Ghazal - Zaif

by Zaif on October 24, 2013, 03:59:41 PM
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Chhalakte nahi ab jaam-o-saaghar mere baad..
Kabhi khula na maikhane ka dar mere baad..

Sheeshon se nahi, nafratein mujh se thi unko,
Mere ghar pe na uchhala koi patthar mere baad..

Main lahoo de dekar paalta tha in kheton ko,
Haay ek ek karke sab hue banzar mere baad..

Dil pe khaata hun, kuch to daad de zaalim!
Kispe chalaayega nigah ke khanjar mere baad??

Abhi na jaaengi veerano se ye raunaqein,
Ab bhi jalta hai ik zakhm-e-jigar mere baad..

Dushman bhi mere ghamand pe dang raha 'Zaif',
Jhuka hi nahi mera ye kata sar mere baad..
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 04:06:59 PM »
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waah waah zabardast
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2013, 04:25:23 PM »
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Mast hai jee  icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2013, 04:37:35 PM »
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waah waah waah waah
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bahut bahut khoob, laajawab... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2013, 05:56:32 PM »
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Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Badi hi umdaa aur khoob kalaam se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne...

Sabhi sher behad khoobsurat rahe... Par yeH quoted sher hume behad umdaa lage... Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez....



Quote from: Zaif on October 24, 2013, 03:59:41 PM
Dil pe khaata hun, kuch to daad de zaalim!
Kispe chalaayega nigah ke khanjar mere baad??

Abhi na jaaengi veerano se ye raunaqein,
Ab bhi jalta hai ik zakhm-e-jigar mere baad..

Dushman bhi mere ghamand pe dang raha 'Zaif',
Jhuka hi nahi mera ye kata sar mere baad..
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2013, 08:44:43 PM »
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kya baat hai ji..bahut khoob...bahut badhiya gazal..
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2013, 09:47:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2013, 12:37:20 AM »
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waah waah janaab bahut hi khoob.
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 01:54:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 02:11:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaah zaif ji.. kya baat hai.. bahut khoooooooob likhe ho.. waise bhi aapki poetries ki mai fan ho gayi hoon.. zabardasttt peshkash.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho... khaas yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

Dil pe khaata hun, kuch to daad de zaalim!
Kispe chalaayega nigah ke khanjar mere baad??

Abhi na jaaengi veerano se ye raunaqein,
Ab bhi jalta hai ik zakhm-e-jigar mere baad..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2014, 12:39:15 AM »
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बहुत खूब धे सारी दाद
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2014, 11:02:56 AM »
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शुक्रिया सर !
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शुक्रिया सर !
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