaya hota to kabke nikal lie hote ham...... "kidar jaun"....Huh???

bahut khub.... yun hi sath rahiega.......                 
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