EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI -Panna 2:Shairi - E

SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #15 on: April 11, 2009, 03:49:54 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on April 11, 2009, 07:26:19 AM

BAHOOT KHOOB LIKHA HAI.....

BEBASEE DIKHTEE HAI MAJDOOR KEE
BAHATAA PASEENA NAHI DEKHTAA
AYE GAREEBEE MAT MUSKAA USPAR
KYA HOSLAA TUJHE USKAA NAHI DEKHTAA?

Hello Netrapal wave

Is shairana reply ke liye tahedil se shukriya
Aapki kavita damdar hai, pasand aayee
Kripa banaye rakhen
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #16 on: April 11, 2009, 03:54:54 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 03:49:54 PM

Hello Netrapal ji,
Lagta hai message bhejane main kuchh galti hui hai
Mera matter aapke matter main mix ho gaya hai
Anyhow, I am again sending this message with my sincere thanks.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #17 on: April 11, 2009, 04:01:09 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2009, 03:46:35 PM

Mindblowing Sarvesh ji .

Wah wah kya bhoot likha hai.. alfaz kam hai aaj tho..

Keep writing ......

Nice addition Netrapal Ji

Thanks Sophi
Aapne badi himmat badhai wave

I am grateful
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #18 on: April 14, 2009, 12:15:00 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 11, 2009, 03:54:54 PM

Hello Netrapal ji,
Lagta hai message bhejane main kuchh galti hui hai
Mera matter aapke matter main mix ho gaya hai
Anyhow, I am again sending this message with my sincere thanks.
SARVESH RASTOGI

nahi sir maine aapka message poora padh liya tha shukriya aapka bhee aapko hamaree line pasand aayee


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #19 on: April 14, 2009, 12:37:40 PM »

Bohat Achche Sarvesh Ji,.


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #20 on: April 14, 2009, 05:01:23 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 12:37:40 PM

Bohat Achche Sarvesh Ji,.

Thanks Azeem
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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #21 on: May 07, 2009, 12:15:06 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2009, 03:46:35 PM

Mindblowing Sarvesh ji .

Wah wah kya bhoot likha hai.. alfaz kam hai aaj tho..

Keep writing ......

Nice addition Netrapal Ji

Shukriya Sophi Ji
Jitni khushi se aapne tarif ki hai, mujhe puri tarah communicate hui hai. Thank you very much.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #22 on: May 07, 2009, 05:30:25 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 10, 2009, 05:03:51 PM

EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI
HOGA NAVIN NIRMAN JAGAT MAIN JAGRATI AAYEGI

TERE IN HATHON NE SANSAR SAJAYA HAI
TERI HI MEHNAT NE ITIHAS RACHAYA HAI
MAJDOOR TERI MEHNAT JAB RANGAT LAYEGI
HOGA NAVIN NIRMAN JAGAT MAIN JAGRATI AAYEGI

TUNE HI GAGAN-CHUMBI MINAR BANAYE HAIN
REGISTANON MAIN BHI UDYAN KHILAYE HAIN
MAJBOOT KAMAR TERI JAB BOJH UTHAYEGI
HOGA NAVIN NIRMAN JAGAT MAIN JAGRATI AAYEGI

O KARMYOG YOGI TERA ABHINANDAN HAI
TERE PAG SE LIPTI WOH MAATI CHANDAN HAI
MANAVATA JAB TUJHKO SEENE SE LAGAYEGI
HOGA NAVIN NIRMAN JAGAT MAIN JAGRATI AAYEGI

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Sarvesh Ji, aapki poems main humesha samaj ki kisi hisse ko dekha hai...Bohot hi khoob !!


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2009, 12:52:41 PM »

Shukriya Celmira Ji
Thanks for kind comments
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #24 on: June 12, 2009, 02:34:27 AM »

एक बूँद पसीने की तेरे तन पे जो आएगी
होगा नवीन निर्माण जगत में जाग्रति आएगी

तेरे इन हाथों ने संसार सजाया है
तेरी ही मेहनत ने इतिहास रचाया है
मजदूर तेरी मेहनत जब रंगत लाएगी
होगा नवीन निर्माण जगत में जाग्रति आएगी

तूने ही गगनचुम्बी मीनार बनाये हैं
रेगिस्तानों में भी उद्यान खिलाये हैं
मजबूत कमर तेरी जब बोझ उठाएगी
होगा नवीन निर्माण जगत में जाग्रति आएगी

ओ कर्मयोग-योगी तेरा अभिनन्दन है
तेरे पग से लिपटी वो माटी चन्दन है
मानवता जब तुझको सीने से लगायेगी
होगा नवीन निर्माण जगत में जाग्रति आएगी

सर्वेश रस्तोगी


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Re: EK BOOND PASINE KI TERE TAN PE JO AAYEGI

«Reply #25 on: June 17, 2009, 01:48:34 AM »

Many many Thanks Rahim Saheb
SARVESH RASTOGI


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