Gareebi Maar Deti Hai "Khwahish"

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Bhook Bahut Badi Cheez Hai.....

Upar Wala kabhi kisi ko Do Roti Ke Liye  Mohtaaj Naa kare
Meri Dua Hai Uss Rab se ke Woh Sab ko Izzat Ki Roti De ...!!


Gareebo'n ki ye Basti hai Kahan se shokhiyan lau'n...??
Yaha'n Bachche To Rehte Hain Mager Bachpana Nahi Rahta...!!


          ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se

Raat Ke Pichle Pehar Ek Awaaz Si Aati Rahi Mujhe..
Koi Ro-Rokar Puch Raha Tha Kuch  Apne Mujeeb Se

Mitti Ke MakaaN Ko Pani Se Bachata Raha Umar Bhar
Udas Dar-O-Deewar Par ShakaleN Bhi Utri Thi Ajeeb Se

Matlab-Parasti Ki Duniya MeN Kaun Dost,Kaun Dushman
Hum Sab se Zyada Darte Hai Aaj  Apne Hi Habeeb se

Ghar Par chaahe Do Niwaale Bhi Naa Ho Khaane Ke Liye
Mehman-Nawazi MeN Chaai Laai Jaati Hai Bade Tehzeeb Se

Zindagi Apni Kitni Pareshaan Hai Yeh Khabar Tab Hui
Koi Marr Raha Tha Aur Hum Dawa Na Laa Sake Tabeeb Se

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Gareebi Se Badi Koi Saza Nahi..
Gareebi Maar Deti Hai Chahe Hum Bach Jaye Apne Raqeeb Se



            tearyeyed~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~ tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2013, 10:54:33 PM »
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uffffffffffff khwaishji. aapki is ghazal par kya comment karoon. kitna dard hai is mein. har ek alfaaz dard se bhara hua hai. sachmuch garibi aisa kismat ka khel hai. kisi ki jholi mein doodh toh kisi ke jholi mein sirf paani hi naseeb hota hai.agar hum ek choti si koshish bhar kar le toh kisi ke honton par muskaan laa sakte hai. hats off to you bahut khoob tarike se aap ne garibi ko darshaya hai. dil se mubarakbad qubool kare.
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2013, 11:37:29 PM »
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Sab ko ijjat se roti.. Bahut khoob khwaish jee

Matla hi poori ki poori ghazal hai
Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2013, 12:57:06 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 25, 2013, 10:18:36 PM
Bhook Bahut Badi Cheez Hai.....

Upar Wala kabhi kisi ko Do Roti Ke Liye  Mohtaaj Naa kare
Meri Dua Hai Uss Rab se ke Woh Sab ko Izzat Ki Roti De ...!!


Gareebo'n ki ye Basti hai Kahan se shokhiyan lau'n...??
Yaha'n Bachche To Rehte Hain Mager Bachpana Nahi Rahta...!!


          ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se

Raat Ke Pichle Pehar Ek Awaaz Si Aati Rahi Mujhe..
Koi Ro-Rokar Puch Raha Tha Kuch  Apne Mujeeb Se

Mitti Ke MakaaN Ko Pani Se Bachata Raha Umar Bhar
Udas Dar-O-Deewar Par ShakaleN Bhi Utri Thi Ajeeb Se

Matlab-Parasti Ki Duniya MeN Kaun Dost,Kaun Dushman
Hum Sab se Zyada Darte Hai Aaj  Apne Hi Habeeb se

Ghar Par chaahe Do Niwaale Bhi Naa Ho Khaane Ke Liye
Mehman-Nawazi MeN Chaai Laai Jaati Hai Bade Tehzeeb Se

Zindagi Apni Kitni Pareshaan Hai Yeh Khabar Tab Hui
Koi Marr Raha Tha Aur Hum Dawa Na Laa Sake Tabeeb Se

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Gareebi Se Badi Koi Saza Nahi..
Gareebi Maar Deti Hai Chahe Hum Bach Jaye Apne Raqeeb Se



            tearyeyed~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~ tearyeyed
waa bohat khoob hamesha naye dil choo lene wale khyalaat aapke kalaam kaa khaasa hain,..........bohat cdaad khwaish ji,.......
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2013, 01:51:41 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 25, 2013, 10:18:36 PM
Bhook Bahut Badi Cheez Hai.....

