Eik din aakhir zameen par ................................MKV

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Apne daaman ko bachakar main chaluN
Daagh koi lag na jaaye main daruN

Halwa poori, kheer rabdee chhor dee
Ab namak se rotiyaN khaakar rahuN

Do diloN ke beech haiN ab dooriyaN
Ab shikayat dil ki dil se kya karuN

Wah re shore-muhabbat har galee
Kaan par rakh haath tauba maiN karuN

MaiN akela chaandnee aaghosh meN
Tum bataao baat usse kya karuN

Shaakh ka hissa rahunga kab talak
Eik din aakhir zameeN par maiN giruN

Qaabil-e-suhbat, yaqeen toota ‘Chiragh’
Dostee ke naam se ab maiN daruN
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2013, 11:43:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2013, 12:40:04 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Mukesh ji kyaa kehne, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2013, 01:31:31 PM »
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MaiN akela chaandnee aaghosh meN
Tum bataao baat usse kya karuN

waah waah mukeshji kya khoob bayani ki hai,
sahndaar,
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khubsurat ghazal , Mukesh ji . bahut mubarak ho .
yunhi fann ke chiragh jalaate rahye . in ashaar
par khusoosi daad :

Apne daaman ko bachakar main chaluN
Daagh koi lag na jaaye main daruN

MaiN akela chaandnee aaghosh meN
Tum bataao baat usse kya karuN

Qaabil-e-suhbat, yaqeen toota ‘Chiragh’
Dostee ke naam se ab maiN daruN
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Bahut hi achchi peshkash mukesh ji.. sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai.. yeh ashaar bahut bahut pasand aaye.. hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par..

Do diloN ke beech haiN ab dooriyaN
Ab shikayat dil ki dil se kya karuN

Wah re shore-muhabbat har galee
Kaan par rakh haath tauba maiN karuN

Qaabil-e-suhbat, yaqeen toota ‘Chiragh’
Dostee ke naam se ab maiN daruN
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2013, 05:08:00 PM »
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Wah re shore-muhabbat har galee
Kaan par rakh haath tauba maiN karuN

Shaakh ka hissa rahunga kab talak
Eik din aakhir zameeN par aa giruN
bas waaaaah hi waaah...
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2013, 08:05:48 PM »
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waah....waah....bahut khoob Chirag Ji....har ek aashar apni jagah bahut hi khoobsurati se pesh kiya hai...aur khas taur par

Shaakh ka hissa rahunga kab talak
Eik din aakhir zameeN par maiN giruN

dheron daad...

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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Mukesh jee, mehfil loot li aapne, dil jhoom utha ghazal padh ke, bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye.
Ye ash'aar khususann bahut pasand aae:

Do diloN ke beech haiN ab dooriyaN
Ab shikayat dil ki dil se kya karuN

MaiN akela chaandnee aaghosh meN
Tum bataao baat usse kya karuN
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«Reply #12 on: September 10, 2013, 08:51:43 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
Quote from: mkv on September 10, 2013, 10:42:03 AM
Apne daaman ko bachakar main chaluN
Daagh koi lag na jaaye main daruN

Halwa poori, kheer rabdee chhor dee
Ab namak se rotiyaN khaakar rahuN

Do diloN ke beech haiN ab dooriyaN
Ab shikayat dil ki dil se kya karuN

Wah re shore-muhabbat har galee
Kaan par rakh haath tauba maiN karuN

MaiN akela chaandnee aaghosh meN
Tum bataao baat usse kya karuN

Shaakh ka hissa rahunga kab talak
Eik din aakhir zameeN par maiN giruN

Qaabil-e-suhbat, yaqeen toota ‘Chiragh’
Dostee ke naam se ab maiN daruN
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«Reply #14 on: September 11, 2013, 12:11:44 AM »
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Waaah waaah Mukesh ji ....bahaut hi umdah ghazal kahi ..... Gehre sachche aur taaze khayaalaat ..... Dheron dheron daad !!!
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