EK DARAAR SI AAI THI.

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 23, 2010, 09:41:27 AM
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RISNE LAGI THI HAR CHEEZ MERE PYALE SE. tearyeyed
TUTA TO NAHIN THA EK DARAR SI AAI THI.

SAMBHAL KE RAKHA BAHUT,TU THA BADA AZIZ.
MERE PYALE SE USKI JARA UNGLI HI TAKRAI THI.

CHUPA TO LIYA HAI USNE BAKHUBI DARAR KO
KOI BHARI HUI KHUSHI HI NA RUK PAI THI.

YE SOCHKAR MERI AANKH BHI BHAR AAI THI
TUTA TO NAHI THA EK DARAR SI AAI THI.
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2010, 09:46:28 AM »
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Wah wah Suresh Ji, bahot khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2010, 09:56:15 AM »
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THANKS RIYAZ JI.
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2010, 10:01:26 AM »
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Waah Kya Kjhoob Suresh Ji, Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Apne,.

Great Work,.
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2010, 10:05:50 AM »
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 BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2010, 11:02:49 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    SURESH SANGWAN JI.....

TOOTNE LAGE THEY RISHTE APNE
TOOTE TOH NAHI THEY EK DARAAR SI AAI THI

KUCH SAMBHALA USNE KUCH SAMBHALA HAMNE
YE APNE MOHABBAT KI LADAI THI

DUNIYA KO PATA TAK NAHIN LAGNE DIYA THA
MOHABBAT ZINDAGI BAR KI KAMAI THI
KUCH CHUPAYA USNE KUCH CHUPAYA HAMNE
MITGAYI JO"EK DARAAR SI AAI THI"
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2010, 11:13:59 AM »
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Bahoot Khooob Suresh ji
Jasbaton Ko Bahoot Khubsurati Se Piroya Hai...
Har Line Jaise Dil Me Gahrayi Tak Uatar jati hai Applause Applause Applause
Nice one Caaji Applause Applause Applause
Keep It Up Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Mafi chahunga lekin mai bhi kuch arz kar raha hun galatiyon ko nazarandaz kijiyega...

Uski khushiyan zindagi thin meri...
Uske gamon me meri aankh bhar aayi thi...

Mukammal na ho saka jahan apna...
Itani lambi usaki judayi thi...

Vo bekhabar meri aankho me khushi dhundhta raha...
In hontho pe hasi toh thi magar is dil me kitani tanhayi thi...

Aakar hontho pe labz tham se gaye...
Dil to dhadhka magar "Ek darar si aayi thi"...
~pank~
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2010, 11:36:12 AM »
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KYA KARNA HAI DOONIA-E- MEHFIL KA
MEHFIL ME BHI MERE SAATH TANHAI THI.

DIL KI GEHRAIYON SE TUJHKO AWAAZ LAGAI THI.
DOOR WO CHALI GAYI LAUT KE NA AAI THI.

GIRA THA AASMAAN SE UDATA HUA EK PARINDA.
BACHA KUCH NAHIN BUS MAUT HI NA AAI THI.

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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2010, 11:40:25 AM »
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THANKS A LOT PANKSHIVAM JI.APNI FEELINGS KO BAKHUBI LIKHA HAI.
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«Reply #9 on: February 23, 2010, 11:42:01 AM »
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SHUKRIYA CARAJI.AAPNE BAHUT HI LAI ME APNI BAT KAHI HAI.
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2010, 12:02:27 PM »
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Thanks Suresh ji
Nice One Again

Milon tak faili bs meri rusvayi thi...
Uski aankho me khushi thi, magar in aankho me tanhayi thi...

Roka bahut kadamon me uski meflion me jane se...
Bahoot khush tha mai vahan, magar dil me ek darar si aayi thi...
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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2010, 03:58:49 PM »
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HAR LAFJ ME THA DARD
MAGAR MUSKURA RAHA THA
REHNA THA KAGAJ KI DUNIYA ME
ISLIYE HAR RASM NIBHA RAHA THA
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2010, 07:54:39 PM »
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bahut achaa suresh ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2010, 09:48:44 AM »
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THANKS A LOT.SHEBA JI.
bahut achaa suresh ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM »
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Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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