Upar Wala kabhi kisi ko Do Roti Ke Liye  Mohtaaj Naa kare
Meri Dua Hai Uss Rab se ke Woh Sab ko Izzat Ki Roti De ...!!


Gareebo'n ki ye Basti hai Kahan se shokhiyan lau'n...??
Yaha'n Bachche To Rehte Hain Mager Bachpana Nahi Rahta...!!


          ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se

Raat Ke Pichle Pehar Ek Awaaz Si Aati Rahi Mujhe..
Koi Ro-Rokar Puch Raha Tha Kuch  Apne Mujeeb Se

Mitti Ke MakaaN Ko Pani Se Bachata Raha Umar Bhar
Udas Dar-O-Deewar Par ShakaleN Bhi Utri Thi Ajeeb Se

Matlab-Parasti Ki Duniya MeN Kaun Dost,Kaun Dushman
Hum Sab se Zyada Darte Hai Aaj  Apne Hi Habeeb se

Ghar Par chaahe Do Niwaale Bhi Naa Ho Khaane Ke Liye
Mehman-Nawazi MeN Chaai Laai Jaati Hai Bade Tehzeeb Se

Zindagi Apni Kitni Pareshaan Hai Yeh Khabar Tab Hui
Koi Marr Raha Tha Aur Hum Dawa Na Laa Sake Tabeeb Se

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Gareebi Se Badi Koi Saza Nahi..
Gareebi Maar Deti Hai Chahe Hum Bach Jaye Apne Raqeeb Se



            tearyeyed~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~ tearyeyed

bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2013, 02:05:10 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 25, 2013, 10:18:36 PM
Bhook Bahut Badi Cheez Hai.....

Upar Wala kabhi kisi ko Do Roti Ke Liye  Mohtaaj Naa kare
Meri Dua Hai Uss Rab se ke Woh Sab ko Izzat Ki Roti De ...!!


Gareebo'n ki ye Basti hai Kahan se shokhiyan lau'n...??
Yaha'n Bachche To Rehte Hain Mager Bachpana Nahi Rahta...!!


          ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se

Raat Ke Pichle Pehar Ek Awaaz Si Aati Rahi Mujhe..
Koi Ro-Rokar Puch Raha Tha Kuch  Apne Mujeeb Se

Mitti Ke MakaaN Ko Pani Se Bachata Raha Umar Bhar
Udas Dar-O-Deewar Par ShakaleN Bhi Utri Thi Ajeeb Se

Matlab-Parasti Ki Duniya MeN Kaun Dost,Kaun Dushman
Hum Sab se Zyada Darte Hai Aaj  Apne Hi Habeeb se

Ghar Par chaahe Do Niwaale Bhi Naa Ho Khaane Ke Liye
Mehman-Nawazi MeN Chaai Laai Jaati Hai Bade Tehzeeb Se

Zindagi Apni Kitni Pareshaan Hai Yeh Khabar Tab Hui
Koi Marr Raha Tha Aur Hum Dawa Na Laa Sake Tabeeb Se

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Gareebi Se Badi Koi Saza Nahi..
Gareebi Maar Deti Hai Chahe Hum Bach Jaye Apne Raqeeb Se



            tearyeyed~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~ tearyeyed

Garibi pe likhi hui ye gazal garibo.N ki peeda se rubaroo karati hai..bahut umda tareeke se express kiya hai khwahish jee..daad qubool kare..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2013, 02:55:23 AM »
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Bohat Bohat Khub Khwaish Jee!!! Bohat hi emotional ghazal hai..Dil ko chu gayi!! Very Nice!!



