EIK PARDAH - NASHEEN .......................... HASAN

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Sath  jeeta  hai  , sath  marta  hai
Dost  apna  ,  bus  apna  saaya  hai

Umr  bhar  Mundamil  nahee.n  hota
Zakhm-e-dil  dheere-dheere  rista  hai

Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai

Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai

Zulm  sah  kar  bhi  jo  Duaaei.n  de
Aisa  Insaan  to  Farishta  hai

Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai  

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Mundamil = bharna ; sohbat e badd = Bad company ;
chaak = torn / phata hua ; waa.n = wahaa.n
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2014, 05:31:10 PM »
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waah Waah!
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2014, 05:44:20 PM »
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bahut khub hasan sahab
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2014, 05:55:17 PM »
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waaaah waaaaaaaaah bahut bahut khoooob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2014, 08:25:48 PM »
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वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही खूब.....

ढेरों ढेरों दाद.....

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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2014, 09:51:54 PM »
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Bahut behatreen likha hai aapne Sir
jor ka jhatka dheere se...kya kahne..
maqta bahut bhaya mujhe..
Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai  .....
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2014, 10:26:58 PM »
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Lajawaab...Sir behtareen Ghazal..
Bilkul dil ko touch karne wali ....
Bilkul sahi kaha hai Mukesh Jee ne Jor ka jhatka dhire se ..
Mukammal Ghazal Sir,
Dheron daad qubool farmayein Sir..
Or Maqte Pe Ek RAU to banta hai Sir

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai  .....

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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2014, 12:35:58 AM »
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Sath  jeeta  hai  , sath  marta  hai
Dost  apna  ,  bus  apna  saaya  hai

Umr  bhar  Mundamil  nahee.n  hota
Zakhm-e-dil  dheere-dheere  rista  hai

Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai

Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai

Zulm  sah  kar  bhi  jo  Duaaei.n  de
Aisa  Insaan  to  Farishta  hai

Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai 

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Mundamil = bharna ; sohbat e badd = Bad company ;
chaak = torn / phata hua ; waa.n = wahaa.n

wonderful,sir
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2014, 12:36:55 AM »
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bahut khooooooooob Hasan ji
U surely deserve a rau fr dis beautiful poem !
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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2014, 01:11:36 AM »
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Sath  jeeta  hai  , sath  marta  hai
Dost  apna  ,  bus  apna  saaya  hai

Umr  bhar  Mundamil  nahee.n  hota
Zakhm-e-dil  dheere-dheere  rista  hai

Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai

Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai

Zulm  sah  kar  bhi  jo  Duaaei.n  de
Aisa  Insaan  to  Farishta  hai

Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai 

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Mundamil = bharna ; sohbat e badd = Bad company ;
chaak = torn / phata hua ; waa.n = wahaa.n


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-FHS
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«Reply #10 on: May 30, 2014, 03:38:27 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Hasan sir, maqta khaastaur pe bahut pasand aaya, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #11 on: May 30, 2014, 04:13:22 AM »
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Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Bahut khoob siddiqui ji... dil se daad...
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2014, 02:34:27 PM »
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Thanks For reading Nakul ji.
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2014, 03:33:09 PM »
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Sath  jeeta  hai  , sath  marta  hai
Dost  apna  ,  bus  apna  saaya  hai

Umr  bhar  Mundamil  nahee.n  hota
Zakhm-e-dil  dheere-dheere  rista  hai

Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai

Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai

Zulm  sah  kar  bhi  jo  Duaaei.n  de
Aisa  Insaan  to  Farishta  hai

Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai


bahut hee naayaab ghazal dil se daad qubool karen bhai saheb
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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2014, 10:39:43 PM »
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thanks a lottt , Mann ji .
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