GHAM CPUPAAYE JAA ( Rubaiyan )

by surindarn on January 31, 2014, 12:20:43 AM
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Hansi ki aarh mein Gham chupaaye jaa...
Yun surat pe RangeeniyaN bichaaye jaa,
Dost pareshaN Naa hooN dekh teri mausibat,
Dushman bhi Naa HanseN dekh teri mausibat!

Aanhen aakhir kyuN bharuN main...
Aur yeh Naale kyun KaruN mein,
Maut ka ik Din aaNa hai laazim,
Phir yeh ro ro kyuN maruN main!

Zumaane ka kaam hai GhamoN ko denaa...
Meraa kaam hai haNsi mein urah denaa,
Phir jise jo kuchh kehNaa aaye keh jaaye,
Meraa ilaaN hai Chiknaa Garhaa ban rehnaa!

SurindarN.                   "MohanN"
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2014, 02:24:34 AM »
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बेहतरीन,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2014, 02:51:27 AM »
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Thank yun Sagar Sahib.

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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2014, 02:53:08 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on January 31, 2014, 02:51:27 AM
Thank yun Sagar Sahib.

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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2014, 04:50:34 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on January 31, 2014, 12:20:43 AM
Hansi ki aarh mein Gham chupaaye jaa...
Yun surat pe RangeeniyaN bichaaye jaa,
Dost pareshaN Naa hooN dekh teri mausibat,
Dushman bhi Naa HanseN dekh teri mausibat!

Aanhen aakhir kyuN bharuN main...
Aur yeh Naale kyun KaruN mein,
Maut ka ik Din aaNa hai laazim,
Phir yeh ro ro kyuN maruN main!

Zumaane ka kaam hai GhamoN ko denaa...
Meraa kaam hai haNsi mein urah denaa,
Phir jise jo kuchh kehNaa aaye keh jaaye,
Meraa ilaaN hai Chiknaa Garhaa ban rehnaa!

SurindarN.                   "MohanN"



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surindran sahab practically its not possible for mankind to follow as you said above. aaj ka insaan react zaroor karta hai aur yehi ladaai ka sabab bhi banta hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2014, 06:06:06 AM »
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Sheba Sahiba Daad ke le liye shukria. Aapne theek kahaa hai mushkil hai magar namumkin nahin hai. It is a matter of training, how well one can react to the situation.

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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2014, 07:06:14 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2014, 07:56:14 AM »
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Thank you Saini Sahib.

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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2014, 03:04:52 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: February 01, 2014, 02:03:31 AM »
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Nandbahu Sahib & Gayatri Sahiba Aap ka Shukria.

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«Reply #11 on: February 01, 2014, 01:12:19 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2014, 12:40:42 AM »
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Thank you, Tauhid Sahib.

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