ehsaas................sheba

by Sheba on April 26, 2012, 05:56:30 PM
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                   gir-gir ke wo sambhalta bahut hai...!
                   rahta tanha per saath chalta bahut hai...!

                   adaa tifl ki ab tak hai baaqi usmein...,
                   baat-baat pe wo machaltaa bahut hai...,

                   hai shamaa bhi fida wajood pe uske...,
                   ke qandeel ki tarah wo pighalta bahut hai..,

                   na bahaar na fiza ki hai fikr use...,
                   her gulistaan mein wo khilta bahut hai..,

                   aaye na nazar tumhein to kya kare sheba..!
                   khayaalo.N mein waise milta bahut hai.

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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 06:18:33 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sheba jee. Bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mein likha hai aapne, meri taraf se daad qabool karei.n.
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 06:26:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 06:50:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Bahot Bahot Khoob Shebaji!!! Kya andaz hai! Wah!
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 06:52:37 PM »
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                   gir-gir ke wo sambhalta bahut hai...!
                   rahta tanha per saath chalta bahut hai...!

                   adaa tifl ki ab tak hai baaqi usmein...,
                   baat-baat pe wo machaltaa bahut hai...,

                   hai shamaa bhi fida wajood pe uske...,
                   ke qandeel ki tarah wo pighalta bahut hai..,

                   na bahaar na fiza ki hai fikr use...,
                   her gulistaan mein wo khilta bahut hai..,

                   aaye na nazar tumhein to kya kare sheba..!
                   kyaalo.N mein waise milta bahut hai.


bhut sundar . Bhut umda.
Aapne jis trah apne ahsaso ko hmare saamne pesh kiya h wo tareef ke layak h.
Meri daad kabool kare
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2012, 06:53:21 PM »
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                   gir-gir ke wo sambhalta bahut hai...!
                   rahta tanha per saath chalta bahut hai...!

                   adaa tifl ki ab tak hai baaqi usmein...,
                   baat-baat pe wo machaltaa bahut hai...,

                   hai shamaa bhi fida wajood pe uske...,
                   ke qandeel ki tarah wo pighalta bahut hai..,

                   na bahaar na fiza ki hai fikr use...,
                   her gulistaan mein wo khilta bahut hai..,

                   aaye na nazar tumhein to kya kare sheba..!
                   kyaalo.N mein waise milta bahut hai.


bhut sundar . Bhut umda.
Aapne jis trah apne ahsaso ko hmare saamne pesh kiya h wo tareef ke layak h.
Meri daad kabool kare
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2012, 07:20:16 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sheba ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2012, 01:16:53 AM »
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ati  sundr kalaam pesh ki Sheba ji--
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2012, 03:06:32 AM »
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bohut khoob likha hai sheba ji daad kabool karien
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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2012, 03:38:58 AM »
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baut sundar shebaji....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2012, 05:58:16 AM »
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wowww...bahut vazandaar ek ek shabd....bahut khoob sheba....Usual Smile...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause.....
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2012, 08:15:38 AM »
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                   gir-gir ke wo sambhalta bahut hai...!
                   rahta tanha per saath chalta bahut hai...!

                   adaa tifl ki ab tak hai baaqi usmein...,
                   baat-baat pe wo machaltaa bahut hai...,

                  hai shamaa bhi fida wajood pe uske...,
                   ke qandeel ki tarah wo pighalta bahut hai..,

                   na bahaar na fiza ki hai fikr use...,
                   her gulistaan mein wo khilta bahut hai..,

                   aaye na nazar tumhein to kya kare sheba..!
                   kyaalo.N mein waise milta bahut hai.




Bahut Bahut Khooob Shebaji,Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab
Par Khaas Taur par yeh A'shaar Bahut Khoobsurat Hai..

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"Hai Shama Bhi Fida Wajood pe Uske....,
 Ke Qandeel Ki Tarah Woh Pighalta Bahut Hai
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2012, 09:14:19 AM »
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KITNEE TAAREEF KAROON? DAAD haazir hai
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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2012, 11:05:41 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... kafi khoob aur khoob ahsaas
O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob sabhi ashaar hume behad khoob lage
humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye
SHaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2012, 05:55:07 PM »
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Ijazat  nahin  di  koi  baat  nahin . Ghazal  pasand  karne  ki ijazat  to  hai ... Bahut  khubsurat  ghazal  ke  liye  bahut  bahut   mubarakbaad.
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