fakeeri .............A.B

by adil bechain on January 29, 2013, 03:18:45 PM
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                              kuch  to  dard  use  rahaa  hota...,
                              phir main zakhmo.n se kahaa hota...,

                              rahee.n khamosh aankein bhi uski...,
                              qatra-e-ashq   hi   bahaa   hota...,

                              samajhna mohabbat ko mushkil nahin...,
                              kaash  koi  dil  mein  basaa  hota...,

                              rung-e-hina  bhi ta'ab nahin laati...,
                              main  jo  patthar  pe  ghisaa hota...,

                              kashmakash  bichadne ka na puchiye...,
                              pal  wo  milan ka kaash rukaa hota...,

                              fakeeri mujhe bhi mil jaati bechain...,
                              gar zahido.n ne mujhe  sunaa hota...,

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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2013, 03:21:41 PM »
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                              kuch  to  dard  use  rahaa  hota...,
                              phir main zakhmo.n se kahaa hota...,

                              rahee.n khamosh aankein bhi uski...,
                              qatra-e-ashq   hi   bahaa   hota...,

                              samajhna mohabbat ko mushkil nahin...,
                              kaash  koi  dil  mein  rahaa  hota...,

                              rung-e-hina  bhi ta'ab nahin laati...,
                              main  jo  patthar  pe  ghisaa hota...,

                              kashmakash  bichadne ka na puchiye...,
                              pal  wo  milan ka kaash rukaa hota...,

                              fakeeri mujhe bhi mil jaati bechain...,
                              gar zahido.n ne mujhe  sunaa hota...,




Bahut Bahut Khooob Adil jee..

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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 03:25:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut khoob Adil ji.....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 03:29:37 PM »
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bahut badhiya adil bhai

behatreen ghazal. Applause
 rahee.n khamosh aankein bhi uski...,                               qatra-e-ashq   hi   bahaa   hota...,
samajhna mohabbat ko mushkil nahin...,                               kaash  koi  dil  mein  rahaa  hota..., Applause Applause

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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 03:34:35 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wha ji wha
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 05:09:53 PM »
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bahut khub, adil bechain saheb. merimubarakbad qubul kije.
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 05:38:49 PM »
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bahot khoob Adil bhai
aapki lekhni ka to wese bhi mai kayal hoon.
dili daad kubul karen.
khus rahe.
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apne hothon ki hasi dhoondta hoon
chahnewale ki aankhon me kuch namee dhoondta hoon

begairat to mai bhi raha fir kyun
ussi me kuch kamee dhundta hun

de de chahe mujhe bad-duayen lekin
tujhme hi apne jivan ki sar-jamee dhundta hun

aaina ab na dekhta shkl duhai deti he
kuch iss qadar mai usme tmhari shakl dhudta hun

na-umeedee ki parchayee basi inn aankhon me AB
ke apni sakshiyat ka ik hmnashee dhundta hu
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2013, 05:42:44 PM »
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                              kuch  to  dard  use  rahaa  hota...,
                              phir main zakhmo.n se kahaa hota...,

                              rahee.n khamosh aankein bhi uski...,
                              qatra-e-ashq   hi   bahaa   hota...,

                              samajhna mohabbat ko mushkil nahin...,
                              kaash  koi  dil  mein  basaa  hota...,

                              rung-e-hina  bhi ta'ab nahin laati...,
                              main  jo  patthar  pe  ghisaa hota...,

                              kashmakash  bichadne ka na puchiye...,
                              pal  wo  milan ka kaash rukaa hota...,

                              fakeeri mujhe bhi mil jaati bechain...,
                              gar zahido.n ne mujhe  sunaa hota...,


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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2013, 05:44:03 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne waaH behad hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi
hai janab.. aik aik ashaar par dil ki gehrai se hazaaroN daad O mubbarakbad
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Kia kahne janaab, behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... is
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Aise hi likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
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Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 05:49:34 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2013, 05:51:33 AM »
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lajawab ji lajawab
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2013, 06:05:38 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2013, 06:25:01 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Adil jee bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2013, 06:40:47 AM »
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                              kuch  to  dard  use  rahaa  hota...,
                              phir main zakhmo.n se kahaa hota...,

                              rahee.n khamosh aankein bhi uski...,
                              qatra-e-ashq   hi   bahaa   hota...,

                              samajhna mohabbat ko mushkil nahin...,
                              kaash  koi  dil  mein  basaa  hota...,

                              rung-e-hina  bhi ta'ab nahin laati...,
                              main  jo  patthar  pe  ghisaa hota...,

                              kashmakash  bichadne ka na puchiye...,
                              pal  wo  milan ka kaash rukaa hota...,

                              fakeeri mujhe bhi mil jaati bechain...,
                              gar zahido.n ne mujhe  sunaa hota...,



 kashmakash  bichadne ka na puchiye...,
 pal  wo  milan ka kaash rukaa hota...,

lajawaab ,A,B sahab...
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«Reply #14 on: January 30, 2013, 09:38:01 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOOB , ADIL SAHEB.
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