Faasla....:Shairi - E

daljeet_faqeer

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Faasla ye ishq mein sanam achchha nahin hai,
shaq ki wajah hai ye wahem achchha nahin hai.

Doob jaati hai kashti jab majhi ho beparwah,
jaanbhoojh kar jaana ye karam achchha nahin hai.

Dukh to hota hai bahut dekhkar unke halaat,
dil par karte rehna sitam achchha nahin hai.

Tum talaash lo manzil raasta mil hi jayega,
bhatak rahi hai jawani bharam achchha nahin hai.

Aap humse daaman kyun chhudate ho fizool mein,
kabhie ye dil jaaye seham achchha nahin hai.

Daljeet'faqeer'


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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 09:09:02 AM »

khoob ghazal kahi aap ne...


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Talat

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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 11:01:23 AM »

Bohot Khoob Daljeet Ji


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KOYAL46

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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 12:20:08 PM »

Nice poem Daljeet-ji.... Applause

Etni badhiya poem ko na padhna achchha nahin hai,
Aur padhkar taali nahi bajaana b achchha nahin hai,

Quote from: daljeet_faqeer on May 12, 2010, 07:53:21 AM


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 12:34:20 PM »

sab kuch acha naa ho bhale hi per daljeet ji apki ye nazm bahut achi hai...


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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 01:56:25 PM »

Bahut khoob bahut achha likha hai daljeet ji.


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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 02:04:33 PM »

dil ki kalam se ye sher nikla jo dil ko chhu gaya,
agar tareef naho ish ghazal ki to achha nahi hai..

bahut khoob... daljeet sahab..... Usual Smile


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Faasla....

«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2010, 05:34:05 AM »

Bahut khoob Daljeet Ji


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