Ek moka aor de do

by Pooja on November 03, 2008, 11:56:48 PM
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Ji likhna chaha wo likh nahi saki.. ajkal shabd sath nahi de rahe hai..
Mere ek sathi ki wife achanak mar gai. Subah hanste hua wo job per gaya.. ek phone ayya aor pata chala sab khatam. Ussi ki bhawnao ko man main rakhte hue yah kavita likhi hai.
Man main dukh hai aise kaise, bin kahe achanak chali gai.. jaise ruthane ko man ho ki aise kaise kar sakti ho mere sath aor ab kabhi na milne ka dard:


Ruthna chahta hu, ruthane ka ek moka aor de do
Khushi aor gumo se bhare sath ka, ek jhonka aor de do

Hue the juda, subah ki tapish main, milne ko dobara
Her roj ke us Milan ko, phir se wo he sakar roop de do

Mile the sabhi apno ke samne, kyun bichurr gaye is tarah
Andhkaro se nikal kar, phir wo hi sath apna, mujhe de do

Na koi vida, na he koi shabd kahein tumne mujhse
Mujhe meri is ghutan se, sirf ek baar ab mukati de do

Louta de mera sathi mujhe, e-rab tujhko her kisi ka wasta
Jo kahe kar jaau, bas ek sath mere sathi ke mujhe de do

Ruthna chahta hu, ruthane ka ek moka aor de do…
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2008, 04:10:57 AM »
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Gaya hua waqt kiske roke ruka hai bhala..? Phir bhi, Kisi ke dard ko baantne se neik kaam, bhala aur kya hoga..

Bahut neik koshish Pooja di..  Applause
Yun mehsoos hua jaise kalam mein dard ki shaayhi bhar kar likha ho aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2008, 05:14:27 AM »
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tearyeyed  pooja ji aapki is kalam ko padhkar sirf darf mehsus kar sakte hain ham aur shyd kuch nahi keh paayenge
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2008, 05:53:50 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 04, 2008, 04:10:57 AM
Gaya hua waqt kiske roke ruka hai bhala..? Phir bhi, Kisi ke dard ko baantne se neik kaam, bhala aur kya hoga..

Bahut neik koshish Pooja di..  Applause
Yun mehsoos hua jaise kalam mein dard ki shaayhi bhar kar likha ho aapne..

Thank you Mahiya. Apki post dekh kar bahoot acha laga!
BAS YAHIN INSAAN KA KOI BAS NAHI CHALTA!! Bahoot man udaas hua hai.. magar hum bhi kaya kar sakte hai siwaye dua ke.
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2008, 05:55:04 AM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 04, 2008, 05:14:27 AM
tearyeyed  pooja ji aapki is kalam ko padhkar sirf darf mehsus kar sakte hain ham aur shyd kuch nahi keh paayenge

Thanks you bhawna, dard ki baat hai, shabdo se dard mehsoos hona he tha.
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2008, 05:56:50 AM »
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Is dard se bara koi dard nahi
bhar sake jo, yah wo zakham nahi
insaan bebas ho jaata hai yahin akar
Bhagwaan ke is baat agge chalta koi jor nahi
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2008, 12:41:23 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 03, 2008, 11:56:48 PM
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Ruthna chahta hu, ruthane ka ek moka aor de do
Khushi aor gumo se bhare sath ka, ek jhonka aor de do
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Pooja ji,
Aap ney doosrey key dard-o-gam ko khaasee sidqdilee sey peish kiyaa hai!
It's lovely!
                        - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2008, 04:37:50 PM »
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Abd ji apko pasand ayyi yah lines, yah jaan kar bahoot acha laga!!

yakin nahi ki ab tu nahi, her taraf tu he tu to hai
yah ghar gunjta hai teri baato se, ahsaas main tu he tu to hai
is ghutan main dam ghoot na jaaye, skoon ke palo main tu he tu to hai
kaise jiyu bin tere, aa kar bata ja, meri rago, sanso main tu he tu to hai..
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2008, 05:51:12 PM »
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Pooja ji!
Sahee kahaa hai aap ney:
Woh hi hai sarwatra!
Usee-usee kee goonj hai:
Yatra-tatra-sarwatra!!
   Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2008, 05:53:03 PM »
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Shukaria Abd ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2008, 08:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 04, 2008, 05:56:50 AM
Is dard se bara koi dard nahi
bhar sake jo, yah wo zakham nahi
insaan bebas ho jaata hai yahin akar
Bhagwaan ke is baat agge chalta koi jor nahi

sab jante hai ek na ek din hame jana hai
us khuda ke ghar ko mehkana hai

mernewale merjate hai, rote parivar ko kaun sambale?
un bacchon ko kaun samjaye...

Is dard ko kaise bayan kare
jo mehsoos kare wo keh nahi sakte
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2008, 02:30:31 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 03, 2008, 11:56:48 PM
Ji likhna chaha wo likh nahi saki.. ajkal shabd sath nahi de rahe hai..
Mere ek sathi ki wife achanak mar gai. Subah hanste hua wo job per gaya.. ek phone ayya aor pata chala sab khatam. Ussi ki bhawnao ko man main rakhte hue yah kavita likhi hai.
Man main dukh hai aise kaise, bin kahe achanak chali gai.. jaise ruthane ko man ho ki aise kaise kar sakti ho mere sath aor ab kabhi na milne ka dard:


Ruthna chahta hu, ruthane ka ek moka aor de do
Khushi aor gumo se bhare sath ka, ek jhonka aor de do

Hue the juda, subah ki tapish main, milne ko dobara
Her roj ke us Milan ko, phir se wo he sakar roop de do

Mile the sabhi apno ke samne, kyun bichurr gaye is tarah
Andhkaro se nikal kar, phir wo hi sath apna, mujhe de do

Na koi vida, na he koi shabd kahein tumne mujhse
Mujhe meri is ghutan se, sirf ek baar ab mukati de do

Louta de mera sathi mujhe, e-rab tujhko her kisi ka wasta
Jo kahe kar jaau, bas ek sath mere sathi ke mujhe de do

Ruthna chahta hu, ruthane ka ek moka aor de do…


Ek nek koshish Pooja...Applause

Sach hai ki waqt laut ke nahin aata....par jispar bura waqt beet ta hai, uske liye zindagi jais wahin tham ke reh jaati hai !!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2008, 02:39:16 PM »
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naummeeed hone na de hame mohabbat teri
jhootha hi sahi humko aasra de do

nice work pooja
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«Reply #13 on: November 05, 2008, 08:22:19 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on November 05, 2008, 08:54:30 AM
sab jante hai ek na ek din hame jana hai
us khuda ke ghar ko mehkana hai

mernewale merjate hai, rote parivar ko kaun sambale?
un bacchon ko kaun samjaye...

Is dard ko kaise bayan kare
jo mehsoos kare wo keh nahi sakte


Good one sonia
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«Reply #14 on: November 05, 2008, 08:22:44 PM »
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Thanks Celmira and SG JI
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