Ek Bachi

by Meena on February 11, 2005, 06:39:35 PM
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Ek choti si bachi guzar rahi thi ek gali se,
“Paise de do” bol rahi thi har rahi se,

Maate ki lakheeron ko to woh badal na payi,
Haath ki lakeeron ko bharna chahati hai paiso se,

Baal ujle hai, tan ke kapde fate hue hai,
Phir bhi chehre pe muskan hai, shayad bebasi se,

Jo rakh deta hai koi ek paisa us hatheli me,
Apne badkismati ke chole se lakh duayen deti hai dil se,

Umar to hai uske khelne kudne ki abhi,
Par zindagi ka matlab sikh rahi hai abhi se!



dont know kaisi hai yeh poem???
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2005, 08:24:00 PM »
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Very Minute Observations & Emotional View!!! Its Nice !!! Meena ji!! :lol:
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2005, 09:58:08 PM »
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WOWOW Good one!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2005, 08:42:51 AM »
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shukriya sharma ji and pooja sis!

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Arifa
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2005, 12:28:01 PM »
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very nice meena bohat achi hai
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2005, 05:55:15 PM »
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thanx sis!

 :D
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99% §hå®èèf_Mµñda
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2005, 06:23:59 PM »
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uffff :cry:  :cry:
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2005, 06:26:11 PM »
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:D
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99% §hå®èèf_Mµñda
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2005, 06:36:52 PM »
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wo bachi kahi tum to nahi ho Shocked  :lol:
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Khamoshi
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«Reply #9 on: February 23, 2005, 12:32:39 PM »
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"first of all meena bohat badi it was nice one"

and next oh
wah shareef munda ..kya baat hai yaar
shareef hokar cigrette ka kash lagta ho...bhai..andar ana se pehla..NO SMOKING ka board nahi dekha ka

khair woh to choro
well jo bhi tumna likha hai

"Shaam hote hi chiragon ko bujha deta hoon
Yeh dil hi kaafi hai teri yaad mein jalne k liye.."

wakay mein bhi bohat khoob hia...per ek adjust kerlo last line mein
"yeh dil hi kaafi hai tera yaad mein jalne ke liya nahi......balke teri yaad mein cigarette jalana ke liya"   kerlo kaam ayega yaar

aur rahee baat tumhara reply ki ..
ek baat bolo...kahe aise to nahi...ya story tumhara saat hwi thi....i mean yadash tazi kero...aur soocho...kahe tumhari dost....koi bhi yaar...kahe purana janam mein tum.....yahe larki to nahi tha...
khair ..
 pEAe Out
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2005, 04:27:06 PM »
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thanxxxxxxx khamoshi!!!!!1

 :D
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Khamoshi
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«Reply #11 on: February 24, 2005, 01:39:40 PM »
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arre no mention sister
bass tumhari...sher padi bohat khoob tha..

aur bich mein ya khajoor asmaan se tapak pada...
to soocha ...
to thoda is ka sher ka jawab bhi de do

shayad cigatter bhi khaliya...kuch jawab nahi aya is ke pass say
chalo again sis cool one...meena good one sis
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2005, 05:50:11 PM »
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thanxxxxxxxxxxx!!!!!!  :D
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jindagi
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2005, 03:38:23 AM »
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very nice @meena
Umar to hai uske khelne kudne ki abhi,
Par zindagi ka matlab sikh rahi hai abhi se!
......bahut hi achi lines hain
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Khamoshi
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2005, 11:01:14 AM »
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arre sister ap sharminda nahi kerna ka apun ko

acha sis ek solid sher boliya.....oh hi zindagi...tumhai bhi koi shayari ati hai...to koi line likihaya....aur what a coincedecne...you joined on 12 or mein 2 day ke badd khair...

hey meena sis....write a good one..please i am waiting
bye sis and no thank again
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