Ek shaam andheri si.....ek nayi subah ki aas.....!!!

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«Reply #60 on: September 11, 2008, 03:22:45 PM »
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Sabse Pehle to really sorry celmira, pata nahi iss thread par meri nazar kyon nahi gayi..

Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob celmira  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aapne vaakaye mein bahut khoobsurati se ek hi sikhe ke do pehlun par nazar daali..Dukh aur Sukh..mujhe personally aapki likhi dusri poetry behad pasand aayi..bahut hi inspiring aur gehri  poetry likhi hai aapne..
bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #61 on: September 11, 2008, 03:24:58 PM »
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Bahut Khoob randeri saab..bahut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #62 on: September 11, 2008, 03:27:53 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on September 08, 2008, 04:09:10 PM
Ek Tum Ho Ke Uske Siwaa Kisi Ko Pehchaante Nahi,.
Ek Hum Hain Ke Khud Ki Pehchaan Dhoond Rahe Hain,.

Mohabbat Karke Tumhe THodi Khushi To Haseel Hui "Dost",.
Hum To Zindagi Ke Kitaab Mein Khushi Ko Dhoond Rahe Hain,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Quote from: Jaanasheen on September 06, 2008, 02:48:36 PM
Ek Shaam Andheri Si, Yun Sitam Dhaa Gayi,.
Mere Tanhaa Dil Ko Aur Tadpaa Gayi,.

Hum To Bhoole Baithe The Unki Har Baat Ko,.
Jaane Kyun ye Chaanni Unka Ehsaas Dilaa Gayi,.

Khudrat Ki Har Nishaani Hum Par Kyun Hasti Hai,.
Zaaleem Ye Hawaa Bhi Dekho, Kitna Sataa Gayi,.

________________________________-Jaanasheen-



 Applause Applausebahut bahut khoob azeem bro
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«Reply #63 on: September 13, 2008, 02:09:52 PM »
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Shukriya Talat Ji,.
Sayeed Bhaijaan,.
Khwaish Bhai,.

Sayeed Bhai Waise Kahaan Gum Hogaye the Aap,.
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«Reply #64 on: September 13, 2008, 02:19:45 PM »
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Ek Andheri Shaam Meri Zindaagi Mein Aaai Thi,.
Jiske Aaane Se Meri Saari Zindagi Mein Tanhaai Thi,.

Dass Ne Lagi Thi Mujhe Wo Nageen Ki Tarah "Azeem",.
Main Bachta Bhi To Kaise, Uski Jhalak Mere Dil-o-Jigar Me Samaai Thi,.

Saara Shehar Tha Roshan, Shehar Mein Thi Khushiyaan,.
Lekin Kisi Ne Gaur Na Kiya, Ke Kismat Ne Kiske Ghar Aag Lagaai Thi,.

Khud Ke Haathon Loota Tha "Azeem" Doston, Gairon Se Koi Gilaa Nahi,.
Haalat Ye "Azeem" Ki, Mohabbat Ne Hi Banaai Thi,.

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #65 on: September 20, 2008, 06:00:05 AM »
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Shukrriyaa talat....kaisi haiN aap...masroofiat ka kya haal hai..ya waise h hai...Really I miss those days....God bless u always



Quote from: Celmira on August 27, 2008, 10:47:32 AM

Harash Ji... bohot bohot shukriya aapne ise pasand farmaya aur humara hausla badhaya  icon_flower



Bohot khoob..bohot khoobsurat peshkash hai Harash Ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #66 on: September 20, 2008, 03:20:48 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 11, 2008, 03:22:45 PM
Sabse Pehle to really sorry celmira, pata nahi iss thread par meri nazar kyon nahi gayi..

Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob celmira  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aapne vaakaye mein bahut khoobsurati se ek hi sikhe ke do pehlun par nazar daali..Dukh aur Sukh..mujhe personally aapki likhi dusri poetry behad pasand aayi..bahut hi inspiring aur gehri  poetry likhi hai aapne..
bahut ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank You so much Khwaish, aapne ise padha aur saraha....iske matlab ko samjha....bohot bohot shukriya dost Usual Smile
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«Reply #67 on: September 20, 2008, 03:21:15 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on September 13, 2008, 02:19:45 PM
Ek Andheri Shaam Meri Zindaagi Mein Aaai Thi,.
Jiske Aaane Se Meri Saari Zindagi Mein Tanhaai Thi,.

Dass Ne Lagi Thi Mujhe Wo Nageen Ki Tarah "Azeem",.
Main Bachta Bhi To Kaise, Uski Jhalak Mere Dil-o-Jigar Me Samaai Thi,.

Saara Shehar Tha Roshan, Shehar Mein Thi Khushiyaan,.
Lekin Kisi Ne Gaur Na Kiya, Ke Kismat Ne Kiske Ghar Aag Lagaai Thi,.

Khud Ke Haathon Loota Tha "Azeem" Doston, Gairon Se Koi Gilaa Nahi,.
Haalat Ye "Azeem" Ki, Mohabbat Ne Hi Banaai Thi,.

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Bohot Khoob Azeem Applause
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«Reply #68 on: September 20, 2008, 03:22:40 PM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on September 20, 2008, 06:00:05 AM
Shukrriyaa talat....kaisi haiN aap...masroofiat ka kya haal hai..ya waise h hai...Really I miss those days....God bless u always

Harash Ji,

Achcha laga aap ki post padh ke. Masrufiyat ka kya kahen, zindagi ke sath ye bhi badhti ja rahi hai Usual Smile

I also miss writing with you,

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«Reply #69 on: September 21, 2008, 08:26:02 AM »
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Shukriya Talat Ji,.
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«Reply #70 on: September 22, 2008, 06:36:32 PM »
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Thankyou ! Yoindia
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