Ek shaam andheri si.....ek nayi subah ki aas.....!!!

by Talat on August 25, 2008, 05:30:27 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 27, 2008, 10:40:23 AM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid...aapne padha, samjha aur saraha....bas aapse hi seekh rahe hain...himmmat afzaai ka shukriya Sayyid  happy3

Ye kamzor si koshish nahin bohot hi umda kalam hai Sayyid... Bohot khoob  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #31 on: August 27, 2008, 10:41:25 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 26, 2008, 02:14:53 AM
Shayad pasand aaya ?? Bahut pasand aaya hai Talat. Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Pehle wale sher ka aakhir do line hame behat pasand aaya hai and second wala superb creation.. Good Work  Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP


Thanks so much Roja dear for your appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: August 27, 2008, 10:43:09 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 26, 2008, 03:17:19 AM
murjhaya hua ped... shayed tumhe khud pata nahi ke tumne kitni khoobsurat cheeze likhi hai aaj ke daur me insan jab zindagi se mayous hain use murjhaya hua ped.. zaroor padhna chahiye.

thank you celmira thank you very much

I am really honoured by your comments Sajid...Tah-e-dil se shukriya adaa karti hoon aaki is izzat-afzaai, hausla afzai ka ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #33 on: August 27, 2008, 10:43:52 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 26, 2008, 05:02:33 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot achcha likha hai talat...........anokha dhang aur bahoot khoobsurat kavita...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Sanjeev for the appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: August 27, 2008, 10:44:36 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on August 26, 2008, 05:13:43 AM
Celmira sis Wah wah bohut hi khoob likha
hai dono hi kalam ek dam umda pesh
kiya hai aapne superb!! lines... g88 work... 
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Bohot bohot shukriya Honey sis..aap ko pasand aaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: August 27, 2008, 10:45:11 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on August 26, 2008, 05:47:27 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB
VERY WELL EXPLAIN FEELINGS,
BY. K.SHAEL

Thanks a lot Shael...!
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«Reply #36 on: August 27, 2008, 10:47:32 AM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on August 26, 2008, 05:55:48 AM

HaaN talat heek kaha tumne....bahoot hi purasar tehreereiN likhieN haiN aapne....Merii jjaanibb see iss  dil paziir tehreeriN par daad qubool farmayeiN....Harash [/color]

Harash Ji... bohot bohot shukriya aapne ise pasand farmaya aur humara hausla badhaya  icon_flower



Quote from: Harash Mahajan on August 26, 2008, 05:55:48 AM
LeherroN maiN doobtii ek dardeelii awaaaw
Jaise doob raha ho samanDer maiN koi saaz

Woh konpleiN jo phootne se pehle toot gaieN
KahaN gaya unkii zindagii ka  woh aagaaz

Ab sab taraf Khouff ke andhere hain raahi
Raho tum KhizaaN ki zind maiN ya pehn lo taaz


Harash[/b][/color]

Bohot khoob..bohot khoobsurat peshkash hai Harash Ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #37 on: August 27, 2008, 10:48:39 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on August 26, 2008, 06:00:33 AM
Bahut khoobsurat.. Applause
Aasaan shabd, alag andaaz aur gehra arth... Bahut pyaara likha hai Celmira..   Thumbs UP


Thanks so much Mahiya for appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #38 on: August 27, 2008, 10:49:56 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on August 26, 2008, 11:22:19 AM
bahut hi accha likha hai talat ji aapne
itne aasaan lafzon mein itne gehre jazbaat hain ki iske aage kuch likha hi nahin ja sakta
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aapke likhi hui dono shayari lajawab hain..

Thank so much Diya aapne ita pasand kiya  icon_flower
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«Reply #39 on: August 27, 2008, 10:52:24 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 26, 2008, 12:03:06 PM
Celmira ji / Mahiya ji / Harsh Mahajan ji/ Sayyid ji wa adbee dosto!

'Zehn ko chain miley, aisee gazalgoyee huyee!
 Jaag uthney ko ho jaisey nigaah soyee huyee!!'

Bohot bohot shukriya hauslaafzai ka Abd JI...its a pleasure to have your comments Usual Smile

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 26, 2008, 12:03:06 PM

 Meyree khaasee puraanee gazal key do sheir yoon hai: mulaahizaa famaayen!

 'Hai khizaan: khaar hain gulaab sabhee;
  Tahaniyoun mein, magar, haraa kyaa hai?
  Tum naheen ho, to, jahannum hai sab!
  Zeest mein, ab,'abd', dharaa kyaa hai?'
 
                          - abd bundeli

Bohot hi Khoob kaha hai Abd Ji...wonderful  Applause
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«Reply #40 on: August 27, 2008, 10:53:29 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on August 26, 2008, 02:01:30 PM
Celmira,
Bahut hi kamaal ke alfaaz hain, har lafz se chhalakti hai umeed ki aas to kahin maayusi ke dhalte rang.
Khoob dil ko bhaya. -

SN**

Bohot bohot shukriya S. Naami, aapne ise pasand farmaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: August 27, 2008, 01:55:18 PM »
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Celmira ji,
I'm happy that your lovely 'nazm' motivated me to write from with-in me, rather, right from the core of my heart!
'I'm happy! Really happy!! My dear friend!
 Let's enjoy this sweet kinship, till our end!!'
                                - G.R. Prakash / abd bundeli
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«Reply #42 on: August 27, 2008, 06:33:59 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 27, 2008, 04:03:35 AM
Sayyid Randeri ji,
Itnaa pyaar-o-dulaar deyngey aap, aur itni meethee baateyn kahaingey, to, mein, shukriyaa addaa karney key liye alfaaz kahaan sey laaoongaa, meyrey pyaarey dost!! Us gazal kaa matlaa mujhey aaj bhi yaad hai,jisey aapki khidmat mein peish kar rahaa hoon:
Aaj, mousam kaa mashwarah kyaa hai?
Zaahidee jaam hai: bharaa kyaa hai?

       Shukraguzaar  - abd bundeli

Bohot khoob he abd ji, aksar puraani ghazal ke chand ash'ar hi zehen mein rehte hein, or kahin likhaa bhi ho to kahaan likhi he ye yaad nahi rehta, mera bhi yahi haal he, umda she'ar he....
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«Reply #43 on: August 29, 2008, 11:36:24 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 27, 2008, 01:55:18 PM
Celmira ji,
I'm happy that your lovely 'nazm' motivated me to write from with-in me, rather, right from the core of my heart!
'I'm happy! Really happy!! My dear friend!
 Let's enjoy this sweet kinship, till our end!!'
                                - G.R. Prakash / abd bundeli

Thanks so much Abd Ji. I feel honoured to have lovely comments from you. Inshallah Yoindia pe saath barqarar rahega.
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«Reply #44 on: August 30, 2008, 12:06:05 AM »
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Lajawaab shayeri Talat..
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