FARMAAN (3- Liner)... "MohaN"

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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai

Surindar. N           "MohaN"
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2019, 05:03:02 PM »
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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai...

Surindar. N           "MohaN"

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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2019, 08:53:28 PM »
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Sir, mazirat ke saath kah raha hoon - 2 line ka sher, 4 line ka qhata ya rubai - aur sher ke 1 line ko misra kahte suna hai...
Ye 3 lines kuch confuse karti hain  icon_scratch
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2019, 07:35:44 PM »
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Sir, mazirat ke saath kah raha hoon - 2 line ka sher, 4 line ka qhata ya rubai - aur sher ke 1 line ko misra kahte suna hai...
Ye 3 lines kuch confuse karti hain  icon_scratch
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2019, 06:06:24 PM »
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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai

Surindar. N           "MohaN"

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FARMAAN

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein buree baat hai
To kyaa mujhe jeene kaa bhi bhi haq nahin
Mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai

Unkaa farmaan hai nafratein bahut buree baat hai
Jee par mohabbat ne to tarhpaayaa din-o-raat hai

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