dukhon ka poudha hun mai

by bekarar on February 23, 2009, 09:44:11 AM
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gum me bhi hansi pirota hun mai,
khushiyon me bhi roia hun mai,

phoolon ki sez pe neend na aayi,
ab kaanton par hi sota hun mai,

jeevn ke mahabharat me nihattha,
abhimanyu ka sa yoddha hun me,

beej tha mai bhi prem-prit ka,
panapa to dukhon ka poudha hun mai,

chuppi se mujhe vidvaan na samajho,
bas mook-badhir ek shrota hun hun mai,
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2009, 01:57:59 PM »
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Panapa to dukho ka paudha hu main...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah yaar kya baat kahi hain very good.

Na samjhna kabhi khud ko alag GHAYEL se
Aur kuch nahi bas tere jaisa hu main

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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2009, 04:53:43 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 23, 2009, 09:44:11 AM
gum me bhi hansi pirota hun mai,
khushiyon me bhi roia hun mai,

phoolon ki sez pe neend na aayi,
ab kaanton par hi sota hun mai,

jeevn ke mahabharat me nihattha,
abhimanyu ka sa yoddha hun me,

beej tha mai bhi prem-prit ka,
panapa to dukhon ka poudha hun mai,

chuppi se mujhe vidvaan na samajho,
bas mook-badhir ek shrota hun hun mai,









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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 05:07:47 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 23, 2009, 09:44:11 AM
gum me bhi hansi pirota hun mai,
khushiyon me bhi roia hun mai,

phoolon ki sez pe neend na aayi,
ab kaanton par hi sota hun mai,

jeevn ke mahabharat me nihattha,
abhimanyu ka sa yoddha hun me,

beej tha mai bhi prem-prit ka,
panapa to dukhon ka poudha hun mai,

chuppi se mujhe vidvaan na samajho,
bas mook-badhir ek shrota hun hun mai,









wah bekaraar, bahut khoob

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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2009, 10:02:35 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 23, 2009, 09:44:11 AM
gum me bhi hansi pirota hun mai,
khushiyon me bhi roia hun mai,

phoolon ki sez pe neend na aayi,
ab kaanton par hi sota hun mai,

jeevn ke mahabharat me nihattha,
abhimanyu ka sa yoddha hun me,

beej tha mai bhi prem-prit ka,
panapa to dukhon ka poudha hun mai,

chuppi se mujhe vidvaan na samajho,
bas mook-badhir ek shrota hun hun mai,


Sanjeev bhai sa..Bahot hi Kam Lafzo ka Istemal Kar k aapne Chhotisi Lekin badhiya si Nazm Likhi Hai..kuch Zindagi k Pehlu bhi Ujagar huee dikhe Hai Ismein..
Waah..
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2009, 10:15:11 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sanjeev Bhaiya
too good!!! icon_salut
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2009, 10:43:15 AM »
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BOhat Achcha Bekarar Bhai,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 07:23:14 PM »
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wow too good Sanjeev ji!!!! bahoot khoob...

Nice lines Sajid!!!
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