ghoobaar............sheba

by Sheba on March 17, 2013, 04:55:53 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 25, 2013, 02:17:36 AM »
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      hoti rahi lazzat-e-jaam fanaa ahista-ahista.
      ke ab labo.n ko paimaane se pyaar na raha!
wah lajawab likha hai sheba ji...
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«Reply #16 on: April 01, 2013, 02:01:04 AM »
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bahut khoob aakhir ke donoN she'r kaafi pasand aaye aur aakhiri she'r to  kamaal ka raha.

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«Reply #17 on: April 17, 2013, 02:47:36 AM »
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«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2013, 04:10:57 AM »
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Wah Wah!! Bohat Khub!!!

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«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2013, 09:13:05 PM »
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Such me bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai aapne.Mubarak ho aapko.


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«Reply #20 on: May 08, 2013, 09:11:37 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: May 08, 2013, 09:41:38 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: July 18, 2013, 03:50:19 AM »
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kya baat hai sheba ji. bahut hi khoob sabhi ashaar rahe. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho.

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«Reply #23 on: July 19, 2013, 04:44:21 AM »
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lafz-e-aitbaar pe mujhe aitbaar na raha!

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«Reply #24 on: July 19, 2013, 04:54:54 AM »
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                          lafz-e-aitbaar pe mujhe aitbaar na raha!
                          uske aane ka ab intezaar na raha!!


                          khawaab,wasl-e-yaar ka jhootha lage hai.
                          dekhiye ye dil bhi beqaraar na raha!


                         guzar gaya khamosh, toofaan bhi yahaan se.
                          ghoobaar to raha isme, khumaar na raha!



                          hoti rahi lazzat-e-jaam fanaa ahista-ahista.
                          ke ab labo.n ko paimaane se pyaar na raha!


                          hai meri mohabbat mein nasihat bhi shaamil.
                          usne  aashiqi  to  ki per bekaar na raha!
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jeena tere bina mera duswaar hai
mujhe tujse aaj bhi pyaar hai

khud pe bharosha nahi mujhe aaj bhi
tujhpe mager hame pura aitbaar hai

ye to kismat hai kuch acchi meri
tujhsa milta kaha ab yaha yaar hai

naam us dosti mei tera bhi sumaar hai
dosti mei jaata jo sabkuch haar hai
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«Reply #25 on: July 19, 2013, 05:25:24 AM »
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wah maza aa gaya sach poochiye to pehle misre ne hi samaa baandh diya tha... fir se rau se khaali hun main, meri badkismati...  waise is sher pe gaur kijiyega...

 hai meri mohabbat mein nasihat bhi shaamil.
 usne  aashiqi  to  ki per bekaar na raha!

nasihat ka istemaal ahcha hai, par kya qaafiya yahaaN bekaar hi rakha hai aapne ya khaya beqaraar ho... kyunki bekar ka istemaal khula nahin mujh par, zara mehrbaani kar ke is sher ko kholen agar bekaar hi hai to...

aur yuNhi likhti raheN aap, bazm aap jaisoN se hi roshan hai muhtarma...!!
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«Reply #26 on: July 19, 2013, 06:03:37 AM »
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                          lafz-e-aitbaar pe mujhe aitbaar na raha!
                          uske aane ka ab intezaar na raha!!


                          khawaab,wasl-e-yaar ka jhootha lage hai.
                          dekhiye ye dil bhi beqaraar na raha!


                          guzar gaya khamosh, toofaan bhi yahaan se.
                          ghoobaar to raha isme, khumaar na raha!



                          hoti rahi lazzat-e-jaam fanaa ahista-ahista.
                          ke ab labo.n ko paimaane se pyaar na raha!


                          hai meri mohabbat mein nasihat bhi shaamil.
                          usne  aashiqi  to  ki per bekaar na raha!
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                         guzar gaya khamosh, toofaan bhi yahaan se.
                          ghoobaar to raha isme, khumaar na raha!

bahut class sher hai........ kya pech hai.... kya gahraa hai aur kitne saaf..

jaise paani main ulte loTe ko dubo do to uchar aataa hai... lafz main yun maanhi ubhar aayaa hai

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«Reply #27 on: December 29, 2014, 06:20:28 PM »
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bahut khoob , sheba ji.bahut achhi ghazal hai.'Hoti rahi lazzat e jaam fana.........'yeh bahut pyara sher hai.dili mubarakbaad


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