Gaharaa Samandar .... Ram Saraswat

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«Reply #15 on: September 06, 2012, 08:39:25 PM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoob, bahot achcha ;likha hai aapne
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«Reply #16 on: September 07, 2012, 12:36:17 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #17 on: September 07, 2012, 03:54:22 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder saraswat jee dheron daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #18 on: September 07, 2012, 07:12:11 AM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoob, bahot achcha ;likha hai aapne
Bahut bahut shukyiyaa
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«Reply #19 on: September 07, 2012, 07:14:20 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob
Bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #20 on: September 07, 2012, 07:16:05 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder saraswat jee dheron daad qubool farmaayen
Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa Dr. Saini
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«Reply #21 on: September 08, 2012, 08:36:55 AM »
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waaahhh !! Ram ji .... is ba-kamaal, la-jawaab, khoobsurat qalaam par hazaron lakhon daad aur shubhkaamnaaein. khayaal, eehsaas aur andaaz e bayaan to had se zyaadaa khoobsurat hai hi, saath hi jo zabaan ka itna meetha prayog kiya hai wo dekhte aur nihaarte hi banta hai !!!
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«Reply #22 on: September 08, 2012, 05:52:55 PM »
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waaahhh !! Ram ji .... is ba-kamaal, la-jawaab, khoobsurat qalaam par hazaron lakhon daad aur shubhkaamnaaein. khayaal, eehsaas aur andaaz e bayaan to had se zyaadaa khoobsurat hai hi, saath hi jo zabaan ka itna meetha prayog kiya hai wo dekhte aur nihaarte hi banta hai !!!
Bahut bahut Shukriyaa, Bol pashanda aaye , utsaahit kiyaa . bahut bahut dhanyaabaad apka bhai Zarraaji. 
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«Reply #23 on: September 11, 2012, 07:07:38 PM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on September 06, 2012, 02:35:12 PM
Koi  bhi  zindagi kaisi bhi ho  bay-gham  nahi  hoti,
              nahi hoti  hey  baichaini kabhi bhi kam  nahi  hoti.
kabhi jo aankh aansoo ka badaa gaharaa samandar thii,
              kisi bhi baat par  ab tau zaraa  bhi  nam  nahi hoti.
sochtaa  hoon zahaan  ka rang kaishaa aur kyaa hotaa,
              teri surat meri aankhaun mein gar har dam nahi  hoti.
nahi hotaa kabhi kuchh bhi papeehey key tarasney sey,
              kabhi  barsaat bhi ziyaadaa  bina mousam  nahi  hoti.
zakhm gar hey jigar mein tiis ka hona bhi lazim  hey,
              zakhm per malaney  waali cheez  har marham nahi hoti.
koi samajhey na samajhey baat hey ye tau alag  lekin,
              yoon kahaney ko ishaarey ki zabaan bhi kam nahi hoti.
terey dil ki zabaan ko ab samajhnaa 'Ram' mushkil hey,
              jahaan  per  dil teraa qaayam zabaan qayam nahi hoti. 



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«Reply #24 on: September 12, 2012, 04:06:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa
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«Reply #25 on: September 12, 2012, 05:18:24 PM »
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saraswat ji bahut mkhoob


nahi hotaa kabhi kuchh bhi papeehey key tarasney sey,
kabhi  barsaat bhi ziyaadaa  bina mousam  nahi  hoti.  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Magar aaj ke haalat dkeh kar lagta hai
Mausam ke mutabik kuchh bhi nahin hota
Na mausam hi wo raha, na Insaan vaisa hai
Kitna bhi chahen dono pe aitbaar nahin hota

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«Reply #26 on: September 13, 2012, 10:59:52 AM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on September 12, 2012, 05:18:24 PM
saraswat ji bahut mkhoob


nahi hotaa kabhi kuchh bhi papeehey key tarasney sey,
kabhi  barsaat bhi ziyaadaa  bina mousam  nahi  hoti.  Applause Applause Applause Applause


Magar aaj ke haalat dkeh kar lagta hai
Mausam ke mutabik kuchh bhi nahin hota
Na mausam hi wo raha, na Insaan vaisa hai
Kitna bhi chahen dono pe aitbaar nahin hota

bansi

Bahut bahut shukyiaa Banshiji, sahi kahaa aapney, sab kuch bay aitbaari ho gayaa hai. Mausam khud wo mausam ( hamaari soch, karani, kathani) nahi hay ab . Aur fir barsaat (natiijaa)bhi vaisaa hi aarahaa hai.  
    
 
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