Ek shaam andheri si.....ek nayi subah ki aas.....!!!

by Talat on August 25, 2008, 05:30:27 PM
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«Reply #45 on: August 30, 2008, 12:14:17 AM »
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Shukriya Aryaan Usual Smile
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«Reply #46 on: September 01, 2008, 08:17:13 PM »
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Ab zaraa shukriya se aage badhiye, kuchh phadhakte ash'ar hojaaye... [b-shart-e-sahulat] tongue3
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«Reply #47 on: September 06, 2008, 12:10:57 PM »
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Zaroor, Inshallah
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«Reply #48 on: September 06, 2008, 01:46:45 PM »
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Dosto!
Sayyid Randeri ji wa Celmira ji kee khwaahish-e-khaas key dour mein peish-e-khidmat hai:
'Un kee nigaah-e-nou key roo-b-roo huye hain jo:
 Deykhaa naheen hai un ney kisee doosrey ko, Rab!
 Un kee talaash mein kahaan naheen gaye hain woh?
 Hai waaidaa un kaa, ki, wasl hogaa: magar kab?'
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«Reply #49 on: September 06, 2008, 02:34:21 PM »
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«Reply #50 on: September 06, 2008, 02:48:36 PM »
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Ek Shaam Andheri Si, Yun Sitam Dhaa Gayi,.
Mere Tanhaa Dil Ko Aur Tadpaa Gayi,.

Hum To Bhoole Baithe The Unki Har Baat Ko,.
Jaane Kyun ye Chaanni Unka Ehsaas Dilaa Gayi,.

Khudrat Ki Har Nishaani Hum Par Kyun Hasti Hai,.
Zaaleem Ye Hawaa Bhi Dekho, Kitna Sataa Gayi,.

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«Reply #51 on: September 06, 2008, 03:15:01 PM »
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Jaanasheen ji,
Yeh ishq kyaa karaaye, koyee jaantaa naheen?
Us key bagair, kyaa karoon, dil maantaa naheen?
Koshish to roz kartey hain, ham un ko bhool jaayen;
Par, 'abd'  kisee aur ko pahichaantaa naheen!!
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«Reply #52 on: September 08, 2008, 04:06:24 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Abd Ji,.
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«Reply #53 on: September 08, 2008, 04:09:10 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 06, 2008, 03:15:01 PM
Jaanasheen ji,
Yeh ishq kyaa karaaye, koyee jaantaa naheen?
Us key bagair, kyaa karoon, dil maantaa naheen?
Koshish to roz kartey hain, ham un ko bhool jaayen;
Par, 'abd'  kisee aur ko pahichaantaa naheen!!
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Ek Tum Ho Ke Uske Siwaa Kisi Ko Pehchaante Nahi,.
Ek Hum Hain Ke Khud Ki Pehchaan Dhoond Rahe Hain,.

Mohabbat Karke Tumhe THodi Khushi To Haseel Hui "Dost",.
Hum To Zindagi Ke Kitaab Mein Khushi Ko Dhoond Rahe Hain,.

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«Reply #54 on: September 08, 2008, 08:18:45 PM »
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Khoobsoorat mehfil hai aur har ek shaks ne dil se yahan likha hai. Celmira, tumne bohot acha likha aur isme koi do raye nahi ki tumhare lafzon mein saadki ke saath gehrai hai. Tumhara andaaz wahi hai jo ki tumhari khasiyat hai.
Aur sabse upper wo ahsaas jisme tumne roshni ki lau jalai hai !

~Ricky
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«Reply #55 on: September 08, 2008, 09:10:58 PM »
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Very nice contributions Abd Ji, Azeem...aapne bohot achcha likha hai. Applause
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«Reply #56 on: September 08, 2008, 09:15:01 PM »
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Quote from: Ricky on September 08, 2008, 08:18:45 PM
Celmira, tumne bohot acha likha aur isme koi do raye nahi ki tumhare lafzon mein saadki ke saath gehrai hai. Tumhara andaaz wahi hai jo ki tumhari khasiyat hai.
Aur sabse upper wo ahsaas jisme tumne roshni ki lau jalai hai !

~Ricky

Shukriya Ricky, tumne ye thread padha...pasand aaya, koshish ki thi kuch alag likhne ki, hausla afzaai hui hai.

Aaj bohot din baad forum pe tumhare comments dekh ke achcha laga.
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«Reply #57 on: September 09, 2008, 08:24:34 PM »
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Bohot khoob abd ji azeem bhai yahan achhi khaasi mehfil sajaa rkahi he aap logon ne, zaraa nazar hati nahi ke n jaane kya kya kho diya ham ne, lijiye hazaraat daad hazir he, qubool farmaeN.
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«Reply #58 on: September 09, 2008, 08:35:04 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 06, 2008, 01:46:45 PM
Dosto!
Sayyid Randeri ji wa Celmira ji kee khwaah-e-khaas key dour mein peish-e-khidmat hai:
'Un kee nigaah-e-nou key roo-b-roo huye hain jo:
 Deykhaa naheen hai un ney kisee doosrey ko, Rab!
 Un kee talaash mein kahaan naheen gaye hain woh?
 Hai waaidaa un kaa, ki, wasl hogaa: magar kab?'
                                 - abd bundeli
 

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«Reply #59 on: September 11, 2008, 02:10:15 AM »
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Sayyid Randeri,
Guftagu gair zaroori sahee, par hotee hai:
Woh, ishaaroun sey ho, nazar sey ho, jubaan sey ho!!
Lakh koshish kareyn, ki, ham kareyngey baat naheen;
Baat ho jaatee hai, chaahey woh 'haan' yaa 'na' sey ho!!
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