Ek Manzil,Ek Safar.....

by pawan16 on January 05, 2013, 10:49:48 AM
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एक मजिल, एक ही सफर,
फिर भी कितने रास्तों से निकलना पडता हे मगर,

दिन निकला एक नयि सुबह हूइ,
लेकिन वो सोया आज भी हे खुद से बेखबर,

हम भी तुम भी एक होकर,
गुजरे हे एक राह से फिर भी देखो ना मिली हे नजर,

उसने आज पाया तूझे कल मिलेगा,
ये सिर्फ एक मुकदर की हे डगर,

तेर आज , तेरे कल को बदलता हे..
सिरफ सिर्फ तेरेी  सोच का असर

लगे सिर्फ तुझको कुछ अलफाज होगे,
पर ये ही मेंरा हिस्सा हे जो देता हे मुझको एक जिगर.......................By Pawan Gupta
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2013, 11:53:45 AM »
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Pawan Jee Aadaab!


Behad khoob khayaal hai janab aur behad khoob soNch ka muzahera
kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile
Kafi gehre aur khoob vichaar vyakt kiye hai... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2013, 12:08:31 PM »
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Quote from: pawan16 on January 05, 2013, 10:49:48 AM
एक मजिल, एक ही सफर,
फिर भी कितने रास्तों से निकलना पडता हे मगर,

दिन निकला एक नयि सुबह हूइ,
लेकिन वो सोया आज भी हे खुद से बेखबर,

हम भी तुम भी एक होकर,
गुजरे हे एक राह से फिर भी देखो ना मिली हे नजर,

उसने आज पाया तूझे कल मिलेगा,
ये सिर्फ एक मुकदर की हे डगर,

तेर आज , तेरे कल को बदलता हे..
सिरफ सिर्फ तेरेी  सोच का असर

लगे सिर्फ तुझको कुछ अलफाज होगे,
पर ये ही मेंरा हिस्सा हे जो देता हे मुझको एक जिगर.......................By Pawan Gupta

very very good..............!
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2013, 12:25:43 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 04:05:10 PM »
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behtarin pawan ji......bahut hi umda....padhte huye yu lgaa jaise zindagi ki sachhayi ka, zindagi k har pehlu ko nichod kar inn alfaazon mein samet diya gya hai...just amazing...dil ko choo gayi... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 04:33:40 PM »
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boht khua kaha pawan ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2013, 02:22:44 AM »
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