Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!:Shairi - E

abdbundeli

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(Yah shaayad aik gazal kee shuruaat hai; par, na jaaney kyon in teen asha'ar key ba'ad hi qalam ruk gayee hai!)

Ye rah-e-zeest hai, miltey hain kayee anjaaney!
Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

Log jo ishq key baagoun mein qadam rakhtey hain:
Bagtatan saamney paatey hain khuley weeraaney!

Zouq-o-gam saath-saath bhee nazar mein aatey hain,
Shadeed kyun hai ye muaamlah, khudaa jaaney?

- abd bundeli


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 12:47:06 PM »

BAhut Khub Abd Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 12:54:34 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 24, 2011, 12:47:06 PM

BAhut Khub Abd Ji

Shukriyah Rishi ji!

- abd bundeli


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Matrix Guy

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 01:03:23 PM »

ABD ji jitna bhi likha he wo bada katil likha he......

agey aur kya bacha....bahot khub sahab .....hajaro daad apke is kalaam per......


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abdbundeli

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 02:04:16 PM »

Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 24, 2011, 01:03:23 PM

ABD ji jitna bhi likha he wo bada katil likha he......

agey aur kya bacha....bahot khub sahab .....hajaro daad apke is kalaam per......

Shukriyah 'Matrix Guy' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

- abd bundeli


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nirala

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 02:13:32 PM »

Bundeli sirji--aapki kalam isslie ruk gai kynki--iske aage kuch bacha hi nhi tha likhne ko.
ek sampurn ghazal likha apne--
jesa ki Matrix yara ne kaha bada qatil likha he--bilkul shi kaha.
apki yhi to khasiyat he ek line b complete hota he apka:)
behad umda or kamal ka likha he aapne:
apki lekhni ka b koi jawab nhi Sirji.
dad k lie shabd nahi hote mere pas. just hats off to u
Atlaaf Raja ki ek sher yad ai aapk ise parhne ke baad--
"
tere ishq me is qadar deewane hue
ab to pechane nhi jaaate pehchane hue!
"


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 02:48:12 PM »

bht khoob abd ji....


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abdbundeli

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 02:57:02 PM »

Quote from: nirala on February 24, 2011, 02:13:32 PM

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nirala ji!

Aik dariyaa hun, magar, dhaar to kyaa, aab nahin!
Aap kahtey hain, 'abd' kaa koyi jawaab nahin!!

Bahut hi pyaaraa sher share kiyaa hai aapney! Shukriyah!

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 02:58:32 PM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 24, 2011, 02:48:12 PM

bht khoob abd ji....

Shukriyah 'Manzil' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

- abd bundeli


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