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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2013, 12:12:54 PM »
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Bahut achhi peshkash hai, Khwahish ji . Bahut  emotional  aur  ghareebi
ka dard samete hue. Waqai ghareebi se badi koi saza nahi.Aap ne ghareebi
ke mukhtalif pahluon , mukhtalif manifestations ko jis tarah bayaan kiya
hai wo qabil e tareef hai.Aap ka qalam aksar samaaj ki buraiyon aur doosre
ke dard ke liye uthhta hai , aur yahi eik sachhe shayer ki pahchaan hai .
Aap ko is takhleeq par meri taraf se dheron daad aur mubarakbad.
                                                   Duago ,HASAN
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2013, 05:19:31 PM »
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Bahaut sensitive aur insightful ghazal lagi apki Khwahish ji .... Dheron daad !!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2013, 05:42:00 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 25, 2013, 10:18:36 PM
Bhook Bahut Badi Cheez Hai.....

Upar Wala kabhi kisi ko Do Roti Ke Liye  Mohtaaj Naa kare
Meri Dua Hai Uss Rab se ke Woh Sab ko Izzat Ki Roti De ...!!


Gareebo'n ki ye Basti hai Kahan se shokhiyan lau'n...??
Yaha'n Bachche To Rehte Hain Mager Bachpana Nahi Rahta...!!


          ~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Haal-e-Zindagi Na Pucho Kabhi Kisi Bhi Gareeb Se
Insaano Se Gila Nahi,Usse Gila Hai Apne Naseeb Se

Raat Ke Pichle Pehar Ek Awaaz Si Aati Rahi Mujhe..
Koi Ro-Rokar Puch Raha Tha Kuch  Apne Mujeeb Se

Mitti Ke MakaaN Ko Pani Se Bachata Raha Umar Bhar
Udas Dar-O-Deewar Par ShakaleN Bhi Utri Thi Ajeeb Se

Matlab-Parasti Ki Duniya MeN Kaun Dost,Kaun Dushman
Hum Sab se Zyada Darte Hai Aaj  Apne Hi Habeeb se

Ghar Par chaahe Do Niwaale Bhi Naa Ho Khaane Ke Liye
Mehman-Nawazi MeN Chaai Laai Jaati Hai Bade Tehzeeb Se

Zindagi Apni Kitni Pareshaan Hai Yeh Khabar Tab Hui
Koi Marr Raha Tha Aur Hum Dawa Na Laa Sake Tabeeb Se

"Khwahish" Zindagi MeN Gareebi Se Badi Koi Saza Nahi..
Gareebi Maar Deti Hai Chahe Hum Bach Jaye Apne Raqeeb Se



            tearyeyed~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~ tearyeyed

nice,sir
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2013, 08:40:01 PM »
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hats off, saaheb saamaajik vishayoN pe likhna bahut hi mushkil hota hai, aap har baar mujhe chauNka dete haiN, itni behtareen tasveer bana ke.... meri taraf se dili daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...
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«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2013, 01:34:23 PM »
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Simply Superb... Hats off
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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2013, 09:42:50 PM »
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Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
uffffffffffff khwaishji. aapki is ghazal par kya comment karoon. kitna dard hai is mein. har ek alfaaz dard se bhara hua hai. sachmuch garibi aisa kismat ka khel hai. kisi ki jholi mein doodh toh kisi ke jholi mein sirf paani hi naseeb hota hai.agar hum ek choti si koshish bhar kar le toh kisi ke honton par muskaan laa sakte hai. hats off to you bahut khoob tarike se aap ne garibi ko darshaya hai. dil se mubarakbad qubool kare.


Thanks a Million Aqsh Ji Meri Iss Koshish Ko Iss Kadar Sarhaane Ke Liye...Ji Bilkul Sach..Yehi Jeene Ka Sahee Dang Hai..

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Khwaish bhaijan isliye to main aapka fan hoon..... Log gazal na pasand karein geet aur nazm na samjh payein par apne halat aur apni badnaseebi ko sun samjh sakte hai aur aapki aisi rachna sidhi isi trh ka asar rakhti hai...aapke shbd sidhe dil par chot krte hai....aapko salam hai aur sat sat naman.... Aapki isi trh ki samaj zindgi rishton se judi rachna ke kayal hai......hats of u
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waah!bahut sahi aur umda likha hai janaab,dheron daad!
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