EK DARAAR SI AAI THI.

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 23, 2010, 09:41:27 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 24, 2010, 01:00:44 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2010, 10:30:56 AM
good one Suresh ji,nice lines Pank dear
Thanks Kash ji
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«Reply #16 on: February 24, 2010, 01:39:37 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB PANKSHIVAMJI.

JUDA HONE WALON KE ANDAAZ HO JAATE HAIN JUDA
WAQT BADAL NA DE UNKO ISS BAAT SE BAHUT DARTE HAIN.

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Thanks Kash ji
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«Reply #17 on: February 25, 2010, 03:44:43 AM »
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THANKS RUCHI JI.
Quote from: Ruchi Chamoli on February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM
Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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«Reply #18 on: February 25, 2010, 04:24:31 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Suresh ji,Pank ji,Cara ji,lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #19 on: February 25, 2010, 04:32:20 AM »
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Nice Lines Vineet ji And Ruchiji Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Again Suresh ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: February 25, 2010, 05:25:27 AM »
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SHUKRIYA PANKSHIVAM JI.
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Nice Lines Vineet ji And Ruchiji Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Again Suresh ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 25, 2010, 11:01:18 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji..

Bahut Acha Likhte hai Aap!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Pankhji Aur Vinnetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: February 25, 2010, 11:40:05 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 23, 2010, 09:41:27 AM
RISNE LAGI THI HAR CHEEZ MERE PYALE SE. tearyeyed
TUTA TO NAHIN THA EK DARAR SI AAI THI.

SAMBHAL KE RAKHA BAHUT,TU THA BADA AZIZ.
MERE PYALE SE USKI JARA UNGLI HI TAKRAI THI.

CHUPA TO LIYA HAI USNE BAKHUBI DARAR KO
KOI BHARI HUI KHUSHI HI NA RUK PAI THI.

YE SOCHKAR MERI AANKH BHI BHAR AAI THI
TUTA TO NAHI THA EK DARAR SI AAI THI.

Bohot Khoob Suresh Ji
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«Reply #23 on: February 25, 2010, 11:45:22 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2010, 11:01:18 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji..

Bahut Acha Likhte hai Aap!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Pankhji Aur Vinnetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Khwaish ji
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«Reply #24 on: February 26, 2010, 11:01:31 AM »
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 SHUKRIYA RUCHIJI.
Quote from: Ruchi Chamoli on February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM
Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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«Reply #25 on: February 27, 2010, 11:35:54 AM »
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THANKS A LOT RUCHI JI.
Quote from: Ruchi Chamoli on February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM
Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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«Reply #26 on: February 28, 2010, 09:53:21 AM »
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 RUCHJI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.
Quote from: Ruchi Chamoli on February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM
Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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«Reply #27 on: February 28, 2010, 11:22:32 AM »
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bahooooooooot hi achcha likha hai suresh ji aapne...dheron daad..
cara ji bakhoobi lay ko banaye rakha aapne bhi....lekin is kavita ka ye ant shayad kavi nahi chahta...mere khayal se..
pank ji aapne khoob sath diya suresh ji ka...
aap sabhi ko daad kabool ho
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«Reply #28 on: February 28, 2010, 03:04:00 PM »
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THANKS RUCHJI.
Quote from: Ruchi Chamoli on February 24, 2010, 10:27:22 AM
Ye jindagi dukho ka sansar hai kabhi kushi to kabhi dukho ki bahar hai, Hum rote nahi unki yaado me, pr kya kare jab dil unko hi baar baar pukare.
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«Reply #29 on: February 28, 2010, 03:05:41 PM »
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 BAHUT B AHUT SHUKRIYA BEKARAR JI.
Quote from: bekarar on February 28, 2010, 11:22:32 AM
bahooooooooot hi achcha likha hai suresh ji aapne...dheron daad..
cara ji bakhoobi lay ko banaye rakha aapne bhi....lekin is kavita ka ye ant shayad kavi nahi chahta...mere khayal se..
pank ji aapne khoob sath diya suresh ji ka...
aap sabhi ko daad kabool ho
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