GAZAL........................................................raji

by Rajigujral on May 23, 2015, 05:49:37 AM
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Gul har rang ka chaman mein hai, bas gulab hi nahi,
Saki ke pas sab kuchh hai, bas sharab hi nahi.

Justju -e- sakun mein, guzari hai sari umar,
Baichaniyan itani mili, hisab hi nahi.

Zindagi kya hai poochha to, humko pata chala,
Jawab jis mein ho , wo kitab hi nahi,

Dikha nahi koi aur, tujhe dekhane ke baad,
Ab to jismein tu na ho, wo khawab hi nahi.

Ho chuki thi der, jab payala mila 'raji',
Ab dekh kar kise piyen, mahtab hi nahi.

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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 05:53:29 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2015, 06:29:25 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 07:49:46 AM »
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Gul har rang ka chaman mein hai, bas gulab hi nahi,
Saki ke pas sab kuchh hai, bas sharab hi nahi.

Justju -e- sakun mein, guzari hai sari umar,
Baichaniyan itani mili, hisab hi nahi.

Zindagi kya hai poochha to, humko pata chala,
Jawab jis mein ho , wo kitab hi nahi,

Dikha nahi koi aur, tujhe dekhane ke baad,
Ab to jismein tu na ho, wo khawab hi nahi.

Ho chuki thi der, jab payala mila 'raji',
Ab dekh kar kise piyen, mahtab hi nahi.




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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2015, 09:01:13 AM »
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Gul har rang ka chaman mein hai, bas gulab hi nahi,
Saki ke pas sab kuchh hai, bas sharab hi nahi.

Justju -e- sakun mein, guzari hai sari umar,
Baichaniyan itani mili, hisab hi nahi.

Zindagi kya hai poochha to, humko pata chala,
Jawab jis mein ho , wo kitab hi nahi,

Dikha nahi koi aur, tujhe dekhane ke baad,
Ab to jismein tu na ho, wo khawab hi nahi.

Ho chuki thi der, jab payala mila 'raji',
Ab dekh kar kise piyen, mahtab hi nahi.


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waah waah waah waah Raji ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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kyaa baat hai Raji Jee kamaal kee Ghazal likhee hai aapne, dheron daad.
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Gul har rang ka chaman mein hai, bas gulab hi nahi,
Saki ke pas sab kuchh hai, bas sharab hi nahi.

Justju -e- sakun mein, guzari hai sari umar,
Baichaniyan itani mili, hisab hi nahi.

Zindagi kya hai poochha to, humko pata chala,
Jawab jis mein ho , wo kitab hi nahi,

Dikha nahi koi aur, tujhe dekhane ke baad,
Ab to jismein tu na ho, wo khawab hi nahi.

Ho chuki thi der, jab payala mila 'raji',
Ab dekh kar kise piyen, mahtab hi nahi.




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