EIK PARDAH - NASHEEN .......................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: May 31, 2014, 01:29:40 AM »
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Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai

Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai

Lajawaab...Sir behtareen


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«Reply #16 on: May 31, 2014, 12:25:51 PM »
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Shukriya aur duaaein Mohd Touhid saheb.
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«Reply #17 on: May 31, 2014, 12:34:46 PM »
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wwwwaaahhhhh!!!!! kis khoobsurti saafgoyee saadgi beparwah aur husn se itne gehre khayaal eshaas fiqr aur naseehat bayaan kar gayee ye ghazal !!!! bazm ko diye gaye is tohfe par shukriya aur daad Hasan sahab !!!!
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«Reply #18 on: May 31, 2014, 05:57:07 PM »
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waaaah waaaaaaaaah bahut bahut khoooob.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #19 on: May 31, 2014, 10:20:10 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet ltyink=topic=114880.msg1495778#msg1495778 date=1401395148
वाह.....वाह.....

बहुत ही खूब.....

ढेरों ढेरों दाद.....

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thanks a lot Amit ji
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«Reply #20 on: May 31, 2014, 11:57:50 PM »
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Wah Wah Bahut Umdah. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2014, 02:23:02 AM »
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Sath  jeeta  hai  , sath  marta  hai
Dost  apna  ,  bus  apna  saaya  hai
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Umr  bhar  Mundamil  nahee.n  hota
Zakhm-e-dil  dheere-dheere  rista  hai
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Sohbat-e-Badd   bhi   ruswa   karti  hai
Saath  gehoo.n  ke  ghun  bhi  pista  hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jitna  bhi  chaahiye  Rafoo  keeje
Chaak  Daaman  to  saaf  dikhta  hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Zulm  sah  kar  bhi  jo  Duaaei.n  de
Aisa  Insaan  to  Farishta  hai
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Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai
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Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai  

kaun hai wo mujhe bhi batao  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

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Mundamil = bharna ; sohbat e badd = Bad company ;
chaak = torn / phata hua ; waa.n = wahaa.n


fazal sahab bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #22 on: June 01, 2014, 09:44:24 AM »
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thanks Chiragh ji .
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«Reply #23 on: June 01, 2014, 03:52:33 PM »
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Lajawaab...Sir behtareen Ghazal..
Bilkul dil ko touch karne wali ....
Bilkul sahi kaha hai Mukesh Jee ne Jor ka jhatka dhire se ..
Mukammal Ghazal Sir,
Dheron daad qubool farmayein Sir..
Or Maqte Pe Ek RAU to banta hai Sir

Dil  mei.n  mat  jhaankye  'Hasan' , iss mei.n
Eik   Pardah - Nasheen  rahta   hai  .....


Musahib ji ,bahut shukria hazal pasand karne k liye aur rau k liye bhi . Duaaein .
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«Reply #24 on: June 01, 2014, 10:25:01 PM »
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Marhoom Bahayat saheb Housla afzai k liye bahut shukrguzar hoon.Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #25 on: June 02, 2014, 01:27:38 AM »
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wah wah Hasan Sahib bahut hee haseen peshkash hai. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: June 02, 2014, 05:47:03 PM »
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bahut khooooooooob Hasan ji
U surely deserve a rau fr dis beautiful poem !
Thanks Suresh sangwan ji . God bless you.
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«Reply #27 on: June 02, 2014, 10:23:14 PM »
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Khamosh Awaaz saheb , Bahut mamnoon hoon
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«Reply #28 on: June 03, 2014, 09:16:17 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Hasan sir, maqta khaastaur pe bahut pasand aaya, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
Shukria aur duaaein Iftakhar saheb
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«Reply #29 on: June 04, 2014, 01:42:25 PM »
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Waa.n  to  hoga  Hisaab  jab  hoga
Karm  ka  phal  yahaa.n  bhi  milta  hai

Bahut khoob siddiqui ji... dil se daad...
Bahut shukria Sanchit ji . Best wishes.
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