Ek nayi shuruaat...!!!

by Talat on July 27, 2007, 03:10:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 16, 2007, 11:02:24 AM »
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Bohot shukriya Khwaish ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya......!! Usual Smile

Bohot kuch keh diya 2 lines main aapne...Very nice !!

Har gham seh kar muskurana hi zindagi ka naam hai
Thokarain raahon main kha ke manzilain mila karti hain !!
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«Reply #16 on: August 16, 2007, 03:30:21 PM »
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Hi Talat,

My first day to visit www.yoindia.com.

N really I liked your writing skills, I mean beautiful lines with a very sound meaning.

I don't know witing shares but I like to listen them and hear them very much.

Keep writing please.

Thanks & Regards,
Lalit Sharma Usual Smile


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Bohot dino ke baad kuch likha hai....have lost the knack of writing...

Rooth gaye hain jo saathi, un ko manaya jaaye,
Udaas hain jo dil, phir aaj unko hansaaya jaaye

Zindagi ka safar kaise katega ghamgeen ho ke,
Honton par phir se tabassum ko sajaya jaaye

Khwaabon main reh kar jeena nahin hai aasaan,
Zindagi ki haqeeqat chalo sab ko bataya jaaye

Jod len tukde dil ke, khushq kar len aansoo apne,
Dil pe lage zakhmon ko chalo ab miataya jaaye

Kya, jo na mile ek manzil, hain manzilain aur bhi
Ek naye safar pe chalo qadam badhaya jaaye !!
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«Reply #17 on: August 16, 2007, 06:29:14 PM »
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Hi Lalit,

Welcome to the beautiful world of Yoindia ! Usual Smile


This is a pleasure for me that your first post is in my thread...its a real pleasure to get appreciation from you. Its very encouraging ! Usual Smile

Keep reading...and enjoy being on Yoindia Usual Smile

Dont forget to give your Introduction in the tarruf Section !
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«Reply #18 on: August 16, 2007, 08:10:54 PM »
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Bohot shukriya Khwaish ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya......!! Usual Smile

Bohot kuch keh diya 2 lines main aapne...Very nice !!

Har gham seh kar muskurana hi zindagi ka naam hai
Thokarain raahon main kha ke manzilain mila karti hain !!


SHUKRIYA TALATJI...AAP NE BI DO LINE MEIN BAHUT KUCH KEH DIYA

UDAAS LAMHO KA NA DIL MEIN
KABHI MALAAL RAKHNA
TOOFAN MEIN BHI WAJOOD
APNA SAMBHAL RAKHNA
SHART HAI ZINDAGI SE YEH KI
DARD MEIN BI MUSKURAOONGA MAIN
BAS KHUDA TU HI APNA
HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA
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«Reply #19 on: August 16, 2007, 11:11:41 PM »
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SHART HAI ZINDAGI SE YEH KI
DARD MEIN BI MUSKURAOONGA MAIN
BAS KHUDA TU HI APNA
HAMESHA SAATH RAKHNA

Khwaish

Behtareen ! =D> =D> =D>

I like your poetry !

Keep writing :arrow:

Talat, Nikki

Good work by you both !
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«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2007, 08:31:26 PM »
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Thanks Khwaish.....and Rajbir Usual Smile

Khwaish, aapne bohot achcha likha hai.
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«Reply #21 on: September 27, 2007, 07:35:44 PM »
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Bahut ache talat..yeh line to bahut gehri aur behtereen thi..
"khwaabo main reh kar jeena nahi hai  aasaan
zindagi ki haqeeqat chalo sab ko bataya jaye"

Nikki & khwaish aap dono ne bi khoob kaha
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«Reply #22 on: October 10, 2007, 12:24:18 PM »
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Aapka bohot shukriya Ishpreet pasand karne ke liye Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: October 12, 2007, 08:03:07 PM »
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talat ap hmesha hi bohat acha likhti ho=D>=D>=D>
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Tosha
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«Reply #24 on: October 14, 2007, 11:14:08 AM »
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accha likha hai Talat... nice reading it!!
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: January 30, 2008, 02:41:51 PM »
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Aankhain...aapka bohot shukriya Usual Smile

Thanks Tosha Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: January 30, 2008, 03:31:09 PM »
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bahoot khoob Talat and Good one Khwaish!!
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«Reply #27 on: January 31, 2008, 08:03:02 AM »
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I often do not like 'jadeed urdu shairi' but something special always attracts. Talat's poetry is one of those special things.
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«Reply #28 on: February 23, 2008, 12:39:09 AM »
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Thanks Pooja !!
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«Reply #29 on: February 23, 2008, 01:46:42 AM »
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Quote from: Talat on July 27, 2007, 03:10:04 PM
Bohot dino ke baad kuch likha hai....have lost the knack of writing...

Rooth gaye hain jo saathi, un ko manaya jaaye,
Udaas hain jo dil, phir aaj unko hansaaya jaaye

Zindagi ka safar kaise katega ghamgeen ho ke,
Honton par phir se tabassum ko sajaya jaaye

Khwaabon main reh kar jeena nahin hai aasaan,
Zindagi ki haqeeqat chalo sab ko bataya jaaye

Jod len tukde dil ke, khushq kar len aansoo apne,
Dil pe lage zakhmon ko chalo ab miataya jaaye

Kya, jo na mile ek manzil, hain manzilain aur bhi
Ek naye safar pe chalo qadam badhaya jaaye !!

wah bahut khoob sis... Yu hi likhte rehna